Been a LONG time. I kinda procrastinated finishing this chapter what got me
to write again is because my friend sent me this review:
I read this story and you need to update it because we are gettin tired of coming back and there is no more to the story then what it was before ok, so UPDATE IT!
I thought the whole thing was funny cause I didn't know she even read it let alone comment. I think she wanted to be funny cause she doesn't even like anime. She hasn't seen Inuyasha before. Even after her writing that it still took me a while to write again. I have insane friends anyway here is the rest.
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********Noon the next day********
Kagome and company are walking up a big hill. At the very top they look down and see a small village.
"Finally we made it to a village!!"said Kagome. "Mom do you think they might know where a hot spring is ?"said Touya. "I don't know..."said Kagome. "Maybe we can ask someone there,"said Sango. "Great idea,"said Kagome. "Think Inuyasha might be there?"said Touya. "Im right here.."said Jr. "No senior and I don't know,"said Kagome. "And why did you have to name me after him?" "You look just like him when he is human ..."
******** At the Village*************
"Excuse me sir but do you know where a hot spring is?"said Sakura. "Sorry don't have one but there are buckets back there you can pour over your head,"said a random old villager. "Thanks.. Mom can we just get them to the inn they might have something.." "Yeah lets go.."
********At That Very Same Village*******
A demon walked to the entrance to the village. She appeared to be looking for something. She has long white hair and blue eyes. She is about 5'8". "I wonder were those stupids humans are at..,"said the dog demon. "Hi Kiki, what are you doing here?"said Miroku. "Call me HER in public,"said Kiki.
"Whatever Kiki what are you doing in a HUMAN village aren't you supposed to be hunting down weak demons NOT humans?"said Inuyasha "For your information Naraku gave me a very important mission to hunt down 3 humans, 2 hanyous, and a kitsune thank you very much. He probably thought you three were too incompetent to do the job.."said Kiki. "Are there any more details about them?"said Sess. "Im not telling you anything,"said Kiki as she stuck her tongue out at them and walked off. "Naraku is trying to keep something from us, the bastard,"said Inuyasha.
"Indeed we should stick around and see what it is,"said Miroku. "No telling what she is up to lets go to the inn ",said Sess.
(AN was there inns back then?) *****Later that day at the inn with Kagome********
Kagome and company stood outside a large wooden inn. There weren't very many people there. They had already bought rooms , but came out for fresh air. "What do you think we will do tomorrow?"said Shippo. "I don't know we will probably walk around and maybe we will run into something that will tell us what happened..,"said Kagome. "I wonder how Inuyasha is now?"said Shippo. "I bet he's dead..,"said Jr. "How can you say that!!"interrupted Touya. "Because he was archenemy of that Naraku guy its obvious he won cause mom said herself dad was injured when her threw them into the well..he would have been easy picking,"said Jr. "But he Cant be I've waited so LONG to meet him he can't be..,"said Touya. "Inuyasha is stronger than that I remember that day very clearly.....,"said Kagome
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"Kagome!! You CAN'T go you haven't been here that long!!,"whined Inuyasha. "I forgot something we will look for shards LATER,"said Kagome. "But Kagome...." "Don't make me say the S word," "But.. ("Mom you were pregnant with us then right? Then why does he still have the rosary on?"said Touya. "He didn't want to take it off,"said Kagome. "Now quit interrupting,"said Sango.) "No Inuyasha I'll be back SOON," "Wait ...Naraku...*growl*" "What!!! He's dead right?" "Remember Miroku still has the hole in his hand" "Oh yeah.."
They ran back to the village and joined Sango, Miroku, and Shippo. They ran to the corner of the village where Kaede's house is. There they found Naraku strangling Kaede. "Let her go you BASTARD!!"yelled Inuyasha. "Kukukukukuku Oh hello Inuyasha so nice of you to join us. This old hag was getting boring now I have you...kukukukuku"said Naraku as he threw Kaede to the ground. "NO ONE CALLS HER AN OLD HAG BUT ME!!!"yelled Inuyasha as Kagome grabbed Kaede. "CUTTING WIND!!"
