Chapter three
Another chance
Hi again, This chapter may be a bit weird hang with me though. The next chapter should be better. Well. I got more reviews for chapter 2 than chapter 1 and they were all good *_* (Starzygirl)
Thank you s
For chapter 2
dRaMa QuEeN i aM
I love nice reviews!!!!
Nimacu Authors always like good reviews. Thanx for giving me one :p. Hope u like the next chapter
BROEmEaNtToBe
Thanx for the nice review. I hope my story continues to be interesting 4 ya.
Blonde-angel I so agree w/ u about the fantasy deal. I like fantasy in fanfics . If Storys that people write are too much like the show or book or what ever than why don't you just watch the TV show instead? I'm glad you like my fic
Jessica I'm glad you love it. Hope u like the next chapter
StarzNsparklez Okay, I won't end the story in the middle. This story is fun to write also, so even if people hated it I think that I would still continue it. So u don't have to worry *_*
For chapter 1
Juicy drop-pop
Thanx for liking (almost loving my story) I hope u like the next chapter!!!
Espanachick
I'm really sorry that I can't keep it G/M. I already have most of the story planed out (. Maybe I'll write another story that is a G/M
Now on with the story!!!!
At nine o' clock, Gordo had to leave because his parents wanted to spend some " quality time" with Gordo before they went out of town to their annual sycritists convention, that was called "And how do you fell about that?" Lizzie missed him already, even though she was going to see him tomorrow. Ever since high school Gordo and Lizzie had slowly drifted apart. " But that's not how it's going to be this time," Lizzie thought. Even though it was kinda early, Lizzie decided to go to sleep. She climbed in her bed, and yelled Good night to her mom. Lizzie slowly drifted of to sleep.
" Lizzie, wake up!"
" Uhhhhhhh" Lizzie groaned as she opened her eyes. Her mood changed when she discovered that Gordo was the person that had spoken.
" Gordo, Isn't it kinda early?' Lizzie said, tiredly
" Lizzie, Do you know what day it is?"
"No"
" It's your sixteenth birthday!!!!" Gordo yelled. Lizzie got up quickly and said, " I almost forgot!"
" You have a lot of party preparations to do, Liz, you need to get up now!" Gordo yelled. So Lizzie got up and got dressed. She said hi to her mom, grabbed some toast and coffee, and then She and Gordo set of to the beach, where Lizzie was having her party. Miranda had gotten to the beach early, so that she could help too. All day they set up party decorations and had fun.
" Gordo! This was a new shirt!!!!!" Lizzie yelled, as Gordo pushed her into the ocean. " Now I'm cold. It is only march!!!" Lizzie said angrily. Lizzie tried to push Gordo in, but he was to fast. Before they knew it, party guests had begun to arrive. " Miranda, I'm soooooooooo excited!!!!" Lizzie said to Miranda " today it's finally my sixteenth birthday party!!!!" Pretty soon. Lizzie's party had started. Everyone was dancing or talking to their friends. Half way through the party, Lizzie and her guests opened presents and ate cake. Lizzie was having one of the best days of her life. Except for one thing. Gordo hadn't given her a present. Lizzie was a little disappointed. Gordo had gotten her a birthday present for ever-single birthday of Lizzie's life. Lizzie was standing in a corner of her very own party felling sorry for her self, when Gordo came up behind her and taped Lizzie's shoulder.
" Hey Liz, do you want to go for a walk?" he asked
" Sure," said Lizzie. Maybe then he'll tell me why he didn't give me a present, she thought.
Lizzie and Gordo walked down the beach, talking about anything and everything, until they came to a patch of rocks.
" I'm a little tired, Gordo," Lizzie said," Lets rest for a while."
Gordo and Lizzie sat down on the rocks.
" Wow, the sunset looks really pretty from here," Gordo said.
" Yeah" said Lizzie
" Liz, your probably wondering why I didn't get you a birthday present." Gordo said
" Um, yeah"
" Well, I do have a present for you. Um but I need to tell you something first. Lizzie, I've always liked.. I mean loved you."
" ........"
" Well, what I'm trying to say is, Elizabeth Brooke Mcguire, will you be my girlfriend?" Gordo asked, almost pathetically, as he took out a ring.
Lizzie was quite for a very long time, and then she started laughing.
" Gordo, you're my best friend!" Lizzie said, as if it was the most hilarious thing in the world, " Best friends aren't supposed to "love" each other in that way! If we went out with each other it would ruin our friendship."
" Uhhhh, I.I.I. um. uh. I gotta go!!!" Gordo said as he ran off into the twilight.
" What have I done?" Lizzie said in horror.
BOOM!!!!! Lizzie sat up straight in her bed, in a cold sweat.
" I know what you have dreamed of, Elizabeth," Said a melodic voice in the corner. " You have seen you original 16th birthday. Is our deal still on?"
" Lianandriaka." Lizzie gasped.
" About that deal."
" Um, sure whatever, I'll help you become the queen person of the sorceresses." Lizzie said.
" That is correct. Let's go."
" Excuse me?"
" If you wish to remain in the past, you must come with me now to help regain my thrown. Let's go! We are going to my homeland, Parinakia; you are the first human ever to go there. You will be back by morning " Lianandriaka replied.
A/N Hi yay peeps, Hope u liked the chapter, a little weird, I know but plz continue r/r this story will get better. I'm not going to make 5 ppl review before I update, because that's mean, but I might have to if I don't get enough reviews. So PLZ Review. It takes about 10 seconds maybe 20 seconds and it REALLY helps me write! I'm begging u guys!!!!!! *_* (Starzygirl)
Hi again, This chapter may be a bit weird hang with me though. The next chapter should be better. Well. I got more reviews for chapter 2 than chapter 1 and they were all good *_* (Starzygirl)
Thank you s
For chapter 2
dRaMa QuEeN i aM
I love nice reviews!!!!
