Title : Ghostly Bride's Obsession 1/
Authors: Susie and Irene
Rated: PG13
Disclaimer : Do not own the Real Ghostbusters.
Comments: Yes please
Copyright 2003
It was early morning when the Ghostbusters awoke . They heard stranges noises coming from downstairs. . Winston sat up in his bed ."Did you heard that."
"Yeah replied Ray. Sounds like it's coming from the kitchen.
"We better go and investigate," said Egon as he put his glasses on his face.
Ray, Egon, Peter and Winston entered the kitchen and looked
around. There were dishes everywhere. Most of them were scattered on the floor. broken in pieces
Ray took out his PKE Meter. " Wow a class seven or higher! Oh wow! Come on guys let's get that sucker."
Slimer floated ahead of them.
"Yeah get that sucker! Let's go Ray."
" Right on Slimer."
"Winston, I think we better get going. Before Ray tries to bust the ghost by himself," Egon said as he pushed his glasses back into place .
Winston nodded his head as he watched Peter followed Ray.
When he caught up with his friend, Ray was standing there looking at a free floating female ghost wearing a wedding dress, once white, but now yellow and decayed with the passage of time. The ghost looked back at him. Suddenly she screamed and rushed towards him.
"Why? Why did you leave me at the alter?" She asked in a ghostly voice pointing her long bony finger at Ray.
"Uh Peter... I think she's asking you something," Ray said to Peter.
I'm talking to you!" screamed the female. Why did you leave me alone and make a fool out of me? Answer me!" screamed the ghostly figure, as she slimed him with some kind of yellow disgusting cream.
As the cream dripped down on Ray, he jumped back in surprise. "Hey lady I have no idea what you are talking about. We never even met ." He then turned to Peter firing up his proton gun. "Come on Peter, she's toast. Besides I like coffee with my cream."
Peter smiled as he charged up also and together they both fired but nothing happened. The ghost suddenly swooped down and grabbed Ray by his arm.
"You will not get out of marrying me this time you little worm," She croaked with venom.
Ray tried to pull away but she was too strong for him. He turned to his friend. "Peter! Get Egon and Winston! I'm too young to get married! And she's not my type!" He cried as she disappeared with him.
Peter ran to the spiral staircase and ran up them two steps at a time. "Winston, Egon, come quick, a female ghostly bride grabbed Ray and disappeared with him.
"Say what?" asked a bewildered Winston."
"Some female ghost took Ray" answered Peter.
Egon came out of his lab. He had gone in there to retrieve his PKE meter and heard the words that Peter said, "Peter how long ago did this happen?" asked Egon with a worried look in his eyes.
Peter thought for a moment "Not long more than a few minutes ago. And our proton guns didn't work on her. Come on we got to find him, she wants Ray to marry her."
Winston looked at him. "So. You always said Ray needed a girlfriend."
Egon raised his eyebrow. "I think he would want one who's alive, Winston."
Winston nodded knowing his little joke was in bad taste. "Yeah Egon, I guess that would be better. Sorry you guys. Well come on we have to find Ray." Winston headed for the pole with Egon and Peter following right behind him.
******
Ray was on the floor tied up. The ghostly bride was looking at him. She bent down and ran her long clammy, boney fingers across his cheek. Then grabbed his chin to kiss him.
At the touch of her lips on his he shudderd . She stared at him. "You 're afraid of me? Really Raymond," she purred as she kissed him again.
Ray roughly pushed her away, His skin felt like it was crawling all over his body. "Say lady. Why do you think I jilted you? There's no way it could have been me. You look like you are from the 19th century and I wasn't born until 1959, which is in the 20th century." The bride ghost looked at Ray and began to shriek . Ray moved away from the shieking bride ghost. "Look I'm sorry you were jilted but if you just let me help. "
The ghost stared at him. As Ray watched he noticed that she seemed to have calmed down a little. He tried smiling at her. Maybe he could get her to tell him what was wrong.
"You seem to have me at a disadvantage. You know my name but I don't
know yours."
"Lorraine!" she screamed.
"That's a really pretty name," he replied. "Look, Lorraine. I'm telling you the truth. I'm not the person you think I am."
Suddenly the ghostly bride screamed. "I don't care if you 're not the man who jilted me! You will take his place and be with me for ever and ever!"
The bride ghost took out a dagger and plunged the dagger straight at his heart.
