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Hidden Love
Chapter 1;
19 years later..........
Caul tugged the reins of the horse sending it stampeding forwards into the countryside.
It was already midday and he was no where near his destination even though he had promised to be there by 3:00.
He tugged harder as the horse galloped across the wide road surrounded by clusters of trees.
Caul smiled as he inhaled the soft air of the countryside full of its lustrous scents and clear fresh smell, so different from the dirty, congested air of Zabania City.
He closed his eyes allowing the fresh summers breeze play with his soft, pitch black hair.
As they reached the corner of the road the horse swiftly curved its way round but as they reached the other side Caul just about caught the shape of a figure crossing the road a bucket of water swinging in her hands. He hurriedly pulled at the reins causing the horse to stop but not avoiding a slight collision with the figure and the water hurtling over her head.
"YOU BLOODY BASTARD!" She screamed pulling it off.
Caul hurriedly got off of his horse and made his way to the cursing female.
"I'm awfully sorry are you hurt?"
"No, but I'm bloody freezing and I'll have to go back to the well to get some more water you ass! Can't you watch where you're going!" She exclaimed brushing her dark violet hair from her face.
"Um do you want a ride to the well thing and I can take you wherever you need to go on my horse. It is after all the least I can do," he said hurriedly.
He was met with a cold glare, her impenetrable blackish purple eyes bore into his skin and after a while the icy glare softened a little, her blackish purple eyes went into a deep navy. "Well it is the least you can do," she sighed.
She then flipped back her dark violet hair and with one swift movement leapt onto the stallion her long legs curving round its neck.
Caul mounted the horse and indicated for her to hold on as they galloped into the woods.
After following her directions for a few minutes they finally reached a well surrounded by trees.
The girl jumped off of the horse her long legs landing gracefully on the ground as she ran towards the well, the bucket swinging in her hands.
She wore a purple armless dress, which was rather tight around the waist and went in a sort of slanted pattern when it came to her legs leaving one leg bare. The material was a lighter violet than her hair which had been let down with two brooches at the front which supported two chunks of her hair whilst the rest was behind.
After a while she had filled the bucket and made her way back to the horse.
She then gave him the directions to her house and they once again made their way through the wood.
After a few minutes they finally reached her house or rather her mansion.
Caul could see it was just as big as his house with lots of doors, windows and a couple of balconies.
It was then that it hit him. He was late!
Caul hurriedly turned the horse round but before he could leave she quickly stopped him.
"Hey wait a minute!"
"What?"
"You can't leave without telling me your name that's just plain rude!" She exclaimed placing her hands on her hips.
"Oh sorry its Caul and what about yours?"
"Ebony. Ebony Holmes,"
"Well it was nice meeting you Ebony. I'll see you around some time."
"Doubt it but see ya!"
She then made her way to the door as Caul furiously tugged at the reins and galloped off into the distance.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Caul knocked at the door of the great mansion and gulped as he heard voices from inside.
The door was flung open by a tall 16 year old with long, wavy, dark magenta hair who was wearing a short tight black dress and wrist length, fingerless black gloves. Her eyes were thickly outlined in black and she was wearing a shiny substance on her lips.
"Hey Caul. I think your late," she said sarcastically as he made his way in.
"I kinda gathered that V," he replied as he hung up his coat.
"Whoa it was a sarcastic comment. Now come on mum and dad are inside. Anyway you're only 2 hours late," she said as they made their way inside.
As soon as he entered his ears were filtered with shouts.
"CAUL YOU'RE HERE! WE WERE SO WORRIED! VIERA CAME AT 2 AND LOOK AT THE TIME ITS 5 WE WERE WORRIED SICK!" Screamed his mum.
Calen nodded, "Your mother and I were worried sick!" he exclaimed.
After a large bout of lectures they finally settled down and began to eat after which Caul was lead to his old room.
As soon as he got there he slumped onto the bed and stretched his arms.
Even when he was 19 his mother was over protective, he thought brushing a few stray black bangs from his face.
Caul closed his eyes the exhaustion wearing down at him but before he fell asleep for some reason a thought occurred to him.
What had been the girls name, yes Ebony. She looked around about his age probably a year or so younger and it looked like she came from quite a rich background so maybe she might be here just temporarily like him to visit her parents like him. And maybe just maybe she might go to Zabania after the holidays were over like most people their age.
Only maybe, he thought and with that thought he fell fast asleep.
TBC.
A/N Its gonna get better I know its slightly boring at the moment but it'll get better and it WILL link with flint the time detective so just be patient everything will be explained shortly!
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Hidden Love
Chapter 1;
19 years later..........
