Final Fantasy X;
Through the eyes of a Moogle
This is my first ever like, story-fanfic type thing; so first of all don't laugh if it is totally poo. But in the very unlikely event you like it please review it, and tell me what you think of it. And if you don't like it review it anyway, for the sake of it. Tell me what i've done wrong, or what i could improve.
Anyway start the story...;-) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------- Introduction
Exitement was everywhere in the large futuristic city of Zanarkand, the Jecht memorial match in the worldwide sport of Blitzball was about to begin, between the Abes from b-west and the Duggles from c-south. Outside the stadium, a tall blonde figure stood. Tidus, the star of the Zanarkand Abes was surrounded by a large huddle of his (mainly female) fans. Tidus had stortish blonde hair, blue eyes and slightly tanned skin. He wore a black sleveless top, and underneath that there was a yellow t-shirt. His three quarter length trousers zipped off at the knee. His left trouser leg was zipped off, and he wore the other one showing off the Zanarkand Abes logo it bore.
"Hey hey let me through! C'mon i've got a match to go to! Move it!" Tidus yelled as he struggled through the crowd. Eventually he got to the stadium and entered, turning and giving one last wave to the adoring onlookers.
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Blitzball was a world famous sport in which two teams of six players played againt each other in a sphere full of water called a sphere pool. The players take up the positions of Goal Keeper(defends the goal), Midfield(plays in the centre of the pool an catches the ball at the blitzoff at the start of the first and second halves, also can play as a forward or defender), Left and Right Defence(passes the ball to other players and helps the goalie) and Left and Right Forward(tries to score in the other goal and can also play as midfield). Basically, Blitzball is just like football. Only you use your hands. And youre underwater. Okay it's not like Football. Jecht was Zanarkand's best ever Blitzball player, who died ten years ago.
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Tidus was layed in the side of the sphere pool, as the water slowly filled it up. Blitzoff! As soon as the ball was freed he dived in and grabbed it, narrowly avoiding an encounter. He swam away towards the opponents goal as fast as he could, but was intercepted by a lad on the Duggles team. Tidus skillfully wither tackled him hard, and sent him smashing into the wall of the sphere. But instead of hitting it, he sailed right through and landed in the midst of the wildly cheering audience in the stands below.
Meanwhile, stood on a ledge about three miles from the stadium, there was a figure. Who or whatever it was was wearing a long red jacket and was staring into the distance. Far off was a massive ball of something, that resembled a large disorientated whale. But that whale was slowly moving, and ,as it did it was sucking up the contents of the city!
The noise of the crowd could be heard even from here, as the red braided girl passed to another player, he fumbled the ball and Tidus dived out of the water to grab it. As he did a front flip to pull off a volley shot, Tidus looked up and there he saw the giant 'thing' scooping up his city. He forgot all about the ball and the game, he just stared, to scared and surprised to even attempt a scream; slowly Tidus started to fall and before he knew it, hit the ground with a large thump.
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It was about five minuites before Tidus awoke. As he slowly got to his feet, he got to grips with what just happened.
'Thank god im okay' Thougt Tidus. He looked around to see where he was, outside the stadium which had been totally wrecked by the 'whale monster'. Tidus slowly walked forward avoiding tripping over all the bits of debris and tiny rubble when he saw the person dressed in a large red jacket.
"Auron?" He asked
"Ive been waiting for you" Auron replied
"What? No way!" Tidus answered back as Auron walked away
"Come with me," Was all Auron had to say, in his deep gruff voice.
As Tidus followed he soon realised where they were headed. Towards the monster! "Hey not that way!" He cried in surprise as he figured it out. Auron didn't say a thing, just stepped back as small black egg shaped disks came flying down out of nowhere in front of him. "Sinscales," Auron announced "This is a waste of time, we cut through!" Tidus looked at Auron and one of the disks began to unfold. Out came a small black bird, its wings were sticking up and had green flashing 'lights' on them. The bird lashed out and clawed the unsuspecting Tidus, knocking him to the ground. "Here," Said Auron, handing Tidus a red sword with silver edge. "Jecht gave it to you." "What, my old man?" Auron nodded. "I presume you know how to use it?" "Hell yeah!" Was Tidus' reply as he grabbed the swords handle and hoisted himself up.
Tidus jumped forward and slashed the bird. I fell to the floor and withered away. Tidus ran on, more disks landing and unfolding constantly as he tried to escape. Auron suddenly stopped allowing Tidus to catch up. As he caught up he crouched down to get his breath back, he looked up and saw what looked like a large black tower. A row of about seven or eight sinscales landed in front of Tidus and Auron. Auron braced himself as he prepared a powerful power break on the 'tower' which revealed itself to be a Sinspawn Ammes. Tidus and Auron kept on attacking, when all of a sudden Auron began to yell. "I've had enough!" Auron had reached his overdrive state. When a person had reached overdrive he or she could then inflict a powerful attack in which they channeled all thier anger and rage to create devastating effects. Aurons overdrive, the Busido Dragon Fang, caused him to leap into the air and toughly jab his sword into the Ammes. It fell to the floor, dead.
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Well, whaddya think? I left out some of the boring bits at the beggining like when you name your character and whan you use the tanker to destroy the bridge, but thats not the point. Hoped you liked my first attempt 'cos the real chapter 1 will posted one the site soon!
