Title: Birthday Surprise
Rating: R
Author: DJ'sgirl
Disclaimer: Don't own anything that has to do with PB; if I did I would be really rich. Anyway PLEASE don't sue me.
Paring: Riddick/Jack
Summary: Summary in first paragraph.
Archive: If you want it just e-mail at benniebuddy@cfl.rr.com
Feedback: Please, I want to know what you guys think.
This takes place when Jack, Imam, and Riddick get picked up on this salvage ship. They were on the ship for about 2 earth weeks. It was dumb luck that they were found. The survivors lost hope after about the 9th day. When they were picked up the crew didn't ask many questions, which was good. They had 2 weeks to figure out a story so they didn't have much to worry about. The story pretty much was the truth; the only thing that they had to cover up was Riddick. Riddick was beat up pretty bad. His leg got infected really badly and he had to stay in the med bay for a while. Jack would visit him all the time. She was very worried about the one person she thought would protect her. Jack figured she cared about Riddick a little too much then she was supposed to. Lately she was having these weird feeling when she was around him; butterflies in her stomach, and a slight touch would send shock waves throughout her body. She didn't feel like this before, but the 2 weeks on the skiff made her change. While on the ship she made some friends with the crew.
Gina was the youngest of the crew of 9. She was 3 years older than Jack. Her father was the captain, which explained her present on the ship. She lost her mom when she was 5. Jack could relate because her mom died also when she was young, she ended up living with her alcoholic dad. She was on the Hunter-Gratzner because she wanted to get away from him. Gina was pretty and thin like Jack but she was very female looking. Jack wished she didn't shave her head. She loved her hair. Also on the ship there was Michael, who was very cute. He was 6 foot 1 and had brown hair, blues eyes. He was cute in the way like boy next door cute. Jack loved hanging out with him. He was so funny. When ever Jack was alone he would come up from behind her and start a tickle fight. Michael made her feel good. He would say she was pretty, even with the baldhead. Jack never took anything from it because she just thought he was just saying it to say it. He was 21 years old, so why would he be interest in a scrawny boyish looking 16-year old girl. He also taught here boxing which was really hard training. There was also Paul. Jack always thought he was sort of fruity, but he would always say that he was more in touch with his famine side because he grew up with a lot of sisters. Jack was proven wrong when she saw him and Christena making out. She was a little surprised because he actually looked like a great kisser. Christena was the same age as Paul, 28. She was Jamaican -Chinese, which gave here really nice skin. It was caramel much like Riddick's. She had nice silky hair, jet black in color. She was what you would call exotic looking. Then there were the Parker twins. Sam and Samara are fraternal twins. They were usually in the engine room making repairs. They always said two head are better than one. Seventh was Ming Lee. She was from New China. She was very wise. While on the ship, she taught her meditation techniques and an ancient form of some material arts. Dre was the only black guy there. He had this hip hoppy style to himself. He loved to dance. He taught Jack some really cool dance moves. Then the last was Cappy. He was like a father figure to all of them. He was extremely kind, and loved giving advice. Jack, Imam and Riddick were on the ship for about 1 month because it would take them another 4 to get to New Mecca. Riddick still wasn't out of sickbay. It didn't look good. His condition was getting worse and the infection was traveling down his leg. While Jack was visiting him he would go in and out of consciences. One day she was about to go visit when she saw Christena rushing to the med room. Riddick had begun to go into seizures and then fell in to a coma. Jack tried to get into the room but Michael held her back. Jack cried on Mike's shoulder for about a week. Christena and Mike were the only ones who knew how she felt about Richard. They had to use a name so they just named him Richard Johns. Jack is alone in her quarters, which she shared with Imam, when someone knocks on the door. She gets up and answers it. The door opens with a slight swooshing sound.
"You okay?" it was Michael holding something behind his back.
"I've been worse, what do you have behind your back?" he gives her a sly smile.
"Well. what do you think it is?"