*******
Egon had tracked Ray and the ghostly bride with his PKE metor to a warehouse located near the East River and now the other three ghostbusters were on the other side blasting away at the door to get in and help their friend
Ray somehow got loose from his bonds . He ran to the nearest exit. 'Boy that's what I get for trying to help.' hearing the blasting of the ion guns he called out, "Peter, Egon, Winston, Help!!!!!!!"
The ghostly bride screamed again and threw the dagger. This time, the dagger didn't miss. It caught Ray in the back near the shoulder blade and his eyes filled with tears of shock and pain as he fell into Egon's arms just as his friend came running in.
Ray's shoulder hurt him terribly . As he looked up into the worried blue eyes of Egon, he cried in pain "It hurts Egon. Oh God it hurts."
Egon placed his hand on Ray's face and wiped a tear from his cheek. "Hold on Raymond. Hold on. I'm going to get you out of here."
"Hey Egon you do that, while Winston and I hold back this bride freak," said Peter, as he and Winston fired their proton guns towards the ghostly bride. Egon swooped Ray into his arms and hurried to the nearest exit.
"Pour it on Winston! I think we're getting her this time."
"No!!!!!!! You can't take him NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!---
The Ghostly bride swooped towards the door to try and stop Egon. Suddenly she felt the sharp pain of the ions beams and she screamed in pain. This time, she was unable to break loose. "No! No! He was supposed to be mine! Bring him back!" She screamed.
"Winston, hurry throw out a trap before she gets loose."
Winston quickly threw out the trap and pressed on the pedal. "Trap open!" He warned. Both he and Peter averted their eyes as the ghostly bride screamed and strugged but soon the trap shut and trapped her inside. Peter went over and picked it up.
"Say good night lady."
*******
Ray did his best to stay awake but he was slowly losing consciousness Egon," he whispered.
"Ssh don't try to talk." Egon placed him in the back of Ecto carefully, then covered him with a blanket. Ray looked at him. "I'm sorry," he said and then passed out. Egon stroked his auburn hair and got into Ecto beside him holding his hand which felt clammy and he knew Ray was going into shock. Peter and Winston came running out.
We got the ghost ."
"Good. Winston you drive. I'm riding in the back with Ray."
"Egon I want to too."
Egon sadly shook his head he knew Peter wanted to be with Ray also and it hurt him because he knew there was no room for three grown men in the back. "Peter there's no room I'm sorry."
Peter relenting, nodded his head. " Okay,Egon. Just keep an eye on him."
Egon looked up. "I will Peter."
"And protect him."
"I will with my life if need be."
Peter sat down but he kept looking back at Ray who looked so still and pale.
Winston soon came to a stop in front of St. Francis Hospital. He and Peter hurried out of Ecto and went back to help Egon with Ray. As they got there Egon was already out of Ecto and had Ray comfortably in his arms.
"I have him, let's hurry in to the emergency room," said Egon. No sooner did he say that than a big swirl of wind came up and started to pulled Ray out of Egon's grip . "No, you can't have him!" yelled Egon as he tried to hold on to his friend with all his might, but the whirlwind was too strong for Egon to hold on.
The whirlwind yanked Ray from his arms and up through a hole in the sky then it started to closed. Egon made a desperated leap for the portal , just before it closed. He made it, but Peter and Winston, who were trying like mad, fell short of their leaps. "Egon! Ray!" yelled Peter and Winston.
As the dark whirlwind spun around and around, Egon reached out his hand towards Ray. Even though the wind was strong Egon managed to grab hold. He stared into Ray's face and knew he would die if he didn't get help soon.
Soon they landed with a hard thump. Egon's body was now protecting Ray as a huge Dark ghost towered in front of him. ---
"WHY DID YOU TAKE MY BABY GIRL'S BEAU?" He demanded loudly.
Egon looked up at the dark ghost and even though he was somewhat afraid, he stood up and faced the spirit.
"First of all, Ray is not her beau, and second of all we trapped her because she was on a terrorizing rampage and she hurt Ray. Look you have to let us go because if you don't, Ray will died," said Egon.
"No I don't. It won't make any difference if he dies. That way he can be with my little girl." At that moment the dark ghost took Ray from Egon and placed an invisible shield, between them. Egon looked startled and tried to force himself through the shield.
"What are you doing? I can't helped him if I can't get to him! Don't you see, he'll die!" said Egon desperately.
