Cruel Intentions
A.N: Yay I'm finally writing this chapter! Well I have a very good excuse on why I'm SO late, school! I started school on last Wednesday and it's a new school and it's SO huge! When I come home I watch TV, go on the Internet, have a shower, eat dinner and hit the books, and then go to sleep at nine because I'm so exhausted.
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Thanks to my Beta reader Sakura, I sent this chapter to all people who wanted to be my beta and Sakura was the first to respond so she got the part.
And a big thank you to Cherry blossom Sakura; she's going to draw some pics so expect some soon!
Thanks to carol, bunny 459, Ash night, luckyducky7too, sweet~sakura, Cherry blossom, Yuen, Tale weaver, licybabe2002, Clytia, kutiexaznxangel, Sheryl v, dream, itokomeilin5, lil, Amanda panda, kinomoto, fuschia, red cherry blossom, falling star, Niki-chan, Monserrat T, Kawaii-cherry wolf, cherry blossom, crystal, kristiexxnyugen, fifi, melly l, Itty bitty, scarlet, blayde, dark lighten shadow, me, lilsweetcherryblossom, babyq2988, kan-chan, Sakura kinomoto, Nameknailgirl, Sakura^-^Syaoran, tensai-yuki, peonyqt1004, Nancy, Angela, Cherry blossom Sakura, Zara, liza, kawaiiteddybear, Rika332, and harpy lady. I'm sorry if I've missed anyone out or didn't answer your question, I just skimmed through!
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Meiling smirked as Derek fumed.
"She lied to me, why did she even go out with me in the first place? Did she pity me?" Said Derek. To him, all that shit about not being "the one" was bullshit, but he wanted her back and always got what he wanted.
"Well I know a way for you to get her back," Said Meiling, "You in?"
Derek gritted his teeth, "Yes, yes I am."
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Chapter 9- The Temptation
Sakura felt like eyes were boring into her, she could feel someone's gaze watching her every move. She was right; Syaoran was sitting behind her, his eyes not leaving Sakura. It was as if he was stripping her down with his eyes.
Syaoran was close to getting Sakura and he knew it, her reactions said it all, she wanted him. Sakura was totally oblivious to Syaoran's deal with Meiling, she knew that Syaoran wanted her and she hated to admit but she wanted him as well.
The bell rang, signaling the end of their double period of math. Sakura gathered her things and walked out of the door, Syaoran close behind her. Sakura made her way down the corridor and spotted Tomoyo talking to Eriol. She smiled as she saw a flushed Tomoyo and that blue haired boy with a tinge of pink on his face.
"Hey Tomoyo, hey Eriol," said Sakura.
Tomoyo turned to look at Sakura, "Hey Sakura! I see you remember Eriol."
Sakura nodded, "So you two going out?"
Both Eriol and Tomoyo turned red, "Well err…" said Eriol.
Sakura laughed, "Well I'll leave you two alone." She turned and left the blushing couple.
Sakura felt that same sensation again, like the one when Syaoran was watching her, Sakura looked to see garnet eyes on her. It was Meiling with Shaycha and Cho.
"Well, well, well, if it ain't Sakura Kinomoto." drawled Meiling.
Sakura didn't like this girl in the beginning and now she hated her even more every second. "Yeah it's me"
"Well I'd like to congratulate you on your article." said Meiling. "But who are you to criticize something that you've never experience before, you're just some girl who can't get shagged and uses a stupid vow as an excuse." Meiling's friends nodded in agreement.
Sakura was first speechless, then angry. Finally Sakura found her mouth and let out all the pent up anger.
"Well at least I'm not a slut who sleeps with anything standing on two legs and stays still enough. I mean look at you, the only way you get attention is by selling off your body by wearing those microscopic clothes." Sakura paused to take a breath.
"No one wants to go out with you, the only reason they go out with you is for your body and sex. In reality you are just some poor soul who can't get a guy that'll love you and not your body." She continued.
