Mwahaha..sorry I've taken so long to write any more I haven't been home
since Friday morning and yeah.so I only just got the time to write anymore.
But I have been writing it on paper and I have some awesome ideas.thanx so
much for everyone's reviews they're soo sweet and they almost made me cry!
I was so excited coz I had 8! Lol. ill do a whole personal thank you thingy
at the start of one my next chapters. Hahahaha.I probably wont get this
chapter up tonight because its late already and I have written heaps and
its really long so yeah keep holding on once I get back in the swing of
school and stuff. (Damn long weekends!) Then I'll be uploading every night
again so calm down don't attack me it will all be revealed. Hehe I've come
up with some cliffhangery stuff so yeah I think its gonna be getting better
even though it still might not be a very good story. But everyone whos
reviewing has been nice about it saying its really good so yeah. thanx!
Umm..i cant think of anything else I need to say. So yeah. Have fun and
read on.
Kisses jade xox
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Chapter 7- getting dressed.
~*Ron's POV*~
Hermione looked absolutely amazing tonight. She pulled the angel thing off Remarkably. And I cannot believe she spent almost the entire evening in my arms. She is just so beautiful she absolutely took my breath away. But god was I mad when I saw Ginny. What the bloody hell did she think she was wearing? I couldn't smacked her one. Honestly she looked like a common prostitute.shes my baby sister!!! I'm going to give her a stern talking to later, but right now I have to get ready for that bloody party with the slimy Slytherins.
~*Draco's POV*~
damn that sexy Gryffindor goody- goody! Even when hes trying to look vulgar and ghosty he looks so damn sexy. I couldn't help but touch his butt tonight and by the way he looked, rather weak at the knees I don't believe he minded. I really don't know what to do about him, he MUST already know I want him, so I think its time to shamelessly flirt. As sophistically as possible of course, and I shall make him mine in no time. If all goes well at my after party tonight I wont have to wait too long at all.
~*Harry's POV*~
I COULD HAVE DIED WHEN Draco TOUCHED ME! My god and im sure he did it on purpose! But why would he?! Oh Hermione looked divine, if I wasn't so in love with Draco I would have kissed her tonight! WHAT?! Did I just say that? I'm not in love with Draco. sure he's sexy and he has an amazingly cute butt, but that's not all there it to loving someone.he isnt much of a nice person! I don't love him but I'd sure as hell like to make love to him a few times! SHIT I'M OBSESSED!? Oh fuck, what am I going to wear? I need to get him to notice me! I seem some fashion help from one of the girls.
~*Ginny's POV*~
Oh my god! Did you see the look on my brother's face when I walked in? PRICELESS! Hahahaha. I did looked amazing but god he looked so mad at me.I avoided his death glare all night. I'm so glad angelic Hermione took his breath away and saved my arse, she looked like a goddess. Hehehe and Draco wow did he look good? I saw 2 Hufflepuff girls faint as he walked in they actually fainted! He did look good though. I wonder whats gonna happen at the party tonight.?
~*Hermione's POV*~
Oh my god! I can't wait until tonight. Ron is such a sweetie, I can't believe harry convinced him to come to the after party tonight! It's going to be amazing! I absolutely cannot wait! I don't know what to wear! Oh my god I have to get ready!! I need to look good, Ron is basically mine, tonight I will make my move and I need to look just right!
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Harry climbed up the stairs to the boys dormitory. His transparency was starting to wear off and in about 15 minutes he would be fully human looking again. He opened his closet and looked through his clothes. He wanted to look good, he desperately needed to attract Draco's attention and with the blur and confusion of alcohol and lots of people tonight would be perfect to make some moves.