"That's the idea," and then the ghost threw back his head and started to laugh
TBC
Authors: Susie and Irene
Rated: PG13
Disclaimer : Do not own the Real Ghostbusters.
Comments: Yes please
Copyright 2003
It was early morning when the Ghostbusters awoke . They heard stranges noises coming from downstairs. . Winston sat up in his bed ."Did you heard that."
"Yeah replied Ray. Sounds like it's coming from the kitchen.
"We better go and investigate," said Egon as he put his glasses on his face.
Ray, Egon, Peter and Winston entered the kitchen and looked
around. There were dishes everywhere. Most of them were scattered on the floor. broken in pieces
Ray took out his PKE Meter. " Wow a class seven or higher! Oh wow! Come on guys let's get that sucker."
Slimer floated ahead of them.
"Yeah get that sucker! Let's go Ray."
" Right on Slimer."
"Winston, I think we better get going. Before Ray tries to bust the ghost by himself," Egon said as he pushed his glasses back into place .
Winston nodded his head as he watched Peter followed Ray.
When he caught up with his friend, Ray was standing there looking at a free floating female ghost wearing a wedding dress, once white, but now yellow and decayed with the passage of time. The ghost looked back at him. Suddenly she screamed and rushed towards him.
"Why? Why did you leave me at the alter?" She asked in a ghostly voice pointing her long bony finger at Ray.
"Uh Peter... I think she's asking you something," Ray said to Peter.
I'm talking to you!" screamed the female. Why did you leave me alone and make a fool out of me? Answer me!" screamed the ghostly figure, as she slimed him with some kind of yellow disgusting cream.
As the cream dripped down on Ray, he jumped back in surprise. "Hey lady I have no idea what you are talking about. We never even met ." He then turned to Peter firing up his proton gun. "Come on Peter, she's toast. Besides I like coffee with my cream."
Peter smiled as he charged up also and together they both fired but nothing happened. The ghost suddenly swooped down and grabbed Ray by his arm.
"You will not get out of marrying me this time you little worm," She croaked with venom.
Ray tried to pull away but she was too strong for him. He turned to his friend. "Peter! Get Egon and Winston! I'm too young to get married! And she's not my type!" He cried as she disappeared with him.
Peter ran to the spiral staircase and ran up them two steps at a time. "Winston, Egon, come quick, a female ghostly bride grabbed Ray and disappeared with him.
"Say what?" asked a bewildered Winston."
"Some female ghost took Ray" answered Peter.
Egon came out of his lab. He had gone in there to retrieve his PKE meter and heard the words that Peter said, "Peter how long ago did this happen?" asked Egon with a worried look in his eyes.
Peter thought for a moment "Not long more than a few minutes ago. And our proton guns didn't work on her. Come on we got to find him, she wants Ray to marry her."
Winston looked at him. "So. You always said Ray needed a girlfriend."
Egon raised his eyebrow. "I think he would want one who's alive, Winston."
Winston nodded knowing his little joke was in bad taste. "Yeah Egon, I guess that would be better. Sorry you guys. Well come on we have to find Ray." Winston headed for the pole with Egon and Peter following right behind him.
******
Ray was on the floor tied up. The ghostly bride was looking at him. She bent down and ran her long clammy, boney fingers across his cheek. Then grabbed his chin to kiss him.
At the touch of her lips on his he shudderd . She stared at him. "You 're afraid of me? Really Raymond," she purred as she kissed him again.
Ray roughly pushed her away, His skin felt like it was crawling all over his body. "Say lady. Why do you think I jilted you? There's no way it could have been me. You look like you are from the 19th century and I wasn't born until 1959, which is in the 20th century." The bride ghost looked at Ray and began to shriek . Ray moved away from the shieking bride ghost. "Look I'm sorry you were jilted but if you just let me help. "
The ghost stared at him. As Ray watched he noticed that she seemed to have calmed down a little. He tried smiling at her. Maybe he could get her to tell him what was wrong.
"You seem to have me at a disadvantage. You know my name but I don't
know yours."
"Lorraine!" she screamed.
"That's a really pretty name," he replied. "Look, Lorraine. I'm telling you the truth. I'm not the person you think I am."
Suddenly the ghostly bride screamed. "I don't care if you 're not the man who jilted me! You will take his place and be with me for ever and ever!"
The bride ghost took out a dagger and plunged the dagger straight at his heart.
