Forsaken
Don't Own the Characters of Naruto.
This is my first Naruto fan fic. I wrote this a while back. Some of you are going to surprise
among other reactions.
I guess at first I simply felt sorry for him. He was a powerful and skilled ninja but no one
would admit it. He was driven, by his so-called friends, to his breaking point. When he first
came to live with us he was a shell of his old self. Me and my brothers simply went through life
with little thought of him. I was the first to notice, he didn't eat or anything expect stayed in his
room. He didn't even eat, I thought it was just something but he'll come out to eat soon enough.
When it was notice, month I got pissed. I kicked down his door and dragged him out. I
forced the skinny bastard to eat. He thanked me but it was more on instinct and his voice was
shallow. Then I resorted to be drastic measures. Every time I could I dragged him around and
made him do stuff from wearing my shopping to sparring with him. At first he was like a target
but he slowly woke up and fought back.
After 2 years he was back to his original self. A bit annoying but whatever. Better than
just dragging his feet around. He ask me out for dinner. It wasn't a date or anything like that. He
wanted to thank me for all the trouble I went through as well as he should have.
At the dinner I noticed him as if for the first time. He was dressed in a new pair of black
jean and a white shirt with a red vest over it. He was like a gentleman during it all. He had just
passed the Jounin exam using a fake identity. If he had used his real one an entire village would
be after them.
After the dinner we spent a lot of time just hanging out. We shared a lot of stuff about
ourselves to each other. He was good company. He listened and talked about it. I felt like I could
talk to him about anything. In terms of Ninjutsu show him some things and he'll show me some
things. In the entire village we worked the best together.
It didn't come to much surprise when he asked me out on a actual date. It been 2 years
since the dinner and 4 years since he arrived. The date went well. Very good too. We went to a
hill he had found. A beautiful scene with a small lake and a perfect place to see the sunset.
"It's beautiful," I said. It didn't really describe the place. I was better than beautiful. He
set up a picnic with foods he made himself. I had taught him to cook food and he was even
better than me. I was grateful for it as I ate the food as we chatted. Then one thing happened that
changed everything. We were heading home. We lived in the same place with my brothers. We
were about to go into our own rooms when I stopped him. He turned to look at me with his deep
almost innocence eyes. I couldn't help myself but I kissed him right there in the hallway.
After that day you could barely see us apart only on sole missions but our desire to be
together drove us to finish our missions fast and done great. After saving enough we left my
brothers and got our own apartment. We spend a lot of time together. We haven't gone to bed
together of course. As for my brother. One had a bit concern for me and the other had known
about him and didn't mind really.
2 years after our first date he actually did it. We were on the hill where we had our first
date. We were here to watch the sunset. The atmosphere was awesome. The sky were filled with
an array of colors from the setting sun. He stood up and asked me to stand so I did. He reach into
his pocket and went to one knee. I nearly faint right there and then. He asked the question. I
yelled my YES as I picked him up in a bear hug. Tears of joys ran down our faces.
We made a lot of preparation. Many of our friends in the village came to see. I walked
down to the altar where my mother's kimono. It was beautiful and a bit simple at the same time.
I thought it was lost forever. My brothers had found it. It highlighted my features quite nicely
when I looked at myself in the mirror before the wedding.
I came to the altar. The spot that changed my life forever. With words exchanged our
future together was sealed with a kiss. Everyone yelled and clapped as we ran out of there.
That leads us to where we are now. They were in a house by the sea. He had chose the
place. He was very romantic. At the moment I didn't care. We burst through the bedroom as we
held each other's lips together. They fell sideways onto the bed.
"I love you, Naruto," I said as I smiled at him.
"I love you too, Temari," Naruto said with a smile.
Author's Note
Some of you hate me don't you? Actually this was a side story the main story I'm posting
later now. Then you get why the story is called Forsaken. I wrote it a while back when I felt like
everyone was against me. This story was made from it.
I actually wrote during because I was bored in class.
