Lily's Payback chapter 2.
Disclaimer: No not me! Not mine, not mine (if you think I've gone crazy, I haven't. If you know Delta Goodrem, I just thought I would use her song 'not me not I' for my disclaimer, weird I know.
THANK YOU ALL REVIEWERS! I WILL ACKNOWLEDGE YOU AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER!
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Sleep.. Hmm, B E A utiful (AN: Bruce Almighty) sleep. Don't you just love that word? It means: rests, peace, quiet, knocking on my bedroom window.
KNOCKING ON MY BEDROOM WINDOW?!?!
I slowly got out of my bedroom,. Although 4 out of 5 voices in my head said go back to sleep, me being my normal obsessive self needed to get the constant tapping noise of my head before I slowly go insane.
Although numerous people (mainly Petunia) have told me that I'm already insane, I have yet seen any of the symptoms.
Potter's owl was at the window! What's with that kid? Doesn't he have anything better to do than annoy me? Apparently not.
I opened the window, dreading what stupid prank and/or letter he had for me. I'm not insane, trust me, I'm paranoid. But that comes naturally to anyone who despises James Potter.
Dear Lily,
You're the flower for me, but why must this be? You don't even respond to my letters? Not that it really matters. Oh why oh why can't you see? That you're the girl for me.
Love the poet who doesn't know it, James.
That's a poem? I've seen better writing from a monkey! No even worse, I've seen better writing from Peter! And he's even dumber than a monkey!
I decided that if I was going to get any peace for the rest of my boring summer (which finishes in two days, but hey, a lot of things can happen in that time) I should write back, and make him not want to respond.
Walking over to my draw, rather swiftly I opened my drawer, which knocked me on the floor.
Mental note: as impossible as it may seem, try to not fall by opening a drawer in Hogwarts.
I took out a letter set I got from Diagon Alley when I was in 1st year. Whilst looking through it to find the kind of letter I wanted, I stumbled upon an old letter, which was never sent.
~*Flashback*~
Lily Evans sat in the Gryffindor common room. After the embarrassing encounter on her first day with Mr. Potter, she came to the conclusion that what he did was an accident.
Sitting with her new Wizard letter set, she decided to write a letter to James.
Dear James,
After a long time thinking about what happened at dinner, I know that it was an accident, and I will gladly accept any apology you give me. It would be great if we became friends! Don't you think?
From your new friend,
Lily Evans.
Lily examined her note, it seemed professional and not desperate. Good. She thought, making a bad impression on her first day was bad, and she wanted to correct that.
The portrait swung open, 4 boys walked in; one was called Sirius Black, he had black hair that went down to his ears. The next was Remus, he had light blue eyes and sandy blonde hair. The third boy looked a little out of place, he was chubby with light blonde hair, his name was (EVIL) Peter. Last but not least was James.
"Hi James!" Lily said, a little over enthusiastically.
He looked at her, trying to match her face with a description, "oh you're the air-head that fell at the dinner table! I never thought I would see someone stupid enough to fall for the old 'put your foot out and trip them' trick."
"I'm not stupid!" she retorted, "or a air-head!"
"Sure you aren't." He replied sourly, like he was king of the world.
"I- I am quite smart actually." Lily bragged, lifting up her chin, "and you Potter are just a meanie."
"So the little kid can talk." James smirked, "you won't get anywhere with your attitude, what's your name again?"
"Lily Evans."
"Lily aye, why did they name a thorn with a name of a flower?"
Lily's face was fuming she made her way up the girls dormitories and yelled, "I hate you!"
~* End of flashback *~
I went over the memory in my mind, what an idiot I was! Thinking that that stupid, irresponsible git would be my friend!
Finally I found what I was looking for, a red letter, I opened it up.
"Hello, this is a howler, please speak your message into the note after the tone. Beep."
