Hey everyone BladeSaturn here just wanted to remind you that im still new
at this, so no flames plz! I really would appreciate reviews, not too harsh
though! Anywayz enough of my rant here's the fic, enjoy!
~Love across Time~
She walked through a semi-light forest. Her ice blue eyes clouded over in thought, not even seeing the familiar scenes around her.
"Why me? I don't understand. Grandfather why won't you tell me!!!!" She broke the serenity of the forest with her wail. A shadow appeared near her. "It's not that bad." The shadow spoke "I know it's weird, but I have to go too remember?"
"Yeah, I know. So what's your point? We won't be permitted to come back, remember? It's not fair, this is our home, and we shouldn't be ripped away from it for some uncertain 'destiny'. So yeah Johori IT IS THAT BAD!!!!" the young woman bellowed, Johori stepped back in fear. "Naturi I hate it as much as you do. I have a life here!" Johori tried to reason. This was true he did have a life here, that life consisted of training, video games, a girlfriend, and his family, namely his little sister, but he didn't have to worry about her, she was going with him. "C'mon its time to go." Johori motioned for her to follow. "Don't say that, it's just not cool." Naturi sighed getting up.
Not long after their "conversation" in the forest did they reach a large laboratory like place. (A/N: it's present time 2003, sry I didn't mention it before! -_-*) the building was made of metal, complete steel, and had absolutely no windows. The sun reflected of the building which had to be at least 10 stories high, blinding the people who stood before it. "Let's get this over with." Naturi sighed, and walked on, Johori following close behind. They walked down a long well lit metal hall way to an elevator. Johori hit the button that would take them to the 10th floor, the last place they'd ever see of their world, and their time.
Finally they reached the room that their 'destiny' was supposedly tied too. An old man was waiting for them. He was short and walked some what hunched over with a cane. His thinning gray hair was combed in an Elvis sort of way, a wave more like. He acknowledged their presence with a curt nod and gesture towards a very strange looking machine, It looked like a virtual game center, though everything was black, it was all metal, well except for the glass dome that acted as a barrier for the person inside it. "Well are your packs ready? "The old man asked "Yes grandfather they are. I brought extra-extra batteries for my CD player. I know 'don't let anyone see it'! Goddamn I get it already! Let's just go!" Naturi informed him not too nicely. Johori just sighed and shook his head. The old man started the machine up, pressing all sorts of multi- colored button on the control table. "Very well my impatient Granddaughter, step into the machine." He told her gruffly.
"Ummmm..." she paused looking first at the crazy old man she knew as her grandfather then hesitantly at his crazy machine. "I'll go first" Johori could tell his sister wanted nothing to do with it, until she knew it was safe. He saw a look of relief on her face as he walked into the machine playing Ginny-pig for her. "WAIT!!!!! WAIT!!!!! You need this, it's a special watch that connects you to me and your parents, anytime you want. We can send you things that you desperately need or think you desperately need." he looked at Naturi with saying that last part. She just rolled her eyes. Now everything was ready, Johori stepped in and was instantly transported to the past, in a rush of light. Naturi followed suite after being given her 'watch' and asking "What happens when the battery runs out????" "It runs on solar and lunar energy, its can run out." "Eclipses, and new moons?" she said indignantly "Don't worry about them. Now GO!!!!" he replied irritated. She did, but a little hesitantly. She disappeared into the light.
~to be continued
~Well there's the first chapter, I know its really short, but I want some reviews to know if I should continue or not. And I've changed my mind on the flames, if you don't like it, tell me, but tell me why. Otherwise I'll just tell you to go to hell.
~Love across Time~
She walked through a semi-light forest. Her ice blue eyes clouded over in thought, not even seeing the familiar scenes around her.
"Why me? I don't understand. Grandfather why won't you tell me!!!!" She broke the serenity of the forest with her wail. A shadow appeared near her. "It's not that bad." The shadow spoke "I know it's weird, but I have to go too remember?"
"Yeah, I know. So what's your point? We won't be permitted to come back, remember? It's not fair, this is our home, and we shouldn't be ripped away from it for some uncertain 'destiny'. So yeah Johori IT IS THAT BAD!!!!" the young woman bellowed, Johori stepped back in fear. "Naturi I hate it as much as you do. I have a life here!" Johori tried to reason. This was true he did have a life here, that life consisted of training, video games, a girlfriend, and his family, namely his little sister, but he didn't have to worry about her, she was going with him. "C'mon its time to go." Johori motioned for her to follow. "Don't say that, it's just not cool." Naturi sighed getting up.
Not long after their "conversation" in the forest did they reach a large laboratory like place. (A/N: it's present time 2003, sry I didn't mention it before! -_-*) the building was made of metal, complete steel, and had absolutely no windows. The sun reflected of the building which had to be at least 10 stories high, blinding the people who stood before it. "Let's get this over with." Naturi sighed, and walked on, Johori following close behind. They walked down a long well lit metal hall way to an elevator. Johori hit the button that would take them to the 10th floor, the last place they'd ever see of their world, and their time.
Finally they reached the room that their 'destiny' was supposedly tied too. An old man was waiting for them. He was short and walked some what hunched over with a cane. His thinning gray hair was combed in an Elvis sort of way, a wave more like. He acknowledged their presence with a curt nod and gesture towards a very strange looking machine, It looked like a virtual game center, though everything was black, it was all metal, well except for the glass dome that acted as a barrier for the person inside it. "Well are your packs ready? "The old man asked "Yes grandfather they are. I brought extra-extra batteries for my CD player. I know 'don't let anyone see it'! Goddamn I get it already! Let's just go!" Naturi informed him not too nicely. Johori just sighed and shook his head. The old man started the machine up, pressing all sorts of multi- colored button on the control table. "Very well my impatient Granddaughter, step into the machine." He told her gruffly.
"Ummmm..." she paused looking first at the crazy old man she knew as her grandfather then hesitantly at his crazy machine. "I'll go first" Johori could tell his sister wanted nothing to do with it, until she knew it was safe. He saw a look of relief on her face as he walked into the machine playing Ginny-pig for her. "WAIT!!!!! WAIT!!!!! You need this, it's a special watch that connects you to me and your parents, anytime you want. We can send you things that you desperately need or think you desperately need." he looked at Naturi with saying that last part. She just rolled her eyes. Now everything was ready, Johori stepped in and was instantly transported to the past, in a rush of light. Naturi followed suite after being given her 'watch' and asking "What happens when the battery runs out????" "It runs on solar and lunar energy, its can run out." "Eclipses, and new moons?" she said indignantly "Don't worry about them. Now GO!!!!" he replied irritated. She did, but a little hesitantly. She disappeared into the light.
~to be continued
~Well there's the first chapter, I know its really short, but I want some reviews to know if I should continue or not. And I've changed my mind on the flames, if you don't like it, tell me, but tell me why. Otherwise I'll just tell you to go to hell.