Naraku didn't seem fazed at all. The battle that quickly was taking a turn for the worse. Inuyasha's most powerful attack wasn't working. Inuyasha ran at him again, I guess to slice him to pieces I don't know I suck at explaining, and Kagura came out of nowhere and used her feather to cut Inuyasha on his side.
"CUTTING WIND!!"
This time Kanna used her mirror to absorb the attack. Inuyasha turned around grabbed me, Shippo, and Sango. He then through us all into the welll..... ("Um mom you said he was sooo strong he had to be a weakling to get hurt like that and turn tail from the battle"said Jr. "Don't you DARE insult dad like that"said Touya. "That was very rude, Inuyasha was mean but, not THAT weak,"said Shippo. "Well he was not that mean and he was not weak at all...."said Kagome. "But if he wasn't weak then why did he run...",said Jr. "Maybe he wanted to protect you all.."said Sakura. "But""You said""I guess"said several voices at the same time. "If ANY of you interrupt again I will hit you all with my boomerang,"said Sango. "Um mom you don't have your boomerang any more..."said Sakura. "Well I'll find any and all other things I can find to hit you with now shutup and let her finish,"said Sango. "Ok anyway,"said Kagome.)
We got up on the other side of the well. I was shocked that it let Shippo and Sango through. We all got out of it and jumped in again. We still were in the future so we tryed over and over again but it still didn't work.
^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ END ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^
"Glad its over I got tired of hearing about weaklings.."said Inu. "He was NOT a weakling"said Touya. "Whatever"said Inu. "See hah I won.....AHHHHH"said Touya as a fast object just threw her through the door. "Hello...."said Kagome.
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End of chapter 3 YAY I finished it . That and the fact Mavs beat Lakers in LA for the first time in 13 years makes me happier. Now please hit that little button that says review.
I read this story and you need to update it because we are gettin tired of coming back and there is no more to the story then what it was before ok, so UPDATE IT!
I thought the whole thing was funny cause I didn't know she even read it let alone comment. I think she wanted to be funny cause she doesn't even like anime. She hasn't seen Inuyasha before. Even after her writing that it still took me a while to write again. I have insane friends anyway here is the rest.
-------Chapter 3---------
********Noon the next day********
Kagome and company are walking up a big hill. At the very top they look down and see a small village.
"Finally we made it to a village!!"said Kagome. "Mom do you think they might know where a hot spring is ?"said Touya. "I don't know..."said Kagome. "Maybe we can ask someone there,"said Sango. "Great idea,"said Kagome. "Think Inuyasha might be there?"said Touya. "Im right here.."said Jr. "No senior and I don't know,"said Kagome. "And why did you have to name me after him?" "You look just like him when he is human ..."
******** At the Village*************
"Excuse me sir but do you know where a hot spring is?"said Sakura. "Sorry don't have one but there are buckets back there you can pour over your head,"said a random old villager. "Thanks.. Mom can we just get them to the inn they might have something.." "Yeah lets go.."
********At That Very Same Village*******
A demon walked to the entrance to the village. She appeared to be looking for something. She has long white hair and blue eyes. She is about 5'8". "I wonder were those stupids humans are at..,"said the dog demon. "Hi Kiki, what are you doing here?"said Miroku. "Call me HER in public,"said Kiki.
"Whatever Kiki what are you doing in a HUMAN village aren't you supposed to be hunting down weak demons NOT humans?"said Inuyasha "For your information Naraku gave me a very important mission to hunt down 3 humans, 2 hanyous, and a kitsune thank you very much. He probably thought you three were too incompetent to do the job.."said Kiki. "Are there any more details about them?"said Sess. "Im not telling you anything,"said Kiki as she stuck her tongue out at them and walked off. "Naraku is trying to keep something from us, the bastard,"said Inuyasha.