"JAMES 'ARSEHOLE' POTTER! LEAVE ME ALONE! I DON'T WANT TO TALK TO YOU AND CERTANLY DON'T WANT TO READ YOUR LAME EXCUSES FOR A POEM! JUST ANNOY ONE OF YOUR PLAY GIRLS INSTEAD!"
I closed the letter and sent it off with James' owl, the owl hesitated a little, obviously James had been getting a lot of howlers before. Finally I managed to tie the letter to the owls leg. And I shooed it out the window.
I looked at my clock in astonishment, it was already 9:30 am.
Putting on a black jacket that I personally made (then James hexed it to turn rainbow, until I went to Pro. McGonagall who forced him to take the spell off) and took out a pair of blue trackies, I was all set for the day.
After eating a rushed breakfast my mom took me to the leaky cauldron after giving me a kiss and a lecture of not to wander off or talk to strangers (honesty, after last night, you wouldn't think that she cared if I was abducted by aliens.) I entered Diagon Alley.
Wow.
I looked on in amazement. They had a muggle shop there! Wohoo!
It was 'Muggle antiques' which was a surprise since half of the Wizards/Witches hated muggles and it looked busy.
I skipped (literately) up the pathway to Gringotts where I kept my very small amount of Wizard money.
I wasn't watching where I was 'skipping' and suddenly tumbled to the ground.
Mental note: Don't skip.
Another mental note: stop making mental notes!
After pulling myself up from the ground I made sure no one saw my fall and pretended nothing happened.
I looked down to see the culprit of my fall and found a twig. I scooped it up. No one gets away with pushing me over! NO ONE! Except James- I mean 'Potter' but that will change.
I scrunched the twig into a million pieces and dropped then to the ground. If it had a face, I swear it was smiling mockingly up at me. So I started desperately jumping on it.
TAKE THAT YOU STICK!
No, me not mental, me normal.
"Err. I think that stick has had enough." Said a voice behind.
"Ali!" I squealed.
We gave each other a big hug.
Ali was of average build, she had light brown hair with gold streaks through it. Her hair was beautiful and contrasted with her sky blue eyes.
She was my best friend.
"So, you've truly gone mental, never thought I'd see the day when 'perfect prefect will loose it."
"it was mocking me!" I defended, even my best friend said I was mental.
"It's a stick Lils! It doesn't 'mock'."
"Now you're mocking me!" Gosh, I'm starting to believe I'm mental, oh well, what can you do about it?
"Settle down Lils, there is something I need to tell you about something. important." Ali's face turned from happy to said, and I knew something was wrong.
"What- what is it 'Lee?"
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AN: thankyou all my kind reviewers thank you. :)
I know my spelling was terrible in the last chapter but I am checking it this chapter, I really apoligise heaps.
Sorry about the lack of humour in this chapter, it will appear in next chapters.
~**AngelInName**~
LimeJuiceTub: I agree with Lily's parents being honest, it just didn't seem to fit in with my story line, I put in her mum being kind and caring, they seem to want Lily to be 'normal' but they are proud of her.
Cynewulf: I'm so sorry about my spelling! I know it was awful! Glad you liked the way I showed Lily's personality,
Misura: Thankyou! I needed this fic to seem a little different! I'm glad how I did it was good! (if that makes sense)
Indy: one word; thanx
Schizophrenic Inner child: your review cheered me up, I'm glad you liked it!
Jenette Black: I love L/J fics aswell (obviously) I was a little scared starting this fic! Thankyou for your review.
Stephanie: I know my spelling really sucked! I hope this chapter has improved (spelling wise).
Riddle-child: glad you thought it was funny!
Silly-Lily: I updated :)
Windowseat Wonderer: I updated kinda fast, but I probably won't be able for another couple of months.
MarkoftheantiherO: Thankyou, I need reviews (gosh that sounds desperate!)
Icegirl-kat: thanx!
Rachel: thankyou!
Tiny gal: glad you like! Next chapter is up! (well this chapter).
