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Riding on the school bus with her friends that Monday mourning was quite difficult for Bra. What was the real shell shocker is when they pass the theme park brought up an event that she never wants to encounter again.
-Flashback-
"Bra! Will you come on the go-cart line is getting longer," yelled from across the steam of people with Marron by her side saving their space.
"I'm coming, geez can't ah girl take a piss around here anymore!" Bra said while scrabbling toward the bathroom door.
Then two strong hands pulled into the alley next to the bathroom, and slammed her against the wall.
"What the hell is your problem, and who are you?!" Bra screamed desperately trying to get out of her captives grasp.
"Shut the fuck up wench you know you want this!" the voice commanded clapping his hand over her mouth.
"Wha-a-at are y-o-u g-g-gon-na do t-t-to m-m-m-me," Bra whispered in a shacky voice.
"Close your eyes and it will be over soon," the voice cooed to her as his hand went to work.
After about ten minutes, Bra was bruised so badly that she could barely stand up. Then she looked up to the twisted smile, which she recognized vaguely.
"I know a whore like you enjoyed that," the voice whispered before running off in the crowd.
'What's wrong with me? I have to find Pan and Marron,' Bra thought to herself as she got up and limped to the go-carts.
"Bra...what the hell took-," Marron was about to finish before she was cut off by the sight in front of her.
"What happened to you? Who in the hell did this to you," Pan yelled grabbing Bra by the arm and leading her out the park, with Marron trailing behind.
"It h-u-r-r-r-t now I-I-I w-a-a-ant t-t-t-o g-g-o home," Bra begged as they put her in the car and drove back to Capsule Corps.
-End of Flashback-
By the time the bus pulled into the school packing lot a stream of tears were pouring out of her eyes.
"If only I were a warrior, like dad wanted me to be," Bra whimpered to Marron.
"No B-Chan it wasn't your fault but I can promise you one thing everything is going to be o.k,"Marron says while pulling Bra in her arms to console her. Then leading off the bus with pour fear in her eyes of whom she saw next. It was none other than....
**************************************************** Ha! Ha! You got another cliffhanger. Remember don't forget to REVIEW, and criticism wanted.
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Riding on the school bus with her friends that Monday mourning was quite difficult for Bra. What was the real shell shocker is when they pass the theme park brought up an event that she never wants to encounter again.
-Flashback-
"Bra! Will you come on the go-cart line is getting longer," yelled from across the steam of people with Marron by her side saving their space.
"I'm coming, geez can't ah girl take a piss around here anymore!" Bra said while scrabbling toward the bathroom door.
Then two strong hands pulled into the alley next to the bathroom, and slammed her against the wall.
"What the hell is your problem, and who are you?!" Bra screamed desperately trying to get out of her captives grasp.
"Shut the fuck up wench you know you want this!" the voice commanded clapping his hand over her mouth.
"Wha-a-at are y-o-u g-g-gon-na do t-t-to m-m-m-me," Bra whispered in a shacky voice.
"Close your eyes and it will be over soon," the voice cooed to her as his hand went to work.
After about ten minutes, Bra was bruised so badly that she could barely stand up. Then she looked up to the twisted smile, which she recognized vaguely.
"I know a whore like you enjoyed that," the voice whispered before running off in the crowd.
'What's wrong with me? I have to find Pan and Marron,' Bra thought to herself as she got up and limped to the go-carts.
"Bra...what the hell took-," Marron was about to finish before she was cut off by the sight in front of her.
"What happened to you? Who in the hell did this to you," Pan yelled grabbing Bra by the arm and leading her out the park, with Marron trailing behind.
"It h-u-r-r-r-t now I-I-I w-a-a-ant t-t-t-o g-g-o home," Bra begged as they put her in the car and drove back to Capsule Corps.
-End of Flashback-
By the time the bus pulled into the school packing lot a stream of tears were pouring out of her eyes.
"If only I were a warrior, like dad wanted me to be," Bra whimpered to Marron.
"No B-Chan it wasn't your fault but I can promise you one thing everything is going to be o.k,"Marron says while pulling Bra in her arms to console her. Then leading off the bus with pour fear in her eyes of whom she saw next. It was none other than....
**************************************************** Ha! Ha! You got another cliffhanger. Remember don't forget to REVIEW, and criticism wanted.