He pulled out a pair of jeans from his closet, pulled them no and looked into the mirror. They were nice and hugging around his hips and bagged around his legs and feet. He liked the way they looked and they did cling around his butt in a good way. He flipped through his shirts until he found a nice chocolate brown short sleeved crinkly shirt that clung slightly to his muscles. He wore it opened to just below his neck with some of his chest exposed. He wore a long silver chunky cross around his neck. He ran his hand through his hair to mess it up a little bit more. He gave the mirror a questioning look. "Nice?" "Very nice." It replied.
He jumped downstairs excitedly, at the bottom of the stairs Hermione, Ginny, and Ron were waiting for him.
Hermione was wearing tight jeans and a nice low cut singlet top. Her hair was shiny and long and straight she looked really beautiful. He could tell Ron thought the same.
Ginny was really low jeans and a little boob tube that showed a lot of cleavage. Her hair was down over he shoulders and she had a lot of make up on. Harry also noticed the way Ron was staring at her, he looked really angry.
Ron had scrubbed up rather well himself, he was wearing nice pants and a baggy shirt.
Hermione and Ginny smiled at harry as he walked downstairs. They walked out of the Gryffindor common room and made their way towards the Slytherin party.
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Okay just some final thoughts of mine beofre I upload this.I thought it would be long but it looked longer on paper and its pretty short and im sorry but eventually I will get to the party hehehe..i'm just evil and prolonging it. Mwahhahaha! You can spend your time imaginaing what will happen.hehehe.I just need to be in the right frame of mind to write it! Lol.. ;) but yeah anyways.I just wanna say thanx to those ppl who reviewed so yeah here goes:
Andromeda Summer- I'm updating now.im so sorry don't hurt me!! ARGHHH.lol.. yah im sorry with the delay in uploads I havent been home!
Professor Calendula- haha sweeti, I'm glad you like it, dressing up is fun! I shouldn't given you a costume though.sorry hun!
Kat- thanx, yeah now my story has direction its better ey? Um there isnt any harry/Draco smut but believe me baby there will be :D lol. eventually it will be in there.
Passionate-kisses - thanx, I will write more, ill try and be more regular and write like 2 chaps a night but its hard wit homeowkr and stuff. I have Tuesday off so ill write a few then! Keep reading it will get better!
Hypergurl20022- umm yeah Ginnys a bit off a she devil now, I like her this way. Ginny needs to be tough and confident with all the boys in her family. Next.well lots of stuff happens next, you have to keep reading :P
Freakishguardian- thanx, I'm glad you think its getting better and better, I must say I think it has improved. I don't know how long is gonna be and yeah keep reading! Hope you continue to like it! Yeah the seeing what ppl think is really good. I like that in stories so I put it in mine. It shows more and you can work things out better. I know Draco is soo yummy.at the end of this story when thesmut come I'll be soo living vicariously thru harry! Lol
Sapphire Raine- yeah its good that they are getting to know dif people. Hmmm. the party will be interesting, you'll just have to wait and see and im sorry you have to wait so long! My weekend has been hectic and now im just toying with ya by not writing it. But I promise it will be up by Tuesday night, probably before! Um Draco and harry will take longer to get together, coz yeah they have to get over the whole hating each other thing, but something will happen in the near future that will bring them closer. Um Hermione and Ron will happen soonish. Im glad you really love it. I love writing it! Thanx heaps hun
Professor Calendula- heheh you are famous hunni! Lol, arnt I cool writing all this review reply crap! Hahaha. im glad you like being in my story your part will get bigger!
Alexis-greenleaf- im going to update as much as I can, im really glad you like it! Thanx for reviewing even though it was a while ago.
Kitty- yeah im sorry my chaps are short, they look heaps long in word and then when I put them on fanfic they look short as! Sorry and I soo kno this chap is like short as but I couldn't help it, coz it had to end before they went to the party coz the party should have its own chap. Sorry it took so long for me to reply. And im glad u like it.
Zelphie- im glad u think its cute, I love writing it.hehehe. umm I kno u reveiwed to like my frist chapter but yeah.lol.im writing it heere.lo..thanx for liking it and im glad you want more chaps. Il keep em coming if you keep reading and reviewing.
