Disclaimer: Nope don't own it.
A.N: SORRY I DIDN'T UPDATE! First of all my internet kept on disconnecting every few minutes so I couldn't see my reviews, when I got that fixed I found out Harry Potter and the order of the phoenix was coming out June 21st and I was so happy! [Does a victory dance] ok then my brother deleted the chapter, I had only written three pages but still I nearly cried!
I will update this story next week, same time coz I have to get ready for school, uniform, I.D, new mobile phone etc.
About a beta-reader, I got like five people and I cannot select from that so if you want to be my beta, review and the first person will get the job.
Big hugs and thanks to…
Ice diamonds, A little someone, Fifi, Sakura li 2389, sweet Sakura, tensai yuki, S+S4ever, Carolyn, Anavi, Kushi, Ai no senshi, Queen lexi, Fantasy star, Fuschia, Luvya, Ali, Itty bitty, A little someone, swonderus, liza, broken wings, Crystal, lunemangulus, Kinomoto, Ashley, Mahou cherry blossom, Nancy, Heavenly anime angel, Zara, embattled curve, Yvonne, Genna, rainbow dreamer, luckyducky7too, innocent sake, wings of fire, Kary, summer heat, Kawaii cherry wolf, Faithjhonston, kan-chan, bunny459, Monserrat T, cherry blossom, ItokoMeilin05, dream, confused, peonyqt1004, pink lover, athar luna, lil ruby devil, shadow, carol, missy r and Ash night.
Ash night: Thanks for reviewing and that awfully nice input 'bout my story! I totally love you fic "trials of fate"
Pink lover: You'll fine out soon!
Ice diamond: Thank you! People usually get angry with me for making Meiling like that.
Athar Luna: Thanks for your review! I can't wait to write the bit where Syaoran goes all mushy too! Yeah I know, meiling is very slutty, nearly killed me making her like that, in actual life I like her!
Fifi: Nelson! Cool! Anyway how old are you?
Sweet Sakura: Yep lucky number 310!
Tensai yuki: I know, I felt it lacked something too, thanks for you honest opinion!
Ai no senshi: I'm trying to be fair; first one who reviews and wanted the job gets it.
Luvya: Yay! Another Kiwi go NZ! Yeah I like Roswell, was disappointed by the end of it though…
Itty-bitty: How was the big day out? I didn't go, I went to rumba, too "poppish" Did you see blindspott, they are like so cool!
A little someone: I'm a mix of Indian, paki, afghan and white blood. Got tannish skin, you get the picture right? I'd tell you in details but it's to confusing for my own good ^_^
Crystal: I get my ideas from whatever I see read etc… thanks for you review!
Lunemangulus: beta reader is someone who proof reads a fic, don't worry you're not ignorant! ^_^
Nancy: Why are you proud of yourself? It's nothing; I know I always start talking bout Ryan too!
Summer heat: Hehehe… Australia didn't even make it to the America's cup, I guess it's the only thing NZ always wins over Aussie, but we do win the cricket/netball/rugby sometimes…
Monserrat T: Have fun at the beach, yeah I kinda got my idea from cherry, was that her name?
Shadow: So you like in New York? Cool city, would love to visit it but wouldn't want to live there, but then again, that's just me
Itokomeilin05: I still haven't decided about the future of CI.
Confused: Evil teachers… hope you did well in you exam!
Sorry for that long thank you note, the story itself will be 5 pages so don't worry!
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Meiling put her brush down and grabbed her mobile phone. She dialed a number and held the phone by he ear.
"Hello!" Said a cheerful voice.
"Hi Michelle this is Meling and I was wondering if you can come over to my house tonight. I was thinking of gong to a club down town tonight."
"Oh like oh my god! A club? My mum would be mad, but of coarse I'll come over! It would like so cool going with some one as cool as you!"
This was perfect! Meiling could use Michelle against Syaoran and Kinomoto.
"Ok come over right now!" Said Meiling.
And so it began…
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Chapter 8- the club
"Sakura are you cold?" Asked Derek. The two were walking to the lake after their date and it was very chilly. Sakura shook her head, she gasped as the lake came into view, and it was reflecting the full moon, giving it a haunting yet peaceful and calm look.