Disclaimer: No not me! Not mine, not mine (if you think I've gone crazy, I haven't. If you know Delta Goodrem, I just thought I would use her song 'not me not I' for my disclaimer, weird I know.
THANK YOU ALL REVIEWERS! I WILL ACKNOWLEDGE YOU AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER!
__________________________________________
Sleep.. Hmm, B E A utiful (AN: Bruce Almighty) sleep. Don't you just love that word? It means: rests, peace, quiet, knocking on my bedroom window.
KNOCKING ON MY BEDROOM WINDOW?!?!
I slowly got out of my bedroom,. Although 4 out of 5 voices in my head said go back to sleep, me being my normal obsessive self needed to get the constant tapping noise of my head before I slowly go insane.
Although numerous people (mainly Petunia) have told me that I'm already insane, I have yet seen any of the symptoms.
Potter's owl was at the window! What's with that kid? Doesn't he have anything better to do than annoy me? Apparently not.
I opened the window, dreading what stupid prank and/or letter he had for me. I'm not insane, trust me, I'm paranoid. But that comes naturally to anyone who despises James Potter.
Dear Lily,
You're the flower for me, but why must this be? You don't even respond to my letters? Not that it really matters. Oh why oh why can't you see? That you're the girl for me.
Love the poet who doesn't know it, James.
That's a poem? I've seen better writing from a monkey! No even worse, I've seen better writing from Peter! And he's even dumber than a monkey!
I decided that if I was going to get any peace for the rest of my boring summer (which finishes in two days, but hey, a lot of things can happen in that time) I should write back, and make him not want to respond.
Walking over to my draw, rather swiftly I opened my drawer, which knocked me on the floor.
Mental note: as impossible as it may seem, try to not fall by opening a drawer in Hogwarts.
I took out a letter set I got from Diagon Alley when I was in 1st year. Whilst looking through it to find the kind of letter I wanted, I stumbled upon an old letter, which was never sent.
~*Flashback*~
Lily Evans sat in the Gryffindor common room. After the embarrassing encounter on her first day with Mr. Potter, she came to the conclusion that what he did was an accident.
Sitting with her new Wizard letter set, she decided to write a letter to James.
Dear James,
After a long time thinking about what happened at dinner, I know that it was an accident, and I will gladly accept any apology you give me. It would be great if we became friends! Don't you think?
From your new friend,
Lily Evans.
Lily examined her note, it seemed professional and not desperate. Good. She thought, making a bad impression on her first day was bad, and she wanted to correct that.
The portrait swung open, 4 boys walked in; one was called Sirius Black, he had black hair that went down to his ears. The next was Remus, he had light blue eyes and sandy blonde hair. The third boy looked a little out of place, he was chubby with light blonde hair, his name was (EVIL) Peter. Last but not least was James.
"Hi James!" Lily said, a little over enthusiastically.
He looked at her, trying to match her face with a description, "oh you're the air-head that fell at the dinner table! I never thought I would see someone stupid enough to fall for the old 'put your foot out and trip them' trick."
"I'm not stupid!" she retorted, "or a air-head!"
"Sure you aren't." He replied sourly, like he was king of the world.
"I- I am quite smart actually." Lily bragged, lifting up her chin, "and you Potter are just a meanie."
"So the little kid can talk." James smirked, "you won't get anywhere with your attitude, what's your name again?"
"Lily Evans."
"Lily aye, why did they name a thorn with a name of a flower?"
Lily's face was fuming she made her way up the girls dormitories and yelled, "I hate you!"
~* End of flashback *~
I went over the memory in my mind, what an idiot I was! Thinking that that stupid, irresponsible git would be my friend!
Finally I found what I was looking for, a red letter, I opened it up.
"Hello, this is a howler, please speak your message into the note after the tone. Beep."
