I particularly like this one, took me more than two days to write which is a new record, seeming I can write these usually in an hour *not bragging, at all*
I really hope you enjoy this one and please take time to review…thanks!!
Can the evil hear you?
Can you be sure?
Yell so loud everyone hears
Even me
Words unconvincing
Sight misunderstood
The beating of your heart
The very life you live upon
Races with the toils of lies
Knots of betrayal
In time will take you down
Slow
Painful
Burn like you deserve
Take it all at once
What you've done
To so many over time
Leave scars upon your face
So that each time you think yourself
A good man
You will alas see
You are nothing
But a simple
Naive
Little boy
With nothing to offer
But a cruel heart.
…please review!
:P haha megan, it's the playful tongue guy that enrages quin!!
^ not acceptable computer face
---quin =) acceptable computer face