Meiling clenched her fists into balls; Kinomoto will get it for opening her big mouth,
"If I was you Kinomoto, I'd watch my back." Meiling stuck her nose into the air and walked off, Cho and Shaycha in tow.
"What was that about?" Sakura said to no one.
[The next bit is a little naughty, so beware]
"What was what about?" said a deep masculine voice. Sakura didn't get the time to answer because a pair of strong hands grabbed her by the waist and pulled her into the empty Biology classroom.
Sakura turned to meet a hard and sculptured chest, she looked up and saw amber eyes looking into her own. Sakura quickly looked away.
"Well?" said Syaoran, smirking at Sakura's reaction.
"Meiling, she dissed my article"
Syaoran lowered his mouth to her ear, "It doesn't matter what she thinks, she's just jealous. What girl wouldn't be? You're beautiful, smart, sexy, talented and the list goes on."
Sakura gulped as Syaoran ran his lips across her jawbone and sucked on her chin.
"Syaoran." She managed to get out. "If you do this you would fail the test.
"I would but at least I would have you." Syaoran pulled Sakura into a bruising kiss, Sakura put her hands around his neck and kissed back, she felt like she was in heaven and she wanted, no needed more.
Syaoran moved to kiss her neck and then her shoulder, "Syaoran" moaned Sakura.
Syaoran felt even more turned on when he heard Sakura moan his name with lust and desire. He wanted her right there and now on the teachers desk. Syaoran carefully picked Sakura up and she wrapped her lags around his torso. Syaoran kissed her again as Sakura ran her hands through his hair.
Syaoran kissed her more deeply when Sakura pulled away, reality slapping her in the face.
" I-I can't!" she stuttered. "Not here, not like this, please no."
Syaoran took one look at her emerald eyes filling with tears and he turned and walked out of the classroom, leaving Sakura alone as the tears came sliding down her cheek.
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He was so close, Syaoran growled. But he had to understand Sakura didn't want her first time to be in a classroom and on top of a teacher's desk. But now "his little friend" needed to play. Syaoran walked cautiously making sure his problem wasn't exposed to the public.
Syaoran saw Derek in his path, glaring at him.
Syaoran casually ignored him and tried to walk pass him but Derek stopped him by grabbing his shoulder.
"Syaoran Li," said Derek.
"Yoshi" glared Syaoran.
"I see you are getting comfy with Sakura aren't ya?"
Syaoran narrowed his eyes, what the fuck did Derek think he was playing at? Did he see them in the biology classroom?
"What do you mean?"
"Don't play games with me Li, I saw you this morning is the math's classroom, you were all over her like some sort of dog. What are you trying to do? Seduce her and dump her like you do with the others? Well you can't cause Sakura is mine."
Syaoran smirked, and Derek was supposed to be some shy kid? Well it looked like he was showing his true colors.
"Well newsflash, Sakura wants me, you saw how she acted in the math's classroom, why don't you just back off?"
Derek snarled, "Enjoy your time with Sakura while it lasts, because she'll be back in my arms before you know it."
"Whatever you say," said Syaoran and he walked pass Derek.
Derek's nails dug into his palms as Syaoran coolly walked off, 'Watch it Syaoran Li, Sakura will be mine.'
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Meiling had to forget about Kinomoto for now, right now she had to other things; first she had to get Tai Ling with Michelle.
"So Meiling! What are you going to do next?" asked Cho.
Meiling fixed her boob tube and pulled down her shorts a little so it showed more stomach than it already did, it was so short, and tight it should have been illegal to wear them in public.
"I'm gonna make Michelle one happy girl, but that won't last long."
"Why, what will happen?" Asked Shaycha.
"Just wait and see." said Meiling as they passed a group of boys, one of them being Tai Ling.