Don't Own the Characters of Naruto.
This is my first Naruto fan fic. I wrote this a while back. Some of you are going to surprise
among other reactions.
I guess at first I simply felt sorry for him. He was a powerful and skilled ninja but no one
would admit it. He was driven, by his so-called friends, to his breaking point. When he first
came to live with us he was a shell of his old self. Me and my brothers simply went through life
with little thought of him. I was the first to notice, he didn't eat or anything expect stayed in his
room. He didn't even eat, I thought it was just something but he'll come out to eat soon enough.
When it was notice, month I got pissed. I kicked down his door and dragged him out. I
forced the skinny bastard to eat. He thanked me but it was more on instinct and his voice was
shallow. Then I resorted to be drastic measures. Every time I could I dragged him around and
made him do stuff from wearing my shopping to sparring with him. At first he was like a target
but he slowly woke up and fought back.
After 2 years he was back to his original self. A bit annoying but whatever. Better than
just dragging his feet around. He ask me out for dinner. It wasn't a date or anything like that. He
wanted to thank me for all the trouble I went through as well as he should have.
At the dinner I noticed him as if for the first time. He was dressed in a new pair of black
jean and a white shirt with a red vest over it. He was like a gentleman during it all. He had just
passed the Jounin exam using a fake identity. If he had used his real one an entire village would
be after them.
After the dinner we spent a lot of time just hanging out. We shared a lot of stuff about
ourselves to each other. He was good company. He listened and talked about it. I felt like I could
talk to him about anything. In terms of Ninjutsu show him some things and he'll show me some
things. In the entire village we worked the best together.
It didn't come to much surprise when he asked me out on a actual date. It been 2 years
since the dinner and 4 years since he arrived. The date went well. Very good too. We went to a
hill he had found. A beautiful scene with a small lake and a perfect place to see the sunset.
"It's beautiful," I said. It didn't really describe the place. I was better than beautiful. He
set up a picnic with foods he made himself. I had taught him to cook food and he was even
better than me. I was grateful for it as I ate the food as we chatted. Then one thing happened that
changed everything. We were heading home. We lived in the same place with my brothers. We
were about to go into our own rooms when I stopped him. He turned to look at me with his deep
almost innocence eyes. I couldn't help myself but I kissed him right there in the hallway.
After that day you could barely see us apart only on sole missions but our desire to be
together drove us to finish our missions fast and done great. After saving enough we left my
brothers and got our own apartment. We spend a lot of time together. We haven't gone to bed
together of course. As for my brother. One had a bit concern for me and the other had known
about him and didn't mind really.
2 years after our first date he actually did it. We were on the hill where we had our first
date. We were here to watch the sunset. The atmosphere was awesome. The sky were filled with
an array of colors from the setting sun. He stood up and asked me to stand so I did. He reach into
his pocket and went to one knee. I nearly faint right there and then. He asked the question. I
yelled my YES as I picked him up in a bear hug. Tears of joys ran down our faces.
We made a lot of preparation. Many of our friends in the village came to see. I walked
down to the altar where my mother's kimono. It was beautiful and a bit simple at the same time.
I thought it was lost forever. My brothers had found it. It highlighted my features quite nicely
when I looked at myself in the mirror before the wedding.
I came to the altar. The spot that changed my life forever. With words exchanged our
future together was sealed with a kiss. Everyone yelled and clapped as we ran out of there.
That leads us to where we are now. They were in a house by the sea. He had chose the
place. He was very romantic. At the moment I didn't care. We burst through the bedroom as we
held each other's lips together. They fell sideways onto the bed.
"I love you, Naruto," I said as I smiled at him.
"I love you too, Temari," Naruto said with a smile.
Author's Note
Some of you hate me don't you? Actually this was a side story the main story I'm posting
later now. Then you get why the story is called Forsaken. I wrote it a while back when I felt like
everyone was against me. This story was made from it.
I actually wrote during because I was bored in class.