Beverly: Oy. Desperately short chapter O.o
Yuki: Don't tell them that. Well… whatever. I was going to have an extra scene with Anna, but I thought it would spoil it.
Beverly: And you were lazy.
Yuki: .O Was not! Anyway.
-To SilveryKitsune: It is Ren, he does die and the ending is happy. Well, I think it is. They'll meet in heaven. …Which is precisely what the sequel chapter will be about. But don't tell anyone that.
-To Ko-chan to Ya-chan: That was a… story. O.o;;; Well, anyway… oy, yes. Maybe I'll write a Ren+Yoh Horo+Yoh just for you. Maybe.
-To Bokutou no Ryu: O.o
Beverly: She's just shocked about the lemon
Yuki: O.o -a while later- o.o Well, anyway. I'll be writing more after the thankes.
-To Hao-sama rulze the world: *twitch* *twitch twitch* I thought I said against threats
Beverly: S/he was kidding. Kidding!
Yuki: -.-U
-To Jhaylin: no problem. After all, I get to show off the fact that I get reviews, unlike some people. *smirks*
Beverly: ;_; oy
-To sapphire-wolf1: sharky? *raises eyebrow* right, so anyway. Yes, he's definitely DEAD. Here you go.
-To unpredictable.l: …because it hurt him since he was in love with the younger shaman but goldy-eyes didn't seem to return his feelings. It wasn't so much hate as depression. I like hentai. Anyway. Thank you, my lemon skills aren't that great. And here's the next chapter -.-U
-To Tao Tasia: *crosses eyes* I missed something.
-To HaoAsakura9: *smirks* you lose.
Love. Anyway… hm. It seems people actually read this! I was wrong!!!!
Beverly: O.o!!
Yuki: What?
Beverly: You admitted you were wrong! O.o
Yuki: But here's the trick. If people don't read this part then they won't know I admitted it, so I would be right. Anyway, for those that like the lemon, I'll just keep from last chapter. =='Please…' Glowing chocolate emerged, watching him with an amused glimmer. He blew on the wet flesh, lips curving charmingly; the younger boy gasped, eyes wide. Yoh crawled upwards, sliding against heated skin. Curling calloused fingers in mauve strands, he cradled the adolescent's skull in his palm, lips hovering inches above the other's. 'What do you want, lover?' Ren groaned hoarsely. 'Please… Oh God.' 'Tell me what you want.' The King-to-be dragged his free palm down a swat-slicked cheek. The uke heaved, arching, fingers digging into scrapped skin. 'Please… take me…' Pale lids draped over dark brown, lecherous grin smearing his features. 'With pleasure.'== And there you go. To be finished in the sequel. *winks enticingly*
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Chimamire No Tenshi
Chapter 3- Konkyononai
"Ren!" He ran, falling to his knees before the sitting form and caressing his cheek. "I… I thought you said you were where you died…"
The angelical creature watched with large doe eyes, leaning into the ghostly touch. "I am. Oh Yoh, you killed me that day…"
Chocolate eyes watched him sadly before their owner leaned forwards, softly pressing his lips against the spirit's. It was brief, and simply long enough to warm both their hearts and hopes, if just a bit. The Shaman King rubbed the pad of his thumb against the phantom-boy's cheekbone. "Oh Ren, I'm so sorry."
"Yoh…"
A soft, sad smile adorned the living being's features.
"I-" The golden-eyes teen murmured quietly.
Their lips met again and the ghost allowed himself to be pushed back as he tried desperately to contain his tears. He was pressed against the red-stained sidewalk, sharp rocks biting into his back. His fingers buried themselves in Yoh's hair, accidentally brushing against the headphones. They clattered soundlessly to the floor; neither noticed as their pain and passion fell into their meeting lips and twisting tongues. But one of them needed to breathe, after all. Once the heated touch dissipated, they both refused to move, or open their eyes, lest it was a dream. After a long time, gleaming gold unveiled once again. "Yoh…"
A thin finger pressed against his lips, silencing him. "Shh… You have nothing to say. This is entirely my fault."
"Yoh…!"
The chocolate-eyed teen suddenly slammed his fist into the pavement, breathing harshly. Unfortunately, it did not have the desired effect. Instead of keeping silent, the ghost turned fearful and screamed out what he'd been trying to say. "Yoh, I love you!"
The object of his affections jerked away, tears suddenly streaming from his eyes. "No! Ren! I told you to be quiet!" Light seemed to burst from the bloody boy, white-feathered wings of light adorning his back as he began his assent. He watched the other with a sorrowful, confused expression as he vanished into the clouds above. Now truly alone, Yoh fell against the pavement and sobbed. "I told you to stay quiet… Oh god, why didn't you listen…? Why? Why?" He wailed to the heavens. "REN!"
--Fin--
Well, what do you think? Just to clarify, Ren went to heaven. Anyway, I was going to do a sequel. But only if I get at least 20 reviews altogether. Which shouldn't be too hard, I think I have 18 O.o How weird.
Tiger of the Fire [my best friend, thank you very much. Check her stuff out if you like Harry Potter]: @_@ *Has no idea what the chapter was about at all… still stuck on the lemon*
Beverly: I'm surrounded by hentais -.-UUU
Yuki: *smirks, wiggles brows suggestively* Why don't you join us?