Hey its me Sairah i got my one review. didn't give any response to my writing but if some one reads it im still writing so here i go.
I started to feel my skin, my bones, my whole essence stretching. I was being pulled into a world I didn't belong to. Suddenly it stopped I was tall, I was huge, larger than life. The perfect size for the door. Face to face with my principal "Key?" he said smugly. Furious I screamed, the blood rushing to my face, drowning my mind. I ripped at my hair and fell to my knees panting. I spotted a mouse hole in the corner, a small mouse comes from the hole and drops a half eaten twinkee with the words 'AT ME', the 'E' already eaten. So I ate it. Instantly i was small, so small I could squeeze under the door effortlessly, so I did. I immediately fell in to a pool. My community pool to be exact, the only difference was that there was seemingly no way to get out of the water. TWEET TWEET TWEET TWEET "Stop that right now!!" a beautiful naked woman in a huge throne was blowing her whistle at me. "Me?" She snapped at me "Yes you child" "Bu wh-" and she vanished. Then reappeared in front of me me standing on the water. "But what am I doing?" I asked. She glared at me. "Up." She put her hand out to me, I grabbed it and stepped up on to the water. I was eye to eye with the most beautiful woman i had ever seen. And she had a tail, a smooth cat's tail and ears. She grinned, she had fangs too. "I didn't know you could grin." She looked at me curiously and asked "Why ever not?" "You seemed mad." I said. She laughed and leaned closer to me and said "Oh but were all mad hear." She vanished again. I looked around, children were playing tea party with tea pots and cups on the floor of the pool. An obviously moronic pompous father was instructing his son to swim, claiming it was the only way to get dry. The woman reappeared in a tree just outside the water. She blew her whistle at me again. I shouted "why do you keep doing that? What am I doing?" "Adult swim." she said, and tweeted again. "Adult swim, get out. NOW!" I was very confused "But how?" I asked. The father instructing his child shouted "Join in the Corcus race." Instantly i was swept up in a wave of children, splashing around me and pushing me up on the crest of there wave. The naked woman was was perched in her tree laughing, her arm dangling down from the branch. "Help me!" I yelled to her, but she ignored me. I was pushed higher and higher on the mass of children, until I could grab her hand. She hoisted me up into the tree. The crazed children stopped, fell back into the water, and dissolved, there clothes floating like a blanket on the water. "You are a very a very good girl." The woman said, "you got out of the pool." She pushed me down against the branch and pressed her lips against mine. Gently slipping her tongue around mine. I reached up and delicately wrapped my arms around her shoulders, balancing my wrists on the nape of her neck. She lowered herself onto me and slipped on hand up my shirt, strongly running her hand up my side on to my breast. I was nervous and unsure if I should be stopping her. I felt something smooth and firm brush my thigh, it was her tail slithering up my skirt. She kissing me and stared into my face. She raised an eyebrow, daring me to stop her. I feel the tip of her tail brush the edge of thong, I shutter and close my eyes, biting my lower lip. The beautiful woman smiled and disappeared in the night. So surprised I fall out the tree. Lying on the ground I stared up at the black sky, a grinning moon dangling just out of reach. I close my eyes feeling sleep come over me.
I started to feel my skin, my bones, my whole essence stretching. I was being pulled into a world I didn't belong to. Suddenly it stopped I was tall, I was huge, larger than life. The perfect size for the door. Face to face with my principal "Key?" he said smugly. Furious I screamed, the blood rushing to my face, drowning my mind. I ripped at my hair and fell to my knees panting. I spotted a mouse hole in the corner, a small mouse comes from the hole and drops a half eaten twinkee with the words 'AT ME', the 'E' already eaten. So I ate it. Instantly i was small, so small I could squeeze under the door effortlessly, so I did. I immediately fell in to a pool. My community pool to be exact, the only difference was that there was seemingly no way to get out of the water. TWEET TWEET TWEET TWEET "Stop that right now!!" a beautiful naked woman in a huge throne was blowing her whistle at me. "Me?" She snapped at me "Yes you child" "Bu wh-" and she vanished. Then reappeared in front of me me standing on the water. "But what am I doing?" I asked. She glared at me. "Up." She put her hand out to me, I grabbed it and stepped up on to the water. I was eye to eye with the most beautiful woman i had ever seen. And she had a tail, a smooth cat's tail and ears. She grinned, she had fangs too. "I didn't know you could grin." She looked at me curiously and asked "Why ever not?" "You seemed mad." I said. She laughed and leaned closer to me and said "Oh but were all mad hear." She vanished again. I looked around, children were playing tea party with tea pots and cups on the floor of the pool. An obviously moronic pompous father was instructing his son to swim, claiming it was the only way to get dry. The woman reappeared in a tree just outside the water. She blew her whistle at me again. I shouted "why do you keep doing that? What am I doing?" "Adult swim." she said, and tweeted again. "Adult swim, get out. NOW!" I was very confused "But how?" I asked. The father instructing his child shouted "Join in the Corcus race." Instantly i was swept up in a wave of children, splashing around me and pushing me up on the crest of there wave. The naked woman was was perched in her tree laughing, her arm dangling down from the branch. "Help me!" I yelled to her, but she ignored me. I was pushed higher and higher on the mass of children, until I could grab her hand. She hoisted me up into the tree. The crazed children stopped, fell back into the water, and dissolved, there clothes floating like a blanket on the water. "You are a very a very good girl." The woman said, "you got out of the pool." She pushed me down against the branch and pressed her lips against mine. Gently slipping her tongue around mine. I reached up and delicately wrapped my arms around her shoulders, balancing my wrists on the nape of her neck. She lowered herself onto me and slipped on hand up my shirt, strongly running her hand up my side on to my breast. I was nervous and unsure if I should be stopping her. I felt something smooth and firm brush my thigh, it was her tail slithering up my skirt. She kissing me and stared into my face. She raised an eyebrow, daring me to stop her. I feel the tip of her tail brush the edge of thong, I shutter and close my eyes, biting my lower lip. The beautiful woman smiled and disappeared in the night. So surprised I fall out the tree. Lying on the ground I stared up at the black sky, a grinning moon dangling just out of reach. I close my eyes feeling sleep come over me.