Through the eyes of a Moogle
This is my first ever like, story-fanfic type thing; so first of all don't laugh if it is totally poo. But in the very unlikely event you like it please review it, and tell me what you think of it. And if you don't like it review it anyway, for the sake of it. Tell me what i've done wrong, or what i could improve.
Anyway start the story...;-) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------- Introduction
Exitement was everywhere in the large futuristic city of Zanarkand, the Jecht memorial match in the worldwide sport of Blitzball was about to begin, between the Abes from b-west and the Duggles from c-south. Outside the stadium, a tall blonde figure stood. Tidus, the star of the Zanarkand Abes was surrounded by a large huddle of his (mainly female) fans. Tidus had stortish blonde hair, blue eyes and slightly tanned skin. He wore a black sleveless top, and underneath that there was a yellow t-shirt. His three quarter length trousers zipped off at the knee. His left trouser leg was zipped off, and he wore the other one showing off the Zanarkand Abes logo it bore.
"Hey hey let me through! C'mon i've got a match to go to! Move it!" Tidus yelled as he struggled through the crowd. Eventually he got to the stadium and entered, turning and giving one last wave to the adoring onlookers.
***************
Blitzball was a world famous sport in which two teams of six players played againt each other in a sphere full of water called a sphere pool. The players take up the positions of Goal Keeper(defends the goal), Midfield(plays in the centre of the pool an catches the ball at the blitzoff at the start of the first and second halves, also can play as a forward or defender), Left and Right Defence(passes the ball to other players and helps the goalie) and Left and Right Forward(tries to score in the other goal and can also play as midfield). Basically, Blitzball is just like football. Only you use your hands. And youre underwater. Okay it's not like Football. Jecht was Zanarkand's best ever Blitzball player, who died ten years ago.
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Tidus was layed in the side of the sphere pool, as the water slowly filled it up. Blitzoff! As soon as the ball was freed he dived in and grabbed it, narrowly avoiding an encounter. He swam away towards the opponents goal as fast as he could, but was intercepted by a lad on the Duggles team. Tidus skillfully wither tackled him hard, and sent him smashing into the wall of the sphere. But instead of hitting it, he sailed right through and landed in the midst of the wildly cheering audience in the stands below.
Meanwhile, stood on a ledge about three miles from the stadium, there was a figure. Who or whatever it was was wearing a long red jacket and was staring into the distance. Far off was a massive ball of something, that resembled a large disorientated whale. But that whale was slowly moving, and ,as it did it was sucking up the contents of the city!
The noise of the crowd could be heard even from here, as the red braided girl passed to another player, he fumbled the ball and Tidus dived out of the water to grab it. As he did a front flip to pull off a volley shot, Tidus looked up and there he saw the giant 'thing' scooping up his city. He forgot all about the ball and the game, he just stared, to scared and surprised to even attempt a scream; slowly Tidus started to fall and before he knew it, hit the ground with a large thump.
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It was about five minuites before Tidus awoke. As he slowly got to his feet, he got to grips with what just happened.
'Thank god im okay' Thougt Tidus. He looked around to see where he was, outside the stadium which had been totally wrecked by the 'whale monster'. Tidus slowly walked forward avoiding tripping over all the bits of debris and tiny rubble when he saw the person dressed in a large red jacket.
"Auron?" He asked
"Ive been waiting for you" Auron replied
"What? No way!" Tidus answered back as Auron walked away
"Come with me," Was all Auron had to say, in his deep gruff voice.
As Tidus followed he soon realised where they were headed. Towards the monster! "Hey not that way!" He cried in surprise as he figured it out. Auron didn't say a thing, just stepped back as small black egg shaped disks came flying down out of nowhere in front of him. "Sinscales," Auron announced "This is a waste of time, we cut through!" Tidus looked at Auron and one of the disks began to unfold. Out came a small black bird, its wings were sticking up and had green flashing 'lights' on them. The bird lashed out and clawed the unsuspecting Tidus, knocking him to the ground. "Here," Said Auron, handing Tidus a red sword with silver edge. "Jecht gave it to you." "What, my old man?" Auron nodded. "I presume you know how to use it?" "Hell yeah!" Was Tidus' reply as he grabbed the swords handle and hoisted himself up.
Tidus jumped forward and slashed the bird. I fell to the floor and withered away. Tidus ran on, more disks landing and unfolding constantly as he tried to escape. Auron suddenly stopped allowing Tidus to catch up. As he caught up he crouched down to get his breath back, he looked up and saw what looked like a large black tower. A row of about seven or eight sinscales landed in front of Tidus and Auron. Auron braced himself as he prepared a powerful power break on the 'tower' which revealed itself to be a Sinspawn Ammes. Tidus and Auron kept on attacking, when all of a sudden Auron began to yell. "I've had enough!" Auron had reached his overdrive state. When a person had reached overdrive he or she could then inflict a powerful attack in which they channeled all thier anger and rage to create devastating effects. Aurons overdrive, the Busido Dragon Fang, caused him to leap into the air and toughly jab his sword into the Ammes. It fell to the floor, dead.
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Well, whaddya think? I left out some of the boring bits at the beggining like when you name your character and whan you use the tanker to destroy the bridge, but thats not the point. Hoped you liked my first attempt 'cos the real chapter 1 will posted one the site soon!