The Reviews keep coming! I LOVE IT! Thank you so much for your support. If it wasn't for the reviews I would have given up on this story a long time ago. I don't really like it, but others seem to so I will keep going. Anything for the fans J
I went back through all the chapters and fixed the grammar and spelling mistakes. However, there was one comment that I would like to clear up. Someone mentioned that the word mother is used too many times instead of the word mum. Well, in a sense that is true, however, it works. When Merry and Pippin are talking, they say mum, which displays how they are meant to talk and gives the reader a sense of what they might sound like and how they might pronounce words. However, the word mother is used in the narrative because it is an outside source. If you read any book, even Mark Twain who stories always used very distinct vernacular, the narration is always proper English, whilst the dialogue is written as the characters would speak. Just wanted to clear that up so that people didn't think I was ignoring this comment.
I truly do take the reviews to heart and I do go back and see what I can change to make the story better for the readers.
Hope you are enjoying the story thus far. There is more to come very shortly. I also plan on posting my other stories once they are done as well. However, does anyone know where I can post stories that deal with real people? I have a really sweet story that I wrote for a friend about Dominic Monaghan that I thought others might enjoy, but can't really find a place to put it. Let me know if you have any ideas.
Cheers!
Taylor