Hi People!!
This is my first Harry Potter fanfic! I hope you all like it!!
I DO NOT OWN HARRY POTTER!!!
Look it's like this. It's Harry sixth year at Hogwarts and he has been severely abused by his uncle what will happen to him now. And it's up to us to help him.
Yup you heard WE will help him. At the end of every chapter there is going to be suggestions and the suggestion that get's the most votes will be the one that is going to be put on the next chapter. I hope you like the beginning .
It was the summer of Harry's fifth year. He was going to his sixth year and he had no idea what was going to happen to him. He was now a very strong young man from Quidditch and had quick reflexes. Unfortunately to quick. When his uncle tried to get him his reflexes kicked in and he dodged him. With made his uncle very angry and made him punish him.
"Who do you think you are?!" yelled Vermon.
"I'm sorry I didn't do that on purpose" apologized Harry.
Little did he know he was being watched by no one other then Rita Skeeter. She took a picture of Harry apologizing to his uncle. She had gotten a letter from Fudge the prime minister telling her to follow Harry around and take pictures of him and give it to the Daily Prophet.
His uncle gave him a slap as soon as he was inside the house. "Go to your room boy!! I will deal with you later!" said Vermon as he gave him another kick witch Rita did not miss.
Harry went to his room with a sour leg from his uncle's fat legs. "God something changed while I was at Hogwarts he always yelled at me and things like that but he never became violent before" said The Boy who lived more to the walls then him self. As soon as he put his beg downs his uncle yelled for him.
"Freak get down here now we have a few things to discuss!!!!" yelled uncle Vermon and he sounded quite angry.
"Yes Uncle Vermon?" said Harry as he came down the stairs and into the living room. He looked at his uncle and was surprised to how red he was. "Uncle Vermon have I done something wrong?"
"You still there ask? How they're you tell your lot what happens here in this house it is none of anybody's business and you go and tell.. tell.. them!! Well now boy you are in for it!!" with that said Vermon went up to him grabbed one of Dudley's Baseball bats and started beating Harry. Harry didn't know what to do he just kept taking the pain. 'He wants to see me cry' he thought. 'Well he is not going to'. And he took the pain with out letting a single tear drop until he was out cold.
Vermon saw this and sighed. "I guess his learned now. Dudley take him to his room and drop him there we are going to have visitors and I don't want them to see this good for nothing scum lying here in our dinning room. Dudley took Harry to his room. And shoved him there. He hit his head on the table when Dudley shoved him carelessly and fell on the floor while the blood flowed through his hands.
The next day...
Harry woke and had a blinding headache. He put his hands on his face and felt the liquid on his hands and now on his face. He looked into his mirror and could barely see even with his glasses on. He went to the bathroom and cleaned him self, when he was about to lay down on his bed when Petunia called him.
"Harry come down now and make breakfast!!"
"I'm coming Aunt Petunia" responded Harry and went down to make breakfast but he found that walking down stairs was a task in it's self since he had lost to much blood and could barely walk with out holding on to something.
He was making breakfast when he suddenly felt something cut him in the back when he turned around his uncle was cutting him with a knife.
"What do you think you're doing boy?!" yelled Vermon not for the first time.
"I-I'm making breakfast just like you told me!!" yelled Harry getting very angry.
"I never said I wanted sausages!!" yelled Vermon.
"You don't have t-to cut me just say you don't want them. I'll make something else!" yelled Harry back.
"Don't you there yell at me!" said his uncle while he gave him a slap across the face and began another fit of hitting him. The boy who lived was nearly dead when his uncle picked him up and threw him in his room. "That will teach him not to yell at him again. We give him a home to live and food to eat and this is how he treats us" said Vermon and went down to eat breakfast.
This continued on for a week. When the aurors would come over to see how he was doing Vermon would get his wand and put it on his hand and say he would break it in half if he did not say everything was fine.
Vermon had tied Harry to the bed and only let him out when he would need to go to the bathroom and every two days to take a bath and drink water apart from that he would stay tied up on the bed. His uncle would come in three times a day and always in a different hour when he was last expecting it and would beet him unconscious and get him by surprise so he was never ready.
Until one day his uncle punched him in the eye and cut both his wrists, which made Harry fall unconscious. Just then the doorbell wrung. Vermon went down t check it.
"Remus I'm worried about Harry" said his Godfather.
"Well that's a surprise" said Remus sarcastically.
"No I mean it, he doesn't seem like his self lately" said Sirius.