"It's pretty isn't it?" Commented Derek. Sakura nodded. The wind was making gentle ripples on the surface of the water; Sakura kneeled by the lake and stared at her reflection in the water. It was clear, occasionally disrupted by the gentle waves.
"It's so peaceful" Muttered Sakura.
"Yeah it is." Said Derek as he came closer to Sakura.
Sakura smiled, the date with Derek had gone well, first they went to a restaurant and then went to the movies. Derek had been amazing, he didn't try to kiss her or do anything to make Sakura uncomfortable.
Sakura dipped her hands into the freezing water; it was refreshing but freezing cold. Derek too kneeled down; he stared at Sakura's carefree face, watching her in interest as she played with the water. Sakura soon withdrew her hands for the cold liquid and wiped her hands on her clothes. She liked Derek but not in that way, Sakura knew she didn't love him
The wind blew, making Sakura shiver; her hands were numb from the cold. She stood up and turned to Derek, "I think we should go back."
"Sure, I'll walk you home." Said Derek, He stood up and took Sakura's hand into his own and the couple walked back to Sakura house.
"Thank you for that amazing night." Said Sakura when they reached her front door. "But" She continued, "I don't think I'll go out with you again."
"Why not?" Asked Derek, obviously looking hurt.
"I just don't you think you are the one" Said Sakura truthfully.
Ok, I'll see you on Monday at school." Said Derek softly. Sakura turned to open the door.
"Okay, um…Sakura..." Said Derek Shyly. "Can I kiss you goodnight?"
Sakura smiled, a little kiss won't hurt right? "Sure"
Derek slowly put his lips on Sakura's and gently kissed her.
Sakura was breathless when it was over, she had an unknown feeling, not like the one when she kissed Syaoran, and it wasn't love or lust. Sakura opened the door, "bye Derek."
"Bye Sakura." Said Derek and he turned and walked down the stairs of the patio to go home. Sakura smiled and entered her house, closing the door behind her…
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The music was loud and the lights were bright and flashing. It was enough to make a normal person dizzy but Meiling was used to it unlike Michelle who kept blinking her blue eyes and shaking her head, the two girls were sitting on stools drinking Baileys.
"We have to dance." Said Meiling as she put down her empty bottle.
Michelle kept on sipping the remaining of her drink; her straw making rude noises as there wasn't much left. "What?"
Meiling rolled her eyes, what an immature girl. "I said we have to go dance." She said a little louder.
Michelle withdrew her mouth from the straw and put the bottle down. "What I still can't hear you!"
Meiling wanted to punch her face in, "I SAID WE HAVE TO GO AND DANCE!" She yelled.
"Okay come on!" Said Michelle, flipping her curly blond over her shoulder. She was wearing a bright pink PVC tank top and Meiling's tight leather mini skirt, since she had no skirts that were fit for clubbing. They stood up and started to walk to the dance floor.
Meiling screwed her face in disgust; Michelle was walking all lanky and was itching her nose. But Meiling knew she couldn't ditch her now, she was too important in her plan.
"I LOVE this song!" yelled Michelle as Mary J. Blige's "family affair" came on. Michelle grabbed Meiling's hand and started dancing.
"Meiling!" Yelled a new voice. Thank god, sighed Meiling, she was safe from Michelle's dancing's clutches.
Meiling turned around, it was Anthony from school, he was senior and he was with his brother Jason who was a freshman.
"Michelle, you dance with Jason over there while I dance with Anthony." Said Meiling.
"Okay!" Said Michelle and her and Jason started dancing with Jason trying to avoid her shoes and her fist.
Anthony led Meiling to another part of the dance floor. "Why were you with her? He asked, looking at Michelle's direction.
"Oh, we're friends, I decided to show her how to go clubbing. And tomorrow I'm hoping to show her the sights of Tomoeda." Said Meiling.
Anthony looked suspiciously at Meiling, he heard many rumors about Meiling but they were only rumors, so they couldn't do anything without evidence. "Oh."
Meiling smiled innocently, so innocently that no one would have guessed what evil things she was planning…
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Sakura lay on her bed, thinking about everything. About Syaoran, Derek and for some weird reason Meiling. Sakura didn't know why but she was giving her the creeps, it was like her conscience was telling her something but what?
Suddenly she was jerked out of her thoughts as the phone rang.
"Sakura it's for you!" Yelled her dad. Sakura rolled over on her bed a grabbed the phone.