Caul tugged the reins of the horse sending it stampeding forwards into the countryside.
It was already midday and he was no where near his destination even though he had promised to be there by 3:00.
He tugged harder as the horse galloped across the wide road surrounded by clusters of trees.
Caul smiled as he inhaled the soft air of the countryside full of its lustrous scents and clear fresh smell, so different from the dirty, congested air of Zabania City.
He closed his eyes allowing the fresh summers breeze play with his soft, pitch black hair.
As they reached the corner of the road the horse swiftly curved its way round but as they reached the other side Caul just about caught the shape of a figure crossing the road a bucket of water swinging in her hands. He hurriedly pulled at the reins causing the horse to stop but not avoiding a slight collision with the figure and the water hurtling over her head.
"YOU BLOODY BASTARD!" She screamed pulling it off.
Caul hurriedly got off of his horse and made his way to the cursing female.
"I'm awfully sorry are you hurt?"
"No, but I'm bloody freezing and I'll have to go back to the well to get some more water you ass! Can't you watch where you're going!" She exclaimed brushing her dark violet hair from her face.
"Um do you want a ride to the well thing and I can take you wherever you need to go on my horse. It is after all the least I can do," he said hurriedly.
He was met with a cold glare, her impenetrable blackish purple eyes bore into his skin and after a while the icy glare softened a little, her blackish purple eyes went into a deep navy. "Well it is the least you can do," she sighed.
She then flipped back her dark violet hair and with one swift movement leapt onto the stallion her long legs curving round its neck.
Caul mounted the horse and indicated for her to hold on as they galloped into the woods.
After following her directions for a few minutes they finally reached a well surrounded by trees.
The girl jumped off of the horse her long legs landing gracefully on the ground as she ran towards the well, the bucket swinging in her hands.
She wore a purple armless dress, which was rather tight around the waist and went in a sort of slanted pattern when it came to her legs leaving one leg bare. The material was a lighter violet than her hair which had been let down with two brooches at the front which supported two chunks of her hair whilst the rest was behind.
After a while she had filled the bucket and made her way back to the horse.
She then gave him the directions to her house and they once again made their way through the wood.
After a few minutes they finally reached her house or rather her mansion.
Caul could see it was just as big as his house with lots of doors, windows and a couple of balconies.
It was then that it hit him. He was late!
Caul hurriedly turned the horse round but before he could leave she quickly stopped him.
"Hey wait a minute!"
"What?"
"You can't leave without telling me your name that's just plain rude!" She exclaimed placing her hands on her hips.
"Oh sorry its Caul and what about yours?"
"Ebony. Ebony Holmes,"
"Well it was nice meeting you Ebony. I'll see you around some time."
"Doubt it but see ya!"
She then made her way to the door as Caul furiously tugged at the reins and galloped off into the distance.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Caul knocked at the door of the great mansion and gulped as he heard voices from inside.
The door was flung open by a tall 16 year old with long, wavy, dark magenta hair who was wearing a short tight black dress and wrist length, fingerless black gloves. Her eyes were thickly outlined in black and she was wearing a shiny substance on her lips.
"Hey Caul. I think your late," she said sarcastically as he made his way in.
"I kinda gathered that V," he replied as he hung up his coat.
"Whoa it was a sarcastic comment. Now come on mum and dad are inside. Anyway you're only 2 hours late," she said as they made their way inside.
As soon as he entered his ears were filtered with shouts.
"CAUL YOU'RE HERE! WE WERE SO WORRIED! VIERA CAME AT 2 AND LOOK AT THE TIME ITS 5 WE WERE WORRIED SICK!" Screamed his mum.
Calen nodded, "Your mother and I were worried sick!" he exclaimed.
After a large bout of lectures they finally settled down and began to eat after which Caul was lead to his old room.
As soon as he got there he slumped onto the bed and stretched his arms.
Even when he was 19 his mother was over protective, he thought brushing a few stray black bangs from his face.
Caul closed his eyes the exhaustion wearing down at him but before he fell asleep for some reason a thought occurred to him.
What had been the girls name, yes Ebony. She looked around about his age probably a year or so younger and it looked like she came from quite a rich background so maybe she might be here just temporarily like him to visit her parents like him. And maybe just maybe she might go to Zabania after the holidays were over like most people their age.
Only maybe, he thought and with that thought he fell fast asleep.
TBC.
A/N Its gonna get better I know its slightly boring at the moment but it'll get better and it WILL link with flint the time detective so just be patient everything will be explained shortly!
Sos only one thing left to say!
REVIEW!
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REVIEW!
REVIEW!
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PS thanx 4 all the reviews so far!
AND REVIEW AGAIN!