Dementedgal- im glad you like it. I will continue.I love writing ti n I don't care if no one reads it, I love writing it.heheh but keep reading!!
Okay that's like all the reviews ive gotten over the whole story! Lol.everyone keep reading and reviewing and crap coz yeah, I love reading your reviews and I love that everyone likes my story! Im gonna uplaod this now so toodles keep reading babies.kisses jade xox
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Chapter 7- getting dressed.
~*Ron's POV*~
Hermione looked absolutely amazing tonight. She pulled the angel thing off Remarkably. And I cannot believe she spent almost the entire evening in my arms. She is just so beautiful she absolutely took my breath away. But god was I mad when I saw Ginny. What the bloody hell did she think she was wearing? I couldn't smacked her one. Honestly she looked like a common prostitute.shes my baby sister!!! I'm going to give her a stern talking to later, but right now I have to get ready for that bloody party with the slimy Slytherins.
~*Draco's POV*~
damn that sexy Gryffindor goody- goody! Even when hes trying to look vulgar and ghosty he looks so damn sexy. I couldn't help but touch his butt tonight and by the way he looked, rather weak at the knees I don't believe he minded. I really don't know what to do about him, he MUST already know I want him, so I think its time to shamelessly flirt. As sophistically as possible of course, and I shall make him mine in no time. If all goes well at my after party tonight I wont have to wait too long at all.
~*Harry's POV*~
I COULD HAVE DIED WHEN Draco TOUCHED ME! My god and im sure he did it on purpose! But why would he?! Oh Hermione looked divine, if I wasn't so in love with Draco I would have kissed her tonight! WHAT?! Did I just say that? I'm not in love with Draco. sure he's sexy and he has an amazingly cute butt, but that's not all there it to loving someone.he isnt much of a nice person! I don't love him but I'd sure as hell like to make love to him a few times! SHIT I'M OBSESSED!? Oh fuck, what am I going to wear? I need to get him to notice me! I seem some fashion help from one of the girls.
~*Ginny's POV*~
Oh my god! Did you see the look on my brother's face when I walked in? PRICELESS! Hahahaha. I did looked amazing but god he looked so mad at me.I avoided his death glare all night. I'm so glad angelic Hermione took his breath away and saved my arse, she looked like a goddess. Hehehe and Draco wow did he look good? I saw 2 Hufflepuff girls faint as he walked in they actually fainted! He did look good though. I wonder whats gonna happen at the party tonight.?
~*Hermione's POV*~
Oh my god! I can't wait until tonight. Ron is such a sweetie, I can't believe harry convinced him to come to the after party tonight! It's going to be amazing! I absolutely cannot wait! I don't know what to wear! Oh my god I have to get ready!! I need to look good, Ron is basically mine, tonight I will make my move and I need to look just right!
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Harry climbed up the stairs to the boys dormitory. His transparency was starting to wear off and in about 15 minutes he would be fully human looking again. He opened his closet and looked through his clothes. He wanted to look good, he desperately needed to attract Draco's attention and with the blur and confusion of alcohol and lots of people tonight would be perfect to make some moves.
He pulled out a pair of jeans from his closet, pulled them no and looked into the mirror. They were nice and hugging around his hips and bagged around his legs and feet. He liked the way they looked and they did cling around his butt in a good way. He flipped through his shirts until he found a nice chocolate brown short sleeved crinkly shirt that clung slightly to his muscles. He wore it opened to just below his neck with some of his chest exposed. He wore a long silver chunky cross around his neck. He ran his hand through his hair to mess it up a little bit more. He gave the mirror a questioning look. "Nice?" "Very nice." It replied.
He jumped downstairs excitedly, at the bottom of the stairs Hermione, Ginny, and Ron were waiting for him.