"Hello" She said.
"Hey." Said a familiar voice. It was Syaoran.
"How did you find my phone number Syaoran?" Asked Sakura.
"I know many things bout you Sakura." He replied.
Sakura played with the wires, "so why did you call me this late, it's nearly ten thirty."
"I wanted to know how your date went."
Sakura sighed, why would he want to know about her date? Even Tomoyo hadn't called yet, but Sakura knew she would call tomorrow. "It went wonderful, better than I expected."
"Oh, ok." Said Syaoran. "I just wanted to know, well bye."
"Syaoran wait!" Said Sakura but Syaoran hung up, Sakura wanted tell him that she broke up with Derek and she wanted to ask some questions about Meiling, "darn it" she cursed. She would have to ask questions later, for now she needed some sleep….
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"Wow Meiling that was the BEST!" Exclaimed Michelle.
"Well that was only one of the hot spots in Tomoeda." Said Meiling. It was nearly one and her and Michelle were at Meiling's house after about 4 hours of partying.
"It's so awfully nice of you to show me around." Said Michelle.
Meiling gave a fake laugh, "Well what are friends for, I mean we are friends aren't we?"
"Best friends!" Said Michelle and she gave Meiling a hug, she was pleased that she had made friends with one of the most popular girls at Tomoeda high. Meiling rolled her eyes as she was hugged. Suddenly a horrid stench met Meiling's nostrils, She made a face 'stupid girl can't even use a deodorant'
Michelle finally let go of Meiling who was glad she wasn't touching sweating girl.
"Any way I heard Tai ling likes you." Said Meiling.
"What? No way, I can't believe he likes me. I've had a crush on him since the beginning of the year!" Said Michelle.
"Oh you do? Well then you need to get him!"
"How?" Asked Michelle.
"Leave it to me…" Said Meiling.
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As quickly as it came it went and before Sakura knew it the weekend was over and a new week of school began.
Sakura grabbed her bag and made way to the mathematics classroom.
"Sakura!" Yelled someone. Sakura turned to see Syaoran running up to her.
"Hey" Said Sakura.
Once at her side Syaoran slowed down his pace to hers. "Hi."
"How are you doing?" Asked Sakura, playing with a strand of her hair.
Syaoran smirked, she looked so cute and it was only a matter of time she was his.
"I'm fine and you?"
"Okay I guess but I broke up with Derek." Said Sakura.
Syaoran froze when he heard her say that, he wanted to scream out in joy but kept his posture, "How come you didn't tell me before when I called?"
"I was about to but you hung up." Said Sakura as they entered the mathematics classroom. No one but them had arrived yet.
Syaoran moved closer to Sakura so that her chest molded into his. Sakura shivered when he brought his face to her ear, "So this means you're single?" Syaoran licked her earlobe. His test was still on, but he knew a little toying around with Sakura wouldn't fail him, unless of coarse he slept with her but there was no chance of that happening yet…
Syaoran ran his hands across Sakura's stomach. Se tried to stifle a moan but failed at it.
Suddenly the doorknob turned, Syaoran immediately let go of Sakura as the student entered the room.
"Bloody bastard." Swore Syaoran quietly so Sakura didn't hear him. Un known to him two pairs of eyes were watching him…
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Meiling smirked as Derek fumed.
"She lied to me, why did she even go out with me in the first place? Did she pity me?" Said Derek. To him, all that shit about not being that one was bullshit, but he was wanted her back and always got what he want.
"Well I know a way for you to get her back." Said Meiling, "You in?"
Derek gritted his teeth, "Yes, yes I am."
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Next chapter: Meiling continues her evil plan and Syaoran continues his. Has he fallen for Sakura and she for him? And what will Meiling do with Michelle and Derek?
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A.N: Wow! I'm tired! Well review and I'm hoping to reach 360 reviews. I'll write the next chapter soon and send it to my beta-reader. So anyway please review!
Hehehe… Meiling's is trying to get both Tai and Derek, read the next chapter to see what happens!!!
Oh yeah, if ya need to read a good fic while this is still getting written, go read "A trial of fate" By Ash night, it's really good!
Anyway, I'm just so HAPPY! Harry potter and the order of the phoenix! YAY!!!
I was wondering, Could anyone here draw some pics for my fic? I can draw well, but my coloring sucks and I don't have a scanner!
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