*******
Egon had tracked Ray and the ghostly bride with his PKE metor to a warehouse located near the East River and now the other three ghostbusters were on the other side blasting away at the door to get in and help their friend
Ray somehow got loose from his bonds . He ran to the nearest exit. 'Boy that's what I get for trying to help.' hearing the blasting of the ion guns he called out, "Peter, Egon, Winston, Help!!!!!!!"
The ghostly bride screamed again and threw the dagger. This time, the dagger didn't miss. It caught Ray in the back near the shoulder blade and his eyes filled with tears of shock and pain as he fell into Egon's arms just as his friend came running in.
Ray's shoulder hurt him terribly . As he looked up into the worried blue eyes of Egon, he cried in pain "It hurts Egon. Oh God it hurts."
Egon placed his hand on Ray's face and wiped a tear from his cheek. "Hold on Raymond. Hold on. I'm going to get you out of here."
"Hey Egon you do that, while Winston and I hold back this bride freak," said Peter, as he and Winston fired their proton guns towards the ghostly bride. Egon swooped Ray into his arms and hurried to the nearest exit.
"Pour it on Winston! I think we're getting her this time."
"No!!!!!!! You can't take him NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!---
The Ghostly bride swooped towards the door to try and stop Egon. Suddenly she felt the sharp pain of the ions beams and she screamed in pain. This time, she was unable to break loose. "No! No! He was supposed to be mine! Bring him back!" She screamed.
"Winston, hurry throw out a trap before she gets loose."
Winston quickly threw out the trap and pressed on the pedal. "Trap open!" He warned. Both he and Peter averted their eyes as the ghostly bride screamed and strugged but soon the trap shut and trapped her inside. Peter went over and picked it up.
"Say good night lady."
*******
Ray did his best to stay awake but he was slowly losing consciousness Egon," he whispered.
"Ssh don't try to talk." Egon placed him in the back of Ecto carefully, then covered him with a blanket. Ray looked at him. "I'm sorry," he said and then passed out. Egon stroked his auburn hair and got into Ecto beside him holding his hand which felt clammy and he knew Ray was going into shock. Peter and Winston came running out.
We got the ghost ."
"Good. Winston you drive. I'm riding in the back with Ray."
"Egon I want to too."
Egon sadly shook his head he knew Peter wanted to be with Ray also and it hurt him because he knew there was no room for three grown men in the back. "Peter there's no room I'm sorry."
Peter relenting, nodded his head. " Okay,Egon. Just keep an eye on him."
Egon looked up. "I will Peter."
"And protect him."
"I will with my life if need be."
Peter sat down but he kept looking back at Ray who looked so still and pale.
Winston soon came to a stop in front of St. Francis Hospital. He and Peter hurried out of Ecto and went back to help Egon with Ray. As they got there Egon was already out of Ecto and had Ray comfortably in his arms.
"I have him, let's hurry in to the emergency room," said Egon. No sooner did he say that than a big swirl of wind came up and started to pulled Ray out of Egon's grip . "No, you can't have him!" yelled Egon as he tried to hold on to his friend with all his might, but the whirlwind was too strong for Egon to hold on.
The whirlwind yanked Ray from his arms and up through a hole in the sky then it started to closed. Egon made a desperated leap for the portal , just before it closed. He made it, but Peter and Winston, who were trying like mad, fell short of their leaps. "Egon! Ray!" yelled Peter and Winston.
As the dark whirlwind spun around and around, Egon reached out his hand towards Ray. Even though the wind was strong Egon managed to grab hold. He stared into Ray's face and knew he would die if he didn't get help soon.
Soon they landed with a hard thump. Egon's body was now protecting Ray as a huge Dark ghost towered in front of him. ---
"WHY DID YOU TAKE MY BABY GIRL'S BEAU?" He demanded loudly.
Egon looked up at the dark ghost and even though he was somewhat afraid, he stood up and faced the spirit.
"First of all, Ray is not her beau, and second of all we trapped her because she was on a terrorizing rampage and she hurt Ray. Look you have to let us go because if you don't, Ray will died," said Egon.
"No I don't. It won't make any difference if he dies. That way he can be with my little girl." At that moment the dark ghost took Ray from Egon and placed an invisible shield, between them. Egon looked startled and tried to force himself through the shield.
"What are you doing? I can't helped him if I can't get to him! Don't you see, he'll die!" said Egon desperately.
"That's the idea," and then the ghost threw back his head and started to laugh
TBC