While waiting for hope, she stood in the rain.
She listened for voices and nothing came.
Felt rain drop on her in agonizing pain.
Those standing 'round her have put her to shame.
* In all her hope she never thought he'd leave.
Against their horrid force she always fought.
With all their will she breaks and they succeed.
All life is shattered and now finally caught.
* Such are gone now and, once again, it is safe .
Loved one comes and to cover her he bows.
Later she may see the sun with heal'd face.
Tomorrow might be brighter but for now. . .
* -He picks up her body, ripped to pieces.
"I am afraid now, stay away" she says.
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A/N: ;_; Saddness! Not bad for my first poem years, I hope. Man, that's a crappy title.
We had to write sonnets in English class and this sorta came out. My teacher probably thinks I've been abused now. Ah well.
I don't really like the rhyme scheme, but that's what form it had to be in. If I'd rearranged the lines it would have been messed up.
It was written with Inu Yasha and Kagome in mind. I want to expand on it and will if I get enough requests to do so. So start begging!
I can't read your minds while you're sitting in your nice cushy computer chairs! You need to type some thing into the review box and post it. Any Requests? I'd love to hear them, I swear I don't bite!
-Hoshi
She listened for voices and nothing came.
Felt rain drop on her in agonizing pain.
Those standing 'round her have put her to shame.
* In all her hope she never thought he'd leave.
Against their horrid force she always fought.
With all their will she breaks and they succeed.
All life is shattered and now finally caught.
* Such are gone now and, once again, it is safe .
Loved one comes and to cover her he bows.
Later she may see the sun with heal'd face.
Tomorrow might be brighter but for now. . .
* -He picks up her body, ripped to pieces.
"I am afraid now, stay away" she says.
*~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~* *~*
A/N: ;_; Saddness! Not bad for my first poem years, I hope. Man, that's a crappy title.
We had to write sonnets in English class and this sorta came out. My teacher probably thinks I've been abused now. Ah well.
I don't really like the rhyme scheme, but that's what form it had to be in. If I'd rearranged the lines it would have been messed up.
It was written with Inu Yasha and Kagome in mind. I want to expand on it and will if I get enough requests to do so. So start begging!
I can't read your minds while you're sitting in your nice cushy computer chairs! You need to type some thing into the review box and post it. Any Requests? I'd love to hear them, I swear I don't bite!
-Hoshi