"Mike come on, what is it?" she goes to take a peak but he moves before she can get a glance. "I will tackle you if you don't tell me."
"Is that a promise?" Jack smacks him on the arm. They both laugh. Then he hands it to her. It's a rectangular black box. On it, it says 'TIFFANY'S OF NEW PARIS'
"Oh my god," she opens it and it has a silver necklace with a diamond in crested pendent. The pendent is a solid sliver heart with pink diamonds on the edges and in the middle it had her name, "Why did you get me this, my birthday isn't tell another 3 days."
"Well I saw it in town and just thought it would be a perfect present."
"Then why give it to me now?" he moves closer to her till they're about 3 inches apart. He looks down on her and touches her cheek with the back of his hand.
"Because I thought you needed something to cheer you up."
"Thanks, I think I need it." they stared into each others eyes, Mike starts to lean in and there lips are about to touch but Jack turns her head and it lands on her cheek. "I can't." Mike backs away with a sober look on his face.
"Sorry I forgot."
"It's okay, but I don't understand why you like me, why don't you like Gina. She's much prettier."
"Still, I can't talk to her the way I talk to you."
"But don't you want someone who is about the same age as you. I'm 16."
"Maybe but you are a lot more mature for your age. It wouldn't matter with Riddick." Now that was a blow to the stomach. Jack gets a hurt look on her face. "Oh god I'm so sorry Jack. I didn't mean it that way. I know how you feel about Riddick but I respect your wishes about being friends. We cool?"
"Well." she pauses in fake thought, "maybe if you buy me another necklace." she tries to keep a straight face but it doesn't work. They both stand there a moment, and then Michael walks out the door. "Where are you going?" He turns around "To go by you another necklace." Jack rushes at him and jumps on his back, "Well, if you let me come. I want to get the best one the store has." She gets off and hands Michael the necklace. "You want to do the honors?" He reaches in the box and takes the necklace out. Jack turns around so her back is to him and he slips the necklace on. She turns around and gives Mike a hug. "Thanks for everything Mike."
"No problem."
"Well see ya later." She closed the door to the room and headed to sickbay. Michael didn't bother asking where she was going, he knew. He didn't understand why she was in love with some guy whose twice her age, has known him for about 2 weeks and is in a coma. All he knew was on that planet he saved her life twice. All he hoped was that Jack would realize it wouldn't work out. He turned and headed for the work out room.
In the med room Jack saw Christena looking at some monitors that Riddick was hooked up to. He looked better then he did before. He was lucky they didn't have to amputate his leg. The infection had cleared up but he was still in a coma. "So how does it look doc?" Jack said walking up beside her and staring at the monitor to his heart.
"Well, he's better, just not sure when he's gonna come back to the awake?"
"Yeah, comas are tricky like that, right?"
"Yep."
"Hey," Christena notices Jack's necklace, "Who gave you that?"
"Michael."
"Mickey gave you a necklace!"
"Yep."
"Wow honey, aren't you lucky." she moves to a chart and writes something down.
"Why you say that?"
"Cause look at you, you have to gorgeous men in your life. I wish I were that lucky."
"You have Paul."
"What Paul, me and him broke up a long time ago? Thought you knew."
"Nope."
"Well babe, I got go, we're gonna be on New Paris for another day, you want to go shopping with us girls. Maybe pick up some new clothing?" Jack looks down at what she was wearing. A pair of faded blue jeans and a t-shirt she borrowed from Gina.
"I think that's a good idea." So Christena left and Jack was alone with Riddick. She pulled a chair up to the bed. She hated seeing Riddick like this. It was too much sometimes. "Hey big guy," she puts a hand on his prickly head and began to rub, "my birthday is coming up in a few days and it would be nice if you woke up soon. It would be the greatest birthday present ever." she lays her head on his arm and begins to caress his bicep. Then Jack got an idea, it probably wouldn't work, but she'd try anyway. She got up and leaned over and kissed Riddick on the lips. She waited a moment and nothing happened. "Only in fairytales." Then she noticed that his heart rate went up after she did it. Could he have really felt that? She thought to herself. She stayed there a little bit longer than left. Dinner would be served and they all had to be there.
