~*~I got some reviews asking how I come up with my humor for this story. So here are some tips for you to use~*~
1. Try to keep the Z-fighters in character as much as possible.
2. Learn your characters habits and personality.
3. Try doing a story that people all over this site enjoy reading. The most popular Chibi stories and Vegeta torturer stories.
4. Try to be funny not silly, know when your going to far with the jokes, some times to many jokes or silly moments in the story start to get boring to a reader.
5. Try to be original with your jokes.
6. Use your characters habits and personality to your advantage. Vegeta is full of pride a lot so people think it's funny to place him in odd situations in there stories. Did you know that the writers of DBZ made Vegeta's second kid Bra a girl to put him in an odder situation?
Those are all my tips for you, and for one of my readers out there yes I have a sibling, a sister but she nothing to these Chibi terrors in my stories. My idea's just come as I type the story up.
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Chapter 11: NEVER give Chibi's sugar!
When they had gotten the three battered kids back to the house and Bulma saw them she had gone crazy when she saw the scene of Gohan and Piccolo laying asleep and battle beaten in Goku's arms while the equally banged up Vegeta was being held by Trunks, she had watched the kids while Trunks and Goku got Senzu Beans. When they came to the first thing Gohan did was grab Piccolo into a warm hug and saying how happy he was that Piccolo was OK witch made the Namek blush, but things went from this cute moment to yelling after they had gotten changed out of there torn outfits and Bulma had sat them down in the living room for a good scolding.
"I CAN'T BELIVE YOU THREE!" Bulma yelled after Piccolo, Gohan and Vegeta each had a Senzu Bean, "YOU COULD HAVE HURT YOURSELFS!" Piccolo just looked at the floor as Bulma scolded them, Gohan was sorry about what happen at the pond but Vegeta had started it, he was the one who threw the fish at him, Vegeta was just sitting annoyed. Goku, Trunks and Bra were standing by the living room wall waiting for the scolding to end.
"Sorry" was what came from the three kids sitting there on the sofa, Bulma sighed thinking they need not be punished further she told them to go out and play in the back yard for a while, "So, did Vegeta and Gohan really go Super?" said Bulma turning to the three people leaning on the wall, "Yup, only Gohan went to the second level" said Trunks looking at his mother, "I guess I'll have to finish making the cure faster, I had know idea Vegeta would be such a trouble maker as a kid" Bulma said looking out the window, "With the way he acts as an adult how would you not guess he was a trouble maker?" Goku chuckled a little.
*The back yard*
Vegeta was sparing with Piccolo for the first time while Gohan and Bra watched, Gohan was cheering Piccolo on while Bra was cheering her Chibi father on in Saiyan, "Go Green! You can do it Piccolo!" Gohan shouted as loud as he could, "Benkoy Vegeta tokoyou maberojty!" (Come on Vegeta you can do it!) Bra yelled, Vegeta had the upper hand on Piccolo who was trying his best to keep Vegeta from getting to many attacks in, finally Piccolo landed a strong punch to Vegeta's jaw knocking the Prince down, Vegeta got up rubbing his jaw, he was about to get up when he stopped spat out something.
*Back in the kitchen*
Bulma, Goku and Trunks were still talking when a loud shout could be herd out side, "What happened now?" said Trunks looking to the window, Bra was shouting something about Vegeta being hurt, "What could hurt Vegeta?" said Goku as they headed out side to see what was going on, "I don't know Goku, but were going to find out!" Bulma said walking a little faster, when they got out side they saw Piccolo looking worried and Gohan staring at the object that Vegeta was holding, "What happened?!" Bulma said walking up to the three boys.
"Piccolo knock Vegeta's tooth out!" Bra said pointing to Vegeta's hand which indeed had a small tooth in it, "I didn't mean to really!" said Piccolo looking at Bulma worryingly, "I'm sure it was an accident Piccolo" said Bulma, she then turned to Vegeta "Could you open your mouth Vegeta?" Bulma said, she just wanted to make sure no damage was done to his jaw, Vegeta did as he was told, the tooth that was knocked out was a top right tooth and was one of Vegeta's K-9 teeth, and Bulma could see no other harm done.
(I don't really know the right named for that type of tooth. The ones I'm talking about is the sharp pointy tooth that looks like a fang)
"Well, there seems to be no harm done" said Bulma getting up, "No harm done! The Namek knock my tooth out!!!" Vegeta yelled, Bulma wasn't going to scolded him for this, after all if she just had her tooth knocked out she would be doing the same thing, "Don't worry Vegeta it's just one of your baby teeth a new one will grow in" said Bulma turning around to face Vegeta, Piccolo walked up to the Chibi Saiyan Prince with his head down, "Sorry Vegeta…" he whispered Piccolo, he really was sorry, how would he know a punch that hard would knock Vegeta's tooth out.
Vegeta just growled ad walked back to the house, Bulma, Trunks and Goku went back in as well leaving the Chibi's out side, Bra came over to Piccolo, "That's his way of saying 'You are forgiven' so don't worry" she said and followed Vegeta inside with Piccolo and Gohan behind her, they walked into the living room and found Vegeta there on the sofa with his head on the arm rest looking at the TV, "Ummm…I think we should leave him alone for a while…" Bra said and walked up stairs.
They came to Trunks room, Bra smiled a little, "Come on!" she walked in and went to Trunks's bed, Piccolo and Gohan watched as she curled under the bed and came out from under it with a plastic bag, "This is my big brothers candy hoard, he let's me take candy from it" Bra said opening the bag full of Mars Bars, Jaw breakers, Reese cups and Push pop's of all flavors, "Alright!" Gohan shouted as he took a chocolate bar from the bag and started biting at it, Bra handed the bag out to Piccolo, "Here have some Piccolo" Piccolo looked at the bag and then shook his head, "Nameks only drink water" he replied.
