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Chapter 3: The Ring
Author's Note: Thanks so much for reviewing my fic. It was great to know that people actually liked it. I know that I have not been quite true to the characters but this is the way I pictured them when I wrote it. It's just that usually they are funny and comical and I wanted to show a more sensitive side to everyone. Anyways sorry again if you don't agree. I hope you like this chapter. Sorry it took so long for me to write more. Sorry its not as good as the others. Hopefully Chapter 4 will come out faster!
Ren and Twitty left they're conversation alone. They decided to forget about the kiss, on Ren's persuasion. Twitty decided to keep his feelings for Ren to remain a secret. He knew she still cared for Bobby. He hated knowing that. He would wait though. Wait for her to reach her senses and realize that they were meant for each other. The kiss still remained on his mind. Her hips had been softly on his. He remembered everything about her at that moment. The scent of her hair, the taste of her lips' gloss and the silkiness of her skin against his. Bobby was an ass. He had heard that he would find a way to win Ren back. Twitty laughed at the thought. Ren was too smart to fall for him again.
*Ring ring*
"Stevens' residences, Ren speaking," said Ren, cheerily.
"Ren? Please don't hang up, it's me Bobby," said the voice on the other line.
"Why the hell shouldn't I, you cheating bastard!" Her tone changed. She was suddenly filled with rage as she yelled at the receiver.
"Please, Ren. Just let me come over! I need to talk to you!"
"There is nothing you can say!" With that, she hung up. She began up the stairs when the doorbell rang. She sighed and turned back. She opened the door. She collapsed that the sight before her. The person at the door knelt over her delicate body.
"Ren, Ren, please. wake up." Ren did not move. Bobby closed the door and carried Ren up the stairs to her bedroom. He laid her down upon the bed and waited until she awoke. Ren began to stir. Her eyes oped to Bobby smiling face. Ren gasped and god up as quickly as she could. Her head spinned.
"What the hell did you do to me? Get out! I don't want you in this house ever!"
"Ren, please, hear me out, give me 5 minutes. please!" Bobby looked as if he were going to cry. Ren felt her heart break all over again. Reluctantly she agreed but began to time him. She still felt for him but doubts clouded her mind constantly.
"Ren, I know that its been a week or two since that day that you broke up with me, since you found out about what I did but after you gave me that jacket I realized what I had lost. You are the most beautiful girl I have ever met. Youre the smartest and I have never regretted anything more that what I did to you."
"Bobby stop, please. don't do this to me."
"Just hear me out.Mandy meant nothing to me, I don't know why I did what I did. She is nowhere as pretty as you. I'll never find someone like. My promise is true. I won't hurt you anymore. I'm all torn up I don't know what to do, I feel so down and out, won't you tell me, hurry up and tell me what love is all about, girl, you're driving me crazy, can't you see baby, I'll do anything for you. You're the only thing on my mind since that day you left me. The day you broke up with me, I watched you go, I didn't leave that spot for moments at a time, every time I passed that spot I was reminded of you, every time, I walked through school I couldn't help but feel my heart break. Ren, I'm sorry I waited for so long to tell you this, it's just that I've been trying to find a way to make it up to you. Ren, it's just that I've been saving up for this." Bobby presented her with a small black velvet box. She opened it to find a sterling silver ring, engraved with, "I HEART YOU" (There was a heart on the ring instead of the word)
Ren tried to keep in her tears and keep her voice from quivering as she said, "You 'heart' me, Bobby?" She took the ring from its smooth case and began to slip it on her finger.
"No. Ren."
"You can have it back then!" she said angrily as she threw it at his chest.
He picked up the ring and said gently, "I don't heart you. I love you, Ren." Tears spilled from her eyes as he slipped the ring onto her marriage ring finger.
"Bobby. I. I don't know what to say." she cried as she looked at the beautiful ring upon her finger. Bobby put a finger to her lips to stop her from going any further.
"Ren, it's fine, I hurt you, you wanted to forget, I understand."
"Bobby. please. just shutup and kiss me!"
"But, Ren." Ren wouldn't take no for an answer. she pressed her lips tightly against his and kissed him like she had never kissed anyone before. This was beyond a crush, beyond anything she had ever felt before. she might have been in love with him. Twitty was pushed to the back of her mind. She couldn't help but feel guilty but Bobby was what she wanted right now. She was sorry.
