I replaced the chapter with the new one over the doubled first chapter, so read it. I'm just telling everyone so they don't think I didn't update, when I did. Anyway, that's it, just getting everything straightened out, and also, I said you couldn't not like the story, not that the story was unlikable. I didn't mean that, I've been brain-dead ever since I got back from school.

OH MY GOSH! WHAT IS THAT? IT'S HIDEOUS!

Oops, my bad, it was just the REVIEW BUTTON! well, now that you know where it is, shouldn't you press it? Of course! It wouldn't be cool if you didn't. If you have a comment that you just want to start b.s.ing about and send a review as, tough. I'll accept critical reviewers, but not people who just want to cuss and crap when they can't do any better.

SEE YA!