Nimacu Authors always like good reviews. Thanx for giving me one :p. Hope u like the next chapter
BROEmEaNtToBe
Thanx for the nice review. I hope my story continues to be interesting 4 ya.
Blonde-angel I so agree w/ u about the fantasy deal. I like fantasy in fanfics . If Storys that people write are too much like the show or book or what ever than why don't you just watch the TV show instead? I'm glad you like my fic
Jessica I'm glad you love it. Hope u like the next chapter
StarzNsparklez Okay, I won't end the story in the middle. This story is fun to write also, so even if people hated it I think that I would still continue it. So u don't have to worry *_*
For chapter 1
Juicy drop-pop
Thanx for liking (almost loving my story) I hope u like the next chapter!!!
Espanachick
I'm really sorry that I can't keep it G/M. I already have most of the story planed out (. Maybe I'll write another story that is a G/M
Now on with the story!!!!
At nine o' clock, Gordo had to leave because his parents wanted to spend some " quality time" with Gordo before they went out of town to their annual sycritists convention, that was called "And how do you fell about that?" Lizzie missed him already, even though she was going to see him tomorrow. Ever since high school Gordo and Lizzie had slowly drifted apart. " But that's not how it's going to be this time," Lizzie thought. Even though it was kinda early, Lizzie decided to go to sleep. She climbed in her bed, and yelled Good night to her mom. Lizzie slowly drifted of to sleep.
" Lizzie, wake up!"
" Uhhhhhhh" Lizzie groaned as she opened her eyes. Her mood changed when she discovered that Gordo was the person that had spoken.
" Gordo, Isn't it kinda early?' Lizzie said, tiredly
" Lizzie, Do you know what day it is?"
"No"
" It's your sixteenth birthday!!!!" Gordo yelled. Lizzie got up quickly and said, " I almost forgot!"
" You have a lot of party preparations to do, Liz, you need to get up now!" Gordo yelled. So Lizzie got up and got dressed. She said hi to her mom, grabbed some toast and coffee, and then She and Gordo set of to the beach, where Lizzie was having her party. Miranda had gotten to the beach early, so that she could help too. All day they set up party decorations and had fun.
" Gordo! This was a new shirt!!!!!" Lizzie yelled, as Gordo pushed her into the ocean. " Now I'm cold. It is only march!!!" Lizzie said angrily. Lizzie tried to push Gordo in, but he was to fast. Before they knew it, party guests had begun to arrive. " Miranda, I'm soooooooooo excited!!!!" Lizzie said to Miranda " today it's finally my sixteenth birthday party!!!!" Pretty soon. Lizzie's party had started. Everyone was dancing or talking to their friends. Half way through the party, Lizzie and her guests opened presents and ate cake. Lizzie was having one of the best days of her life. Except for one thing. Gordo hadn't given her a present. Lizzie was a little disappointed. Gordo had gotten her a birthday present for ever-single birthday of Lizzie's life. Lizzie was standing in a corner of her very own party felling sorry for her self, when Gordo came up behind her and taped Lizzie's shoulder.
" Hey Liz, do you want to go for a walk?" he asked
" Sure," said Lizzie. Maybe then he'll tell me why he didn't give me a present, she thought.
Lizzie and Gordo walked down the beach, talking about anything and everything, until they came to a patch of rocks.
" I'm a little tired, Gordo," Lizzie said," Lets rest for a while."
Gordo and Lizzie sat down on the rocks.
" Wow, the sunset looks really pretty from here," Gordo said.
" Yeah" said Lizzie
" Liz, your probably wondering why I didn't get you a birthday present." Gordo said
" Um, yeah"
" Well, I do have a present for you. Um but I need to tell you something first. Lizzie, I've always liked.. I mean loved you."
" ........"
" Well, what I'm trying to say is, Elizabeth Brooke Mcguire, will you be my girlfriend?" Gordo asked, almost pathetically, as he took out a ring.
Lizzie was quite for a very long time, and then she started laughing.
" Gordo, you're my best friend!" Lizzie said, as if it was the most hilarious thing in the world, " Best friends aren't supposed to "love" each other in that way! If we went out with each other it would ruin our friendship."
" Uhhhh, I.I.I. um. uh. I gotta go!!!" Gordo said as he ran off into the twilight.
" What have I done?" Lizzie said in horror.
BOOM!!!!! Lizzie sat up straight in her bed, in a cold sweat.
" I know what you have dreamed of, Elizabeth," Said a melodic voice in the corner. " You have seen you original 16th birthday. Is our deal still on?"
" Lianandriaka." Lizzie gasped.
" About that deal."
" Um, sure whatever, I'll help you become the queen person of the sorceresses." Lizzie said.
" That is correct. Let's go."
" Excuse me?"
" If you wish to remain in the past, you must come with me now to help regain my thrown. Let's go! We are going to my homeland, Parinakia; you are the first human ever to go there. You will be back by morning " Lianandriaka replied.
A/N Hi yay peeps, Hope u liked the chapter, a little weird, I know but plz continue r/r this story will get better. I'm not going to make 5 ppl review before I update, because that's mean, but I might have to if I don't get enough reviews. So PLZ Review. It takes about 10 seconds maybe 20 seconds and it REALLY helps me write! I'm begging u guys!!!!!! *_* (Starzygirl)