OK, if you looked at the reviews, some idiot said some parts were "false".
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Good! Oh, and the person who asked about the whip: It said he bawled.
Story:
Mokuba was immobilized there, in fear. His brother was somewhere, Yugi was hurt, and he was all alone.
Just like before, when he awoke that one fateful morning-right here! Then he glanced around, anxious. Was that whip or metal bar going to lash out at him again?
It had happened before, causing him to distrust everyone. He didn't even fully trust Seto anymore. Or Yuugi. He back to the door, falling into a pit, hitting the hard, cold floor. He faintly heard flowing water in front of him. He saw someone climb out, gasping for air.
Seto!
Kaiba looked up, eyes scared. Mokuba noticed Seto acted so strangely lately, crying like when their father had died.
Like Mokuba had died.
Yugi woke up. He sat up shakily, looking all around. There was Mokuba, backed in a corner, cowering like a beaten cat and/or dog (sorry, I love the "and/or" stuff!). Kaiba realized Yugi was okay for now.
"Mokuba! How'd you get down here?" Then he noticed the shallow hole.
"C'mon, were heading out." Kaiba got Mokuba and Yugi out of the hole and then pulled himself out. He got them both to his house.
They were alive. Yugi leaned against a door then looked at Kaiba.
"Why did you rescue me, Kaiba?"
Mokuba was freezing cold so he went to the couch, picked up a blanket and wrapped it around himself. "Yeah, why did you rescue him?"
Kaiba narrowed his eyes. "It doesn't matter now. Anyways, Yugi, you should lie down for a while. You too, Mokuba."
Yugi nodded. "Anyways, thanks. See you. . ." Yugi fled then.
Mokuba was on the couch, watching his brother. He was staring out after Yuugi.
****
The story will now temporarily switch over to Yugi:
Yugi was whisked back to where he started. The girl smirked.
"You haven't eluded us yet, Yugi Mutoh. Neither has that runt, Mokuba! He'll be joining you later."
Mokuba was immobilized there, in fear. His brother was somewhere, Yugi was hurt, and he was all alone.
Just like before, when he awoke that one fateful morning-right here! Then he glanced around, anxious. Was that whip or metal bar going to lash out at him again?
It had happened before, causing him to distrust everyone. He didn't even fully trust Seto anymore. Or Yuugi. He back to the door, falling into a pit, hitting the hard, cold floor. He faintly heard flowing water in front of him. He saw someone climb out, gasping for air.
Seto!
Kaiba looked up, eyes scared. Mokuba noticed Seto acted so strangely lately, crying like when their father had died.
Like Mokuba had died.
Yugi woke up. He sat up shakily, looking all around. There was Mokuba, backed in a corner, cowering like a beaten cat and/or dog (sorry, I love the "and/or" stuff!). Kaiba realized Yugi was okay for now.
"Mokuba! How'd you get down here?" Then he noticed the shallow hole.
"C'mon, were heading out." Kaiba got Mokuba and Yugi out of the hole and then pulled himself out. He got them both to his house.
They were alive. Yugi leaned against a door then looked at Kaiba.
"Why did you rescue me, Kaiba?"
Mokuba was freezing cold so he went to the couch, picked up a blanket and wrapped it around himself. "Yeah, why did you rescue him?"
Kaiba narrowed his eyes. "It doesn't matter now. Anyways, Yugi, you should lie down for a while. You too, Mokuba."
Yugi nodded. "Anyways, thanks. See you. . ." Yugi fled then.
Mokuba was on the couch, watching his brother. He was staring out after Yuugi.
****
The story will now temporarily switch over to Yugi:
Yugi was whisked back to where he started. The girl smirked.
"You haven't eluded us yet, Yugi Mutoh. Neither has that runt, Mokuba! He'll be joining you later."