so here i am again. And this time im gonna but it in correct format. word.
I rolled over on to my side, but found myself in a puddel. A shimmering puddle. I jumped up and ground. I wiipped myself off, looking down I noticed the puddle starting to run off down the path. Watching it I remebered th eblood seaping out of Rabbit's eye. I fallowed the beakening stream. It lead me to a white picket fence, peaking over it I saw two familliar faces. Max, a strange boy I once knew, now know, will know. Whitch of these I can not be sure. He was wareing a bowler hat, something that I do from time to time. Sitting next to him was a girl I was freinds with long ago, Vivian. Her short black hair was pulled into two ponytails sticking up and out of her head. They were both smoking a cigarett, and max was drinking a beer. They were singing. Not together, he was singing Anarchy in the UK and she Avril Lavines Complicated. (Please note putting this in my story dose not mean I like her in any way, I am useing this terrible music to make a piont. Thank you) Thare was a huge labrador asleep on the long table at witch they sat. They immediatly stopped when they saw me. I opeaned me mouth to say something,but stopped. The scooted thare chairs apart reveling anoughter chair betwen them. Then Max spoke
"We have plenty of room if youd like to join us." Vivian then innterupted to say
"BUt if you do, you must have a cup of tea." I slowly opeaned the gate and entered the garden. Not really a garden, It was a small suberban back yard really. With a beaten up starry (a clockwork orange) swing set, and dirt patches in the grass. I sat down on the seat, the dog snorted and mumbled
"Jelly." I looked to my right, beyond whare Max sat were more and more chairs, each larger the the prior one. To my left was Vivian, and smaller and smaller chairs.
"Tea?" the girl said hold a cup out to me.
"I suppose." I said taking it from her and placing it down infront of me. Max turned and said
"Drink it." Vivian said
"If you like." Taking a deliberate sip of her own and smiling at me. SO I took a drink.
"Its good." I said. Max turned and said crisply
"Is'nt it though." Taking a chug of his beer and plaing it down next to and emty tea cup. Suddenly from behind me I hear the shrill voice of Rabbit.
"Oh my god, Oh my God! Im so fucking late!" I turned and saw him run behind us. Vivian put her arm out stopping him dead in his tracks.
"Sit." She said "Take a load off." He looked at Max's Jack-o-lanturn smile. He turned and sat in a chair derectly across form me. Thare was only one seat on that side of the table. Max then said "What seems to be the problum?" Then I askeded
"Whare are you going?" and lastly Viavian asked
"Can we help?" HE just bit his lower lip, shrugged and went to stand. Max put his thin, hand on to his sholder. Rabbit cast his eyes down.
"Ah ah ah." Max said. Rabbit raised his eyes up agian, fallowing Max's scared arm up to his crooked, one tooth missing, butiful smile. And into him deep gray eyes.
"I really must be going." Rabbit said slowly.
"If you must." Said Vivian kindly. Max then pulled a huge orange hammer out of his hat and smashed the cup of tea that saw lieing purposlessly in front of Rabbit.
"I really must go." The boy shreaked. He got up and ran from the table. I sighed, picked up max's ciggerate and took a long drag.
"You discust me." snaped Max. "what?" I Said. He rose from the table shaking an angry finger at me.
"You have no right to smoke that." He said "Honestly Alice what could have possibly happend to you, to give you the right to smoke that?" I was shocked at his narsiscum.
"But it was your silly ciggarett!" I yelled at him. "UHH" I got up from the table and stormed out of the garden.
"Good bye Alice!" Vivain called after me.
I rolled over on to my side, but found myself in a puddel. A shimmering puddle. I jumped up and ground. I wiipped myself off, looking down I noticed the puddle starting to run off down the path. Watching it I remebered th eblood seaping out of Rabbit's eye. I fallowed the beakening stream. It lead me to a white picket fence, peaking over it I saw two familliar faces. Max, a strange boy I once knew, now know, will know. Whitch of these I can not be sure. He was wareing a bowler hat, something that I do from time to time. Sitting next to him was a girl I was freinds with long ago, Vivian. Her short black hair was pulled into two ponytails sticking up and out of her head. They were both smoking a cigarett, and max was drinking a beer. They were singing. Not together, he was singing Anarchy in the UK and she Avril Lavines Complicated. (Please note putting this in my story dose not mean I like her in any way, I am useing this terrible music to make a piont. Thank you) Thare was a huge labrador asleep on the long table at witch they sat. They immediatly stopped when they saw me. I opeaned me mouth to say something,but stopped. The scooted thare chairs apart reveling anoughter chair betwen them. Then Max spoke
"We have plenty of room if youd like to join us." Vivian then innterupted to say
"BUt if you do, you must have a cup of tea." I slowly opeaned the gate and entered the garden. Not really a garden, It was a small suberban back yard really. With a beaten up starry (a clockwork orange) swing set, and dirt patches in the grass. I sat down on the seat, the dog snorted and mumbled
"Jelly." I looked to my right, beyond whare Max sat were more and more chairs, each larger the the prior one. To my left was Vivian, and smaller and smaller chairs.
"Tea?" the girl said hold a cup out to me.
"I suppose." I said taking it from her and placing it down infront of me. Max turned and said
"Drink it." Vivian said
"If you like." Taking a deliberate sip of her own and smiling at me. SO I took a drink.
"Its good." I said. Max turned and said crisply
"Is'nt it though." Taking a chug of his beer and plaing it down next to and emty tea cup. Suddenly from behind me I hear the shrill voice of Rabbit.
"Oh my god, Oh my God! Im so fucking late!" I turned and saw him run behind us. Vivian put her arm out stopping him dead in his tracks.
"Sit." She said "Take a load off." He looked at Max's Jack-o-lanturn smile. He turned and sat in a chair derectly across form me. Thare was only one seat on that side of the table. Max then said "What seems to be the problum?" Then I askeded
"Whare are you going?" and lastly Viavian asked
"Can we help?" HE just bit his lower lip, shrugged and went to stand. Max put his thin, hand on to his sholder. Rabbit cast his eyes down.
"Ah ah ah." Max said. Rabbit raised his eyes up agian, fallowing Max's scared arm up to his crooked, one tooth missing, butiful smile. And into him deep gray eyes.
"I really must be going." Rabbit said slowly.
"If you must." Said Vivian kindly. Max then pulled a huge orange hammer out of his hat and smashed the cup of tea that saw lieing purposlessly in front of Rabbit.
"I really must go." The boy shreaked. He got up and ran from the table. I sighed, picked up max's ciggerate and took a long drag.
"You discust me." snaped Max. "what?" I Said. He rose from the table shaking an angry finger at me.
"You have no right to smoke that." He said "Honestly Alice what could have possibly happend to you, to give you the right to smoke that?" I was shocked at his narsiscum.
"But it was your silly ciggarett!" I yelled at him. "UHH" I got up from the table and stormed out of the garden.
"Good bye Alice!" Vivain called after me.