She gave Shaycha and Cho a look and they scurried away. Meiling walked up to Tai, swaying her hips side to side,
"So Tai, you wouldn't believe what I just found out…I heard that Michelle Chang has a thing for you."
Tai raised an eyebrow, was Meiling telling the truth, or was she after him; he hesitantly spoke, "Really?"
"Yeah." Answered Meiling, "I'm sure she would accept if you ask her out on a date."
"Oh yeah, uh okay, thanks," said Tai.
Meiling walked away, her plan was all falling into place.
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Sakura cautiously approached Syaoran's apartment door. She knocked and waited for him to answer the door. It was freezing and she had forgotten her coat.
She saw movement through the glass and heard someone unlock the door.
Syaoran opened the door to see Sakura standing there in the cold shivering, "Sakura! It's nine o' clock, what are you doing here?" he enquired.
"I came to talk to you and apologize," said Sakura as Li motioned for her to come in. Sakura stepped into the apartment; the electric fireplace was on, heating the apartment.
Sakura took a seat, "Syaoran, I'm sorry for leading you on, I'm just not in love yet."
"You're not in love?" Said Syaoran, "You don't call this love? Admit it you love and want me."
"Yes, I love you Syaoran, and yes, I want you too, but I just don't know!" said Sakura.
"What do you mean you don't know?" asked Syaoran.
"I don't know if I'm ready!" yelled Sakura.
Syaoran walked closer to Sakura, "There you go, preaching about waiting for love, well here it is! What do you have to lose?"
"What do you mean, unlike you I'm going to be losing my virginity," said Sakura.
"Well you're going to lose it to the person you love. Think about it, if you reject me one day you'll be facing a loveless life knowing you once had that chance with love but turned your back against it."
Sakura looked down, "I just can't."
"Well if you have nothing to say the just leave." said Syaoran in a harsh voice.
"Syaoran, don't do this!" Tears welled up in Sakura's eyes.
Syaoran ignored her and walked to the door of his room. "Just leave." He entered his room and closed the door behind.
Tears ran down Sakura's cheek as she went to Syaoran's door and opened it. Syaoran was sitting on the bed; he looked up when Sakura entered. "What do you want?"
Sakura didn't say anything; instead she walked up to Syaoran, tears still running down her cheek. Sakura sat down on Syaoran's lap and wrapped her legs around him; she looked up and kissed him.
"F-fine, you can have me." She said in a shaky voice. Sakura started to unbutton her blouse.
"Are you sure?" asked Syaoran.
Sakura nodded and he laid Sakura on his bed, He got on the bed and looked at Sakura. She looked so helpless with her tear stained cheeks.
"No," said Syaoran.
Sakura was confused, "What?"
Syaoran got off his bed, "I can't do this, I'm sorry."
"Why?" said Sakura, more tears running down, she had given herself to him and now Syaoran was refusing her?
"Just leave." said Syaoran.
"But-" Sakura started but was cut of by Syaoran.
"Now."
Sakura got up and buttoned her blouse; giving one last look at Syaoran she opened the door and exited the room. Sakura opened another door and left the apartment.
Sakura was hit in the face by the freezing cold, her nose felt numb already. She quietly walked down to the elevator, why had Syaoran rejected her? Was this part of some twisted plan of his?"
Sakura pressed the button for the lift; Touya and her dad would probably be wondering where she was right now. Sakura wiped away the tears, but more took their place, she hated Syaoran for what he was doing to her, was it physical attraction? Or was it something more? Sakura would soon find out.
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Next chapter: Sakura and Syaoran's reaction to the previous night, we see more Meiling sluttyness, Sakura's denseness, Tomoyo's Kawaiiness, Syaoran's sexiness and Eriol's flushed face!
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A.N: I enjoyed writing that chapter, I of coarse had to do the famous scene from cruel intentions where Sebastian rejects Annette, with out is it just won't be a fic based on cruel intentions. This fic is FAR from over, maybe another 10-20 chapters, I don't know.
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