"Come on Piccolo, what's one piece of candy going to hurt" Bra said shoving a Crunch Bar into his hand, Piccolo nodded in agreement and started eating the candy, it was definitely a new thing for Piccolo to chew something, not to mention the odd feeling on his tongue, and when he swallowed it was a very strange feeling indeed, it was nothing like water that was for sure, the trio soon ate every piece of candy in the bag.
(Now if any of you reading this have little brothers or sister or are parents with young children you know what happens when kids at these ages eat a large amount of sugar don't you?)
A few minutes after eating the candy the sugar started to take affect, Bra started giggling while Gohan started to jump on Trunks's bed like crazy, Piccolo was a very different story completely, being a Namek the only in that was ever put in his system was water, and because of this the sugar had a much stronger affect on him, he was running around the room screaming at the top of his lungs, the three kids gave one another crazy looks and then ran out into the hall.
Trunks was sitting in his office trying to get some work done, that was when the kids entered, Trunks looked up from his paper work and saw them, "Hey you guys, what are you doing here?" he said smiling until he saw the looks on there faces, Piccolo ran in and started throwing papers around the room, Gohan ran up to Trunks and shoved him out of his chair and started spinning around in it while Bra found a bottle of ink and started running around the room with it open spinning black ink all over the room.
Trunks was shocked at the site, his neat stack of papers were being thrown about the room, Gohan was knocking things off his desk while spinning around in his chair, and Bra was getting ink every where, "Hey stop!" Trunks said and tried to stop Piccolo from throwing any more papers but Piccolo was throwing the papers so fast that Trunks could not see and fell on the floor, he got up again and finally stopped Piccolo from throwing his papers all over, the young Namek now ran over to the chair were Gohan was spinning and grabbed onto the back of the chair.
Trunks went over to Bra and tried to stop her from spilling ink all over his office, ink already covered some of the rug and the walls, he tried to take the ink away but instead got covered in ink his self, "Today is not my day" he said, the kids finally went running out of the room leaving Trunks in his office covered in ink with papers all over the floor and the knocked over items.
Goku was in the kitchen doing what he always was doing if he wasn't training or enjoying him self, he was eating. He never even saw the Chibi tornado that was about to hit it's next target. Piccolo being the fast one of the group was the first of the three to make it to the kitchen; he ran up to Goku and wrapped his arms around his neck, "Agh!" Goku choked as Piccolo grabbed him, Gohan ran in next and climbed onto the table and began jumping on top of it making the dishes that use to be full of food fall to the floor with a crash.
Goku was busy trying to pry Piccolo off him, Bra came in soon after and grabbed a large spaghetti pot and two spoons and began drumming on it, "Piccolo come on get off" Goku said, Piccolo just kept holding on and started laughing, Goku stood up and tried to get a hold of the Namek but it was know use, the table soon fell apart after so much abuse from Gohan's jumping, Bra then got up of the floor with her 'drum' and went over to Goku who had finally gotten Piccolo off his neck, she rammed the pot onto Goku's head and then started hitting it with her spoon. Bra, Piccolo and Gohan soon left leaving Goku half deaf on the kitchen floor.
*In the living room*
Bulma had taken a break from working on the antidote and had gone into the living room to watch TV, when she got there she found Vegeta asleep on the sofa, his head rested on the arm rest and his tail wiggling every now and then, He's actually pretty cute when he's sleeping Bulma thought and walked over to the sofa and sat down next to him, Vegeta stirred in his sleep and turned to face the area of the sofa your back faced when sitting on it. Bulma turned on the TV and put the volume down so as not to wake Vegeta up.
Suddenly Piccolo came bursting in and ran up to the sofa and climbed up, he started jumping and soon landed on Vegeta's tail "YEEEOOOWWW!" Vegeta woke up with a start and started rubbing his sore tail, when stared daggers at Piccolo who was climbing up the curtains, Bulma grabbed Vegeta around the waist trying to stop Vegeta from causing anymore damage, Gohan soon entered and began running around the room knocking things down, Piccolo was now at the middle of the curtain he was climbing and was swinging around on it, "Hey! Piccolo stop that!" Bulma yelled as Bra came running in.
Bulma grabbed her before she could join in on trashing the living room; Bra began giggling while Vegeta scowled, "What is so funny?" Vegeta said to Bra, Bra just smirked and kissed him on the cheek which made him blush, "GIRL GERMS!!!" Gohan and Piccolo screamed and went running out of the room, Bulma sighed and placed Vegeta and Bra on the floor This is going to be one of those days…, Trunks entered covered with ink and looked a little annoyed, "Trunks what happened?" Bulma said Looking at her son.
"Piccolo, Bra and Gohan came running into my office and started throwing papers and spilling ink all over!" Trunks said calmly, Goku came in and looked like he had a bad headache, "Goku are you OK?" Trunks said, "What?" Goku said sticking his finger in his ear, "ARE YOU OK?!?!?!" Vegeta yelled at the top of his lungs, "Oh I'm fine! But I think I went deaf after Bra banged that pot over my head!" Goku said, "Come on let's go find those two" said Bulma and took Bra and Vegeta by the hand, "WHAT?!" Goku yelled, Vegeta got annoyed at him and walked up to him and yelled right in Goku's ear, "WE HAVE TO FIND PICCOLO AND GOHAN!!!!!!!!" Goku clapped his hands on to his ears and nodded before following Vegeta, Bra, Trunks and Bulma out into the hall.
~*~It just bothered me a little that Goku, Vegeta or other Z fighters have gotten hit in the mouth and never lost teeth. I mean don't you think it's odd?~*~