"I know what you mean, he seems a little more unhappy then usual".
"Yeah when we go check on him he only sticks his head out".
"His fine his just depressed after the prophecy. Who wouldn't be?"
"Yeah I know but well his acting differently".
"No his not, you're just paranoid".
"No I'm not I bet those muggles are treating him like shit".
"Look I have an idea why don't we go chek on him now?"
"Good idea" said Sirius as he and Mooney went out the door and aparated to nº 4 Privet Drive.
"Who is it?" asked Vermon.
"It's Harry's guardians we're here to check o him" said Remus. Vermon panicked what would they do to him is they saw Harry lying on the floor unconscious? He whispered to Dudley to put Harry in his bed and make it look like he's sleeping.
Vermon opened the door. "He's asleep and doesn't want to be bothered" said Vermon with his cold voice.
'Yeah right like I am going to believe that you actually care that he's bothered'. "Well I'm sure we won't mind is we just go and have a look at him".
"You are not coming inside my house" said Vermon.
"Oh yes we are weather you like it or not" yelled Sirius pushing threw and going up to Harry's room. When he opens the door..
Well that's it for now what do you think?
PLEASE REVIEW!!!!
I love critics you know. Now that I am on vacation I will be able to work on this story so I will update soon.
And now for the votes.
In the reviews tell me which you prefer.
As soon as Sirius enters he sees Harry lying down on his bed "looking" like he is asleep and comes back down relieved and goes back to the Fenix head quarters. He never finds out and Harry stays with that burden until the end of the school year. He sees Harry lying there but notices his shallow breathing and pretends to be relieved and goes back a little unconvinced and when he sees the Dailey Prophet he goes back and tortures his uncle and takes Harry back. He sees him and get' relieved but suspicious of his uncle's consideration and pretends to go away, but keep watching him and the sees his uncle torturing him and the he tortures him and takes Harry to the hospital Where he is taken cared for. He sees Harry goes back to headquarters' and only finds out about this later when Rony sees his scratches after a Quiddich practice when he is taking a bath. You did not like any of the ideas and you have another one better. He goes to Harry's room and sees his black eyes takes of the cover and sees all the scratches comes down tortures Vermon and takes him to the burrow to be taken care of.
Please review and telling me what you want to happen.
I DO NOT OWN HARRY POTTER!!!
Look it's like this. It's Harry sixth year at Hogwarts and he has been severely abused by his uncle what will happen to him now. And it's up to us to help him.
Yup you heard WE will help him. At the end of every chapter there is going to be suggestions and the suggestion that get's the most votes will be the one that is going to be put on the next chapter. I hope you like the beginning .
It was the summer of Harry's fifth year. He was going to his sixth year and he had no idea what was going to happen to him. He was now a very strong young man from Quidditch and had quick reflexes. Unfortunately to quick. When his uncle tried to get him his reflexes kicked in and he dodged him. With made his uncle very angry and made him punish him.
"Who do you think you are?!" yelled Vermon.
"I'm sorry I didn't do that on purpose" apologized Harry.
Little did he know he was being watched by no one other then Rita Skeeter. She took a picture of Harry apologizing to his uncle. She had gotten a letter from Fudge the prime minister telling her to follow Harry around and take pictures of him and give it to the Daily Prophet.
His uncle gave him a slap as soon as he was inside the house. "Go to your room boy!! I will deal with you later!" said Vermon as he gave him another kick witch Rita did not miss.
Harry went to his room with a sour leg from his uncle's fat legs. "God something changed while I was at Hogwarts he always yelled at me and things like that but he never became violent before" said The Boy who lived more to the walls then him self. As soon as he put his beg downs his uncle yelled for him.
"Freak get down here now we have a few things to discuss!!!!" yelled uncle Vermon and he sounded quite angry.
"Yes Uncle Vermon?" said Harry as he came down the stairs and into the living room. He looked at his uncle and was surprised to how red he was. "Uncle Vermon have I done something wrong?"
"You still there ask? How they're you tell your lot what happens here in this house it is none of anybody's business and you go and tell.. tell.. them!! Well now boy you are in for it!!" with that said Vermon went up to him grabbed one of Dudley's Baseball bats and started beating Harry. Harry didn't know what to do he just kept taking the pain. 'He wants to see me cry' he thought. 'Well he is not going to'. And he took the pain with out letting a single tear drop until he was out cold.
