I got my first ever reviews! Thx to XxNoAnGeLXx and Nomysp's Angel for the support, and I wrote chapter one to keep you guessing on what happened the night before, this chapter takes place before chapter one, it should fill in the blank.
Chapter 2
Griff, Psymon, Kaori, Mac, Elise, and Eddie lined up at the starting point for Gravitude on Peak three, this, as you know is a very dangerous course, on a very dangerous peak, complete with large crevices and falling glaciers, the tour was starting on a different note this year, from the top of peak 3 down to the bottom of Peak 1.
Kaori and Mac lined up as the two riders in the center, Psymon was on the left next to Kaori and Griff was next to Psymon. Elise and Eddie were on Mac's right side. The rider could hear the announcer start the countdown for the race to start.
3...
"Hey Kaori, me and you, one two!" yelled Mac as he prepared to leave the gate.
2...
"Aw the kids are gunna team up, see you at the bottom!" Psymon cackled, as he tucked in wait for the gate to open.
1...
Elise glanced over at Eddie and pondered what approach she could take to get to the left side.
GO!
All of the riders took off at top speed down the front of the mountain, Mac and Kaori were separated at the start by how the course was made. They didn't worry much because they would meet up at the next junction.
everyone was pulling uber tricks from the beginning of the race, and after they were landed they would pick up speed from out of nowhere, the crowd was going insane because of the impossible rate of speed that the riders were achieving down this mountain, Glaciers were falling and the riders would dodge them without a glance.
"Hey Kaori, over here, check this out!" Mac headed toward a large glass sign that said something, but she didn't have the time to read it before it was shattered by Mac.
"hold on Mac! I don't think you should!" she followed him anyway. Kaori took a look around at the walls, they were in a cave with icicles hanging from the ceiling, it was a beautiful sight to see.
She was amazed by the sight to the point she forgot to watch where she was going.
She slowly drifted toward the edge of a crevice, and caught herself just before going over the edge, but still lost balance and was slowly tipping over, she couldn't use her feet to stabilize her because of her board and she knew this was it, Kaori blacked out.
"Kaori, please Kaori, wake up..."
Kaori slowly opened her eyes, she could see a black shadow of a person standing above her, whoever it was, he was panting heavily and looked to be in tears, as color returned to her eyes she could see the cave and the icicles, and Mac was standing above her.
"Kaori, don't die, I love you too much for you to die right now." Said Mac, he had not realized she had awoken already.
Kaori grabbed his hand, and Mac jumped in shock. "do you mean that?" she said softly.
"yes I do, and with all my being." he picked her up and slowly began to snowboard down the mountain.
END OF CHAPTER 2
Ok, Mac is out of Character I know, Please R&R.
Chapter 2
Griff, Psymon, Kaori, Mac, Elise, and Eddie lined up at the starting point for Gravitude on Peak three, this, as you know is a very dangerous course, on a very dangerous peak, complete with large crevices and falling glaciers, the tour was starting on a different note this year, from the top of peak 3 down to the bottom of Peak 1.
Kaori and Mac lined up as the two riders in the center, Psymon was on the left next to Kaori and Griff was next to Psymon. Elise and Eddie were on Mac's right side. The rider could hear the announcer start the countdown for the race to start.
3...
"Hey Kaori, me and you, one two!" yelled Mac as he prepared to leave the gate.
2...
"Aw the kids are gunna team up, see you at the bottom!" Psymon cackled, as he tucked in wait for the gate to open.
1...
Elise glanced over at Eddie and pondered what approach she could take to get to the left side.
GO!
All of the riders took off at top speed down the front of the mountain, Mac and Kaori were separated at the start by how the course was made. They didn't worry much because they would meet up at the next junction.
everyone was pulling uber tricks from the beginning of the race, and after they were landed they would pick up speed from out of nowhere, the crowd was going insane because of the impossible rate of speed that the riders were achieving down this mountain, Glaciers were falling and the riders would dodge them without a glance.
"Hey Kaori, over here, check this out!" Mac headed toward a large glass sign that said something, but she didn't have the time to read it before it was shattered by Mac.
"hold on Mac! I don't think you should!" she followed him anyway. Kaori took a look around at the walls, they were in a cave with icicles hanging from the ceiling, it was a beautiful sight to see.
She was amazed by the sight to the point she forgot to watch where she was going.
She slowly drifted toward the edge of a crevice, and caught herself just before going over the edge, but still lost balance and was slowly tipping over, she couldn't use her feet to stabilize her because of her board and she knew this was it, Kaori blacked out.
"Kaori, please Kaori, wake up..."
Kaori slowly opened her eyes, she could see a black shadow of a person standing above her, whoever it was, he was panting heavily and looked to be in tears, as color returned to her eyes she could see the cave and the icicles, and Mac was standing above her.
"Kaori, don't die, I love you too much for you to die right now." Said Mac, he had not realized she had awoken already.
Kaori grabbed his hand, and Mac jumped in shock. "do you mean that?" she said softly.
"yes I do, and with all my being." he picked her up and slowly began to snowboard down the mountain.
END OF CHAPTER 2
Ok, Mac is out of Character I know, Please R&R.