Rating: R
Author: DJ'sgirl
Disclaimer: Don't own anything that has to do with PB; if I did I would be really rich. Anyway PLEASE don't sue me.
Paring: Riddick/Jack
Summary: Summary in first paragraph.
Archive: If you want it just e-mail at benniebuddy@cfl.rr.com
Feedback: Please, I want to know what you guys think.
This takes place when Jack, Imam, and Riddick get picked up on this salvage ship. They were on the ship for about 2 earth weeks. It was dumb luck that they were found. The survivors lost hope after about the 9th day. When they were picked up the crew didn't ask many questions, which was good. They had 2 weeks to figure out a story so they didn't have much to worry about. The story pretty much was the truth; the only thing that they had to cover up was Riddick. Riddick was beat up pretty bad. His leg got infected really badly and he had to stay in the med bay for a while. Jack would visit him all the time. She was very worried about the one person she thought would protect her. Jack figured she cared about Riddick a little too much then she was supposed to. Lately she was having these weird feeling when she was around him; butterflies in her stomach, and a slight touch would send shock waves throughout her body. She didn't feel like this before, but the 2 weeks on the skiff made her change. While on the ship she made some friends with the crew.
Gina was the youngest of the crew of 9. She was 3 years older than Jack. Her father was the captain, which explained her present on the ship. She lost her mom when she was 5. Jack could relate because her mom died also when she was young, she ended up living with her alcoholic dad. She was on the Hunter-Gratzner because she wanted to get away from him. Gina was pretty and thin like Jack but she was very female looking. Jack wished she didn't shave her head. She loved her hair. Also on the ship there was Michael, who was very cute. He was 6 foot 1 and had brown hair, blues eyes. He was cute in the way like boy next door cute. Jack loved hanging out with him. He was so funny. When ever Jack was alone he would come up from behind her and start a tickle fight. Michael made her feel good. He would say she was pretty, even with the baldhead. Jack never took anything from it because she just thought he was just saying it to say it. He was 21 years old, so why would he be interest in a scrawny boyish looking 16-year old girl. He also taught here boxing which was really hard training. There was also Paul. Jack always thought he was sort of fruity, but he would always say that he was more in touch with his famine side because he grew up with a lot of sisters. Jack was proven wrong when she saw him and Christena making out. She was a little surprised because he actually looked like a great kisser. Christena was the same age as Paul, 28. She was Jamaican -Chinese, which gave here really nice skin. It was caramel much like Riddick's. She had nice silky hair, jet black in color. She was what you would call exotic looking. Then there were the Parker twins. Sam and Samara are fraternal twins. They were usually in the engine room making repairs. They always said two head are better than one. Seventh was Ming Lee. She was from New China. She was very wise. While on the ship, she taught her meditation techniques and an ancient form of some material arts. Dre was the only black guy there. He had this hip hoppy style to himself. He loved to dance. He taught Jack some really cool dance moves. Then the last was Cappy. He was like a father figure to all of them. He was extremely kind, and loved giving advice. Jack, Imam and Riddick were on the ship for about 1 month because it would take them another 4 to get to New Mecca. Riddick still wasn't out of sickbay. It didn't look good. His condition was getting worse and the infection was traveling down his leg. While Jack was visiting him he would go in and out of consciences. One day she was about to go visit when she saw Christena rushing to the med room. Riddick had begun to go into seizures and then fell in to a coma. Jack tried to get into the room but Michael held her back. Jack cried on Mike's shoulder for about a week. Christena and Mike were the only ones who knew how she felt about Richard. They had to use a name so they just named him Richard Johns. Jack is alone in her quarters, which she shared with Imam, when someone knocks on the door. She gets up and answers it. The door opens with a slight swooshing sound.
