Hello everyone, just putting up another chapter.
PLEASE REVIEW????
Disclaimer: I don't own anything POTC except Delylah and two others, so far.
Chapter three
His look of confusion turned into one of dumbfoundedness.
"Wha- what did you say luv?" He croaked out.
She rolled her eyes and repeated herself.
"Meet your children."
Jack looked to the left of her, to two kids who looked to be in there teens.
"No, ye must be mistaken, I don't have any children." He said beggining to slip into denial.
"Ay, trust me, ye do."
He looked back at the children then to her.
"This is Lylah." She said pointing to a girl with long dark waves of hair, flowing down her back.
"And this is Lewis." She said, pointing to a muscular boy with dark hair up to his shoulders and pulled back (like Wills in the movie).
"There twins." She informed him.
He stared at the kids, and they stared back.
They looked like him, he couldn't deny that, just by looking at them, he knew.
"I have twins." He thought outloud, with a lost look in his eyes.
I know how bad that sucked, it will improve in later chapters, I promise that. Please review, and tell me what you think, please, please?
-Ella-
PLEASE REVIEW????
Disclaimer: I don't own anything POTC except Delylah and two others, so far.
Chapter three
His look of confusion turned into one of dumbfoundedness.
"Wha- what did you say luv?" He croaked out.
She rolled her eyes and repeated herself.
"Meet your children."
Jack looked to the left of her, to two kids who looked to be in there teens.
"No, ye must be mistaken, I don't have any children." He said beggining to slip into denial.
"Ay, trust me, ye do."
He looked back at the children then to her.
"This is Lylah." She said pointing to a girl with long dark waves of hair, flowing down her back.
"And this is Lewis." She said, pointing to a muscular boy with dark hair up to his shoulders and pulled back (like Wills in the movie).
"There twins." She informed him.
He stared at the kids, and they stared back.
They looked like him, he couldn't deny that, just by looking at them, he knew.
"I have twins." He thought outloud, with a lost look in his eyes.
I know how bad that sucked, it will improve in later chapters, I promise that. Please review, and tell me what you think, please, please?
-Ella-