Vermon saw this and sighed. "I guess his learned now. Dudley take him to his room and drop him there we are going to have visitors and I don't want them to see this good for nothing scum lying here in our dinning room. Dudley took Harry to his room. And shoved him there. He hit his head on the table when Dudley shoved him carelessly and fell on the floor while the blood flowed through his hands.
The next day...
Harry woke and had a blinding headache. He put his hands on his face and felt the liquid on his hands and now on his face. He looked into his mirror and could barely see even with his glasses on. He went to the bathroom and cleaned him self, when he was about to lay down on his bed when Petunia called him.
"Harry come down now and make breakfast!!"
"I'm coming Aunt Petunia" responded Harry and went down to make breakfast but he found that walking down stairs was a task in it's self since he had lost to much blood and could barely walk with out holding on to something.
He was making breakfast when he suddenly felt something cut him in the back when he turned around his uncle was cutting him with a knife.
"What do you think you're doing boy?!" yelled Vermon not for the first time.
"I-I'm making breakfast just like you told me!!" yelled Harry getting very angry.
"I never said I wanted sausages!!" yelled Vermon.
"You don't have t-to cut me just say you don't want them. I'll make something else!" yelled Harry back.
"Don't you there yell at me!" said his uncle while he gave him a slap across the face and began another fit of hitting him. The boy who lived was nearly dead when his uncle picked him up and threw him in his room. "That will teach him not to yell at him again. We give him a home to live and food to eat and this is how he treats us" said Vermon and went down to eat breakfast.
This continued on for a week. When the aurors would come over to see how he was doing Vermon would get his wand and put it on his hand and say he would break it in half if he did not say everything was fine.
Vermon had tied Harry to the bed and only let him out when he would need to go to the bathroom and every two days to take a bath and drink water apart from that he would stay tied up on the bed. His uncle would come in three times a day and always in a different hour when he was last expecting it and would beet him unconscious and get him by surprise so he was never ready.
Until one day his uncle punched him in the eye and cut both his wrists, which made Harry fall unconscious. Just then the doorbell wrung. Vermon went down t check it.
"Remus I'm worried about Harry" said his Godfather.
"Well that's a surprise" said Remus sarcastically.
"No I mean it, he doesn't seem like his self lately" said Sirius.
"I know what you mean, he seems a little more unhappy then usual".
"Yeah when we go check on him he only sticks his head out".
"His fine his just depressed after the prophecy. Who wouldn't be?"
"Yeah I know but well his acting differently".
"No his not, you're just paranoid".
"No I'm not I bet those muggles are treating him like shit".
"Look I have an idea why don't we go chek on him now?"
"Good idea" said Sirius as he and Mooney went out the door and aparated to nº 4 Privet Drive.
"Who is it?" asked Vermon.
"It's Harry's guardians we're here to check o him" said Remus. Vermon panicked what would they do to him is they saw Harry lying on the floor unconscious? He whispered to Dudley to put Harry in his bed and make it look like he's sleeping.
Vermon opened the door. "He's asleep and doesn't want to be bothered" said Vermon with his cold voice.
'Yeah right like I am going to believe that you actually care that he's bothered'. "Well I'm sure we won't mind is we just go and have a look at him".
"You are not coming inside my house" said Vermon.
"Oh yes we are weather you like it or not" yelled Sirius pushing threw and going up to Harry's room. When he opens the door..
Well that's it for now what do you think?
PLEASE REVIEW!!!!
I love critics you know. Now that I am on vacation I will be able to work on this story so I will update soon.
And now for the votes.
In the reviews tell me which you prefer.
As soon as Sirius enters he sees Harry lying down on his bed "looking" like he is asleep and comes back down relieved and goes back to the Fenix head quarters. He never finds out and Harry stays with that burden until the end of the school year. He sees Harry lying there but notices his shallow breathing and pretends to be relieved and goes back a little unconvinced and when he sees the Dailey Prophet he goes back and tortures his uncle and takes Harry back. He sees him and get' relieved but suspicious of his uncle's consideration and pretends to go away, but keep watching him and the sees his uncle torturing him and the he tortures him and takes Harry to the hospital Where he is taken cared for. He sees Harry goes back to headquarters' and only finds out about this later when Rony sees his scratches after a Quiddich practice when he is taking a bath. You did not like any of the ideas and you have another one better. He goes to Harry's room and sees his black eyes takes of the cover and sees all the scratches comes down tortures Vermon and takes him to the burrow to be taken care of.
Please review and telling me what you want to happen.