"JAMES 'ARSEHOLE' POTTER! LEAVE ME ALONE! I DON'T WANT TO TALK TO YOU AND CERTANLY DON'T WANT TO READ YOUR LAME EXCUSES FOR A POEM! JUST ANNOY ONE OF YOUR PLAY GIRLS INSTEAD!"
I closed the letter and sent it off with James' owl, the owl hesitated a little, obviously James had been getting a lot of howlers before. Finally I managed to tie the letter to the owls leg. And I shooed it out the window.
I looked at my clock in astonishment, it was already 9:30 am.
Putting on a black jacket that I personally made (then James hexed it to turn rainbow, until I went to Pro. McGonagall who forced him to take the spell off) and took out a pair of blue trackies, I was all set for the day.
After eating a rushed breakfast my mom took me to the leaky cauldron after giving me a kiss and a lecture of not to wander off or talk to strangers (honesty, after last night, you wouldn't think that she cared if I was abducted by aliens.) I entered Diagon Alley.
Wow.
I looked on in amazement. They had a muggle shop there! Wohoo!
It was 'Muggle antiques' which was a surprise since half of the Wizards/Witches hated muggles and it looked busy.
I skipped (literately) up the pathway to Gringotts where I kept my very small amount of Wizard money.
I wasn't watching where I was 'skipping' and suddenly tumbled to the ground.
Mental note: Don't skip.
Another mental note: stop making mental notes!
After pulling myself up from the ground I made sure no one saw my fall and pretended nothing happened.
I looked down to see the culprit of my fall and found a twig. I scooped it up. No one gets away with pushing me over! NO ONE! Except James- I mean 'Potter' but that will change.
I scrunched the twig into a million pieces and dropped then to the ground. If it had a face, I swear it was smiling mockingly up at me. So I started desperately jumping on it.
TAKE THAT YOU STICK!
No, me not mental, me normal.
"Err. I think that stick has had enough." Said a voice behind.
"Ali!" I squealed.
We gave each other a big hug.
Ali was of average build, she had light brown hair with gold streaks through it. Her hair was beautiful and contrasted with her sky blue eyes.
She was my best friend.
"So, you've truly gone mental, never thought I'd see the day when 'perfect prefect will loose it."
"it was mocking me!" I defended, even my best friend said I was mental.
"It's a stick Lils! It doesn't 'mock'."
"Now you're mocking me!" Gosh, I'm starting to believe I'm mental, oh well, what can you do about it?
"Settle down Lils, there is something I need to tell you about something. important." Ali's face turned from happy to said, and I knew something was wrong.
"What- what is it 'Lee?"
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AN: thankyou all my kind reviewers thank you. :)
I know my spelling was terrible in the last chapter but I am checking it this chapter, I really apoligise heaps.
Sorry about the lack of humour in this chapter, it will appear in next chapters.
~**AngelInName**~
LimeJuiceTub: I agree with Lily's parents being honest, it just didn't seem to fit in with my story line, I put in her mum being kind and caring, they seem to want Lily to be 'normal' but they are proud of her.
Cynewulf: I'm so sorry about my spelling! I know it was awful! Glad you liked the way I showed Lily's personality,
Misura: Thankyou! I needed this fic to seem a little different! I'm glad how I did it was good! (if that makes sense)
Indy: one word; thanx
Schizophrenic Inner child: your review cheered me up, I'm glad you liked it!
Jenette Black: I love L/J fics aswell (obviously) I was a little scared starting this fic! Thankyou for your review.
Stephanie: I know my spelling really sucked! I hope this chapter has improved (spelling wise).
Riddle-child: glad you thought it was funny!
Silly-Lily: I updated :)
Windowseat Wonderer: I updated kinda fast, but I probably won't be able for another couple of months.
MarkoftheantiherO: Thankyou, I need reviews (gosh that sounds desperate!)
Icegirl-kat: thanx!
Rachel: thankyou!
Tiny gal: glad you like! Next chapter is up! (well this chapter).