Hermione was wearing tight jeans and a nice low cut singlet top. Her hair was shiny and long and straight she looked really beautiful. He could tell Ron thought the same.
Ginny was really low jeans and a little boob tube that showed a lot of cleavage. Her hair was down over he shoulders and she had a lot of make up on. Harry also noticed the way Ron was staring at her, he looked really angry.
Ron had scrubbed up rather well himself, he was wearing nice pants and a baggy shirt.
Hermione and Ginny smiled at harry as he walked downstairs. They walked out of the Gryffindor common room and made their way towards the Slytherin party.
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Okay just some final thoughts of mine beofre I upload this.I thought it would be long but it looked longer on paper and its pretty short and im sorry but eventually I will get to the party hehehe..i'm just evil and prolonging it. Mwahhahaha! You can spend your time imaginaing what will happen.hehehe.I just need to be in the right frame of mind to write it! Lol.. ;) but yeah anyways.I just wanna say thanx to those ppl who reviewed so yeah here goes:
Andromeda Summer- I'm updating now.im so sorry don't hurt me!! ARGHHH.lol.. yah im sorry with the delay in uploads I havent been home!
Professor Calendula- haha sweeti, I'm glad you like it, dressing up is fun! I shouldn't given you a costume though.sorry hun!
Kat- thanx, yeah now my story has direction its better ey? Um there isnt any harry/Draco smut but believe me baby there will be :D lol. eventually it will be in there.
Passionate-kisses - thanx, I will write more, ill try and be more regular and write like 2 chaps a night but its hard wit homeowkr and stuff. I have Tuesday off so ill write a few then! Keep reading it will get better!
Hypergurl20022- umm yeah Ginnys a bit off a she devil now, I like her this way. Ginny needs to be tough and confident with all the boys in her family. Next.well lots of stuff happens next, you have to keep reading :P
Freakishguardian- thanx, I'm glad you think its getting better and better, I must say I think it has improved. I don't know how long is gonna be and yeah keep reading! Hope you continue to like it! Yeah the seeing what ppl think is really good. I like that in stories so I put it in mine. It shows more and you can work things out better. I know Draco is soo yummy.at the end of this story when thesmut come I'll be soo living vicariously thru harry! Lol
Sapphire Raine- yeah its good that they are getting to know dif people. Hmmm. the party will be interesting, you'll just have to wait and see and im sorry you have to wait so long! My weekend has been hectic and now im just toying with ya by not writing it. But I promise it will be up by Tuesday night, probably before! Um Draco and harry will take longer to get together, coz yeah they have to get over the whole hating each other thing, but something will happen in the near future that will bring them closer. Um Hermione and Ron will happen soonish. Im glad you really love it. I love writing it! Thanx heaps hun
Professor Calendula- heheh you are famous hunni! Lol, arnt I cool writing all this review reply crap! Hahaha. im glad you like being in my story your part will get bigger!
Alexis-greenleaf- im going to update as much as I can, im really glad you like it! Thanx for reviewing even though it was a while ago.
Kitty- yeah im sorry my chaps are short, they look heaps long in word and then when I put them on fanfic they look short as! Sorry and I soo kno this chap is like short as but I couldn't help it, coz it had to end before they went to the party coz the party should have its own chap. Sorry it took so long for me to reply. And im glad u like it.
Zelphie- im glad u think its cute, I love writing it.hehehe. umm I kno u reveiwed to like my frist chapter but yeah.lol.im writing it heere.lo..thanx for liking it and im glad you want more chaps. Il keep em coming if you keep reading and reviewing.
Dementedgal- im glad you like it. I will continue.I love writing ti n I don't care if no one reads it, I love writing it.heheh but keep reading!!
Okay that's like all the reviews ive gotten over the whole story! Lol.everyone keep reading and reviewing and crap coz yeah, I love reading your reviews and I love that everyone likes my story! Im gonna uplaod this now so toodles keep reading babies.kisses jade xox