"Indeed we should stick around and see what it is,"said Miroku. "No telling what she is up to lets go to the inn ",said Sess.
(AN was there inns back then?) *****Later that day at the inn with Kagome********
Kagome and company stood outside a large wooden inn. There weren't very many people there. They had already bought rooms , but came out for fresh air. "What do you think we will do tomorrow?"said Shippo. "I don't know we will probably walk around and maybe we will run into something that will tell us what happened..,"said Kagome. "I wonder how Inuyasha is now?"said Shippo. "I bet he's dead..,"said Jr. "How can you say that!!"interrupted Touya. "Because he was archenemy of that Naraku guy its obvious he won cause mom said herself dad was injured when her threw them into the well..he would have been easy picking,"said Jr. "But he Cant be I've waited so LONG to meet him he can't be..,"said Touya. "Inuyasha is stronger than that I remember that day very clearly.....,"said Kagome
^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_FLASHBACK^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^
"Kagome!! You CAN'T go you haven't been here that long!!,"whined Inuyasha. "I forgot something we will look for shards LATER,"said Kagome. "But Kagome...." "Don't make me say the S word," "But.. ("Mom you were pregnant with us then right? Then why does he still have the rosary on?"said Touya. "He didn't want to take it off,"said Kagome. "Now quit interrupting,"said Sango.) "No Inuyasha I'll be back SOON," "Wait ...Naraku...*growl*" "What!!! He's dead right?" "Remember Miroku still has the hole in his hand" "Oh yeah.."
They ran back to the village and joined Sango, Miroku, and Shippo. They ran to the corner of the village where Kaede's house is. There they found Naraku strangling Kaede. "Let her go you BASTARD!!"yelled Inuyasha. "Kukukukukuku Oh hello Inuyasha so nice of you to join us. This old hag was getting boring now I have you...kukukukuku"said Naraku as he threw Kaede to the ground. "NO ONE CALLS HER AN OLD HAG BUT ME!!!"yelled Inuyasha as Kagome grabbed Kaede. "CUTTING WIND!!"
Naraku didn't seem fazed at all. The battle that quickly was taking a turn for the worse. Inuyasha's most powerful attack wasn't working. Inuyasha ran at him again, I guess to slice him to pieces I don't know I suck at explaining, and Kagura came out of nowhere and used her feather to cut Inuyasha on his side.
"CUTTING WIND!!"
This time Kanna used her mirror to absorb the attack. Inuyasha turned around grabbed me, Shippo, and Sango. He then through us all into the welll..... ("Um mom you said he was sooo strong he had to be a weakling to get hurt like that and turn tail from the battle"said Jr. "Don't you DARE insult dad like that"said Touya. "That was very rude, Inuyasha was mean but, not THAT weak,"said Shippo. "Well he was not that mean and he was not weak at all...."said Kagome. "But if he wasn't weak then why did he run...",said Jr. "Maybe he wanted to protect you all.."said Sakura. "But""You said""I guess"said several voices at the same time. "If ANY of you interrupt again I will hit you all with my boomerang,"said Sango. "Um mom you don't have your boomerang any more..."said Sakura. "Well I'll find any and all other things I can find to hit you with now shutup and let her finish,"said Sango. "Ok anyway,"said Kagome.)
We got up on the other side of the well. I was shocked that it let Shippo and Sango through. We all got out of it and jumped in again. We still were in the future so we tryed over and over again but it still didn't work.
^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ END ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^
"Glad its over I got tired of hearing about weaklings.."said Inu. "He was NOT a weakling"said Touya. "Whatever"said Inu. "See hah I won.....AHHHHH"said Touya as a fast object just threw her through the door. "Hello...."said Kagome.
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End of chapter 3 YAY I finished it . That and the fact Mavs beat Lakers in LA for the first time in 13 years makes me happier. Now please hit that little button that says review.