Here's what I've decided to do with my fic. Since there are some
people who like it as it is in Middle Earth, I will
continue as such. However I will post another fic which will feature the same
characters in a Redwall universe. This will probably be under the name
Redwall's Ring. Thanks to all my reviewers who gave me their input on this
matter. In this fic, I've kind of messed with the movie sequence slightly to
work with the double plotting so don't flame me for that. Note to
TheOriginalFlame- I did change major plot factors (Lothlorien, and Two Towers, to mention a few), I
did get permission from OdMonkey, (see her review), and I will refer others to
her fic though most people have already seen it. Other than that, the
snowboarding part was a mistake on my part and the fencing was also a slight
inaccuracy
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(This next part will cover everything with Mariel, Frodo, Dandin and Sam with
the Nazgul) :: Scene where everyone's asleep and Frodo is talking to Gollum.
:: A nazgul screeches, waking everyone up.
Sam: Black Riders!!!
Gollum: Hide! Hide!
Mariel: * to herself* first time he's actually said something sensible.
Dandin: People! Just hide!
:: Everyone runs for cover. The Nazgul sniffs and the winged beast goes lower.
Sam: I thought they were dead!!!
Dandin: Well, the story wouldn't be that interesting without them, would it?
Frodo: Actually, I've never thought of it that way before.
Mariel: *glaring* you guys! If those things can hear, we'd all be dead by now.
:: Everyone falls silent. The wraiths leave.
Dandin: That was interesting.
Mariel: I am so not a morning person.
Gollum: Hurry hobbits. and mice. The Black Gate is
near.
I know that was short but I'll write more soon. Check out my new fic!!!