Chapter 3: The Ring
Author's Note: Thanks so much for reviewing my fic. It was great to know that people actually liked it. I know that I have not been quite true to the characters but this is the way I pictured them when I wrote it. It's just that usually they are funny and comical and I wanted to show a more sensitive side to everyone. Anyways sorry again if you don't agree. I hope you like this chapter. Sorry it took so long for me to write more. Sorry its not as good as the others. Hopefully Chapter 4 will come out faster!
Ren and Twitty left they're conversation alone. They decided to forget about the kiss, on Ren's persuasion. Twitty decided to keep his feelings for Ren to remain a secret. He knew she still cared for Bobby. He hated knowing that. He would wait though. Wait for her to reach her senses and realize that they were meant for each other. The kiss still remained on his mind. Her hips had been softly on his. He remembered everything about her at that moment. The scent of her hair, the taste of her lips' gloss and the silkiness of her skin against his. Bobby was an ass. He had heard that he would find a way to win Ren back. Twitty laughed at the thought. Ren was too smart to fall for him again.
*Ring ring*
"Stevens' residences, Ren speaking," said Ren, cheerily.
"Ren? Please don't hang up, it's me Bobby," said the voice on the other line.
"Why the hell shouldn't I, you cheating bastard!" Her tone changed. She was suddenly filled with rage as she yelled at the receiver.
"Please, Ren. Just let me come over! I need to talk to you!"
"There is nothing you can say!" With that, she hung up. She began up the stairs when the doorbell rang. She sighed and turned back. She opened the door. She collapsed that the sight before her. The person at the door knelt over her delicate body.
"Ren, Ren, please. wake up." Ren did not move. Bobby closed the door and carried Ren up the stairs to her bedroom. He laid her down upon the bed and waited until she awoke. Ren began to stir. Her eyes oped to Bobby smiling face. Ren gasped and god up as quickly as she could. Her head spinned.
"What the hell did you do to me? Get out! I don't want you in this house ever!"
"Ren, please, hear me out, give me 5 minutes. please!" Bobby looked as if he were going to cry. Ren felt her heart break all over again. Reluctantly she agreed but began to time him. She still felt for him but doubts clouded her mind constantly.
"Ren, I know that its been a week or two since that day that you broke up with me, since you found out about what I did but after you gave me that jacket I realized what I had lost. You are the most beautiful girl I have ever met. Youre the smartest and I have never regretted anything more that what I did to you."
"Bobby stop, please. don't do this to me."
"Just hear me out.Mandy meant nothing to me, I don't know why I did what I did. She is nowhere as pretty as you. I'll never find someone like. My promise is true. I won't hurt you anymore. I'm all torn up I don't know what to do, I feel so down and out, won't you tell me, hurry up and tell me what love is all about, girl, you're driving me crazy, can't you see baby, I'll do anything for you. You're the only thing on my mind since that day you left me. The day you broke up with me, I watched you go, I didn't leave that spot for moments at a time, every time I passed that spot I was reminded of you, every time, I walked through school I couldn't help but feel my heart break. Ren, I'm sorry I waited for so long to tell you this, it's just that I've been trying to find a way to make it up to you. Ren, it's just that I've been saving up for this." Bobby presented her with a small black velvet box. She opened it to find a sterling silver ring, engraved with, "I HEART YOU" (There was a heart on the ring instead of the word)
Ren tried to keep in her tears and keep her voice from quivering as she said, "You 'heart' me, Bobby?" She took the ring from its smooth case and began to slip it on her finger.
"No. Ren."
"You can have it back then!" she said angrily as she threw it at his chest.
He picked up the ring and said gently, "I don't heart you. I love you, Ren." Tears spilled from her eyes as he slipped the ring onto her marriage ring finger.
"Bobby. I. I don't know what to say." she cried as she looked at the beautiful ring upon her finger. Bobby put a finger to her lips to stop her from going any further.
"Ren, it's fine, I hurt you, you wanted to forget, I understand."
"Bobby. please. just shutup and kiss me!"
"But, Ren." Ren wouldn't take no for an answer. she pressed her lips tightly against his and kissed him like she had never kissed anyone before. This was beyond a crush, beyond anything she had ever felt before. she might have been in love with him. Twitty was pushed to the back of her mind. She couldn't help but feel guilty but Bobby was what she wanted right now. She was sorry.