"You okay?" it was Michael holding something behind his back.
"I've been worse, what do you have behind your back?" he gives her a sly smile.
"Well. what do you think it is?"
"Mike come on, what is it?" she goes to take a peak but he moves before she can get a glance. "I will tackle you if you don't tell me."
"Is that a promise?" Jack smacks him on the arm. They both laugh. Then he hands it to her. It's a rectangular black box. On it, it says 'TIFFANY'S OF NEW PARIS'
"Oh my god," she opens it and it has a silver necklace with a diamond in crested pendent. The pendent is a solid sliver heart with pink diamonds on the edges and in the middle it had her name, "Why did you get me this, my birthday isn't tell another 3 days."
"Well I saw it in town and just thought it would be a perfect present."
"Then why give it to me now?" he moves closer to her till they're about 3 inches apart. He looks down on her and touches her cheek with the back of his hand.
"Because I thought you needed something to cheer you up."
"Thanks, I think I need it." they stared into each others eyes, Mike starts to lean in and there lips are about to touch but Jack turns her head and it lands on her cheek. "I can't." Mike backs away with a sober look on his face.
"Sorry I forgot."
"It's okay, but I don't understand why you like me, why don't you like Gina. She's much prettier."
"Still, I can't talk to her the way I talk to you."
"But don't you want someone who is about the same age as you. I'm 16."
"Maybe but you are a lot more mature for your age. It wouldn't matter with Riddick." Now that was a blow to the stomach. Jack gets a hurt look on her face. "Oh god I'm so sorry Jack. I didn't mean it that way. I know how you feel about Riddick but I respect your wishes about being friends. We cool?"
"Well." she pauses in fake thought, "maybe if you buy me another necklace." she tries to keep a straight face but it doesn't work. They both stand there a moment, and then Michael walks out the door. "Where are you going?" He turns around "To go by you another necklace." Jack rushes at him and jumps on his back, "Well, if you let me come. I want to get the best one the store has." She gets off and hands Michael the necklace. "You want to do the honors?" He reaches in the box and takes the necklace out. Jack turns around so her back is to him and he slips the necklace on. She turns around and gives Mike a hug. "Thanks for everything Mike."
"No problem."
"Well see ya later." She closed the door to the room and headed to sickbay. Michael didn't bother asking where she was going, he knew. He didn't understand why she was in love with some guy whose twice her age, has known him for about 2 weeks and is in a coma. All he knew was on that planet he saved her life twice. All he hoped was that Jack would realize it wouldn't work out. He turned and headed for the work out room.
In the med room Jack saw Christena looking at some monitors that Riddick was hooked up to. He looked better then he did before. He was lucky they didn't have to amputate his leg. The infection had cleared up but he was still in a coma. "So how does it look doc?" Jack said walking up beside her and staring at the monitor to his heart.
"Well, he's better, just not sure when he's gonna come back to the awake?"
"Yeah, comas are tricky like that, right?"
"Yep."
"Hey," Christena notices Jack's necklace, "Who gave you that?"
"Michael."
"Mickey gave you a necklace!"
"Yep."
"Wow honey, aren't you lucky." she moves to a chart and writes something down.
"Why you say that?"
"Cause look at you, you have to gorgeous men in your life. I wish I were that lucky."
"You have Paul."
"What Paul, me and him broke up a long time ago? Thought you knew."
"Nope."
"Well babe, I got go, we're gonna be on New Paris for another day, you want to go shopping with us girls. Maybe pick up some new clothing?" Jack looks down at what she was wearing. A pair of faded blue jeans and a t-shirt she borrowed from Gina.
"I think that's a good idea." So Christena left and Jack was alone with Riddick. She pulled a chair up to the bed. She hated seeing Riddick like this. It was too much sometimes. "Hey big guy," she puts a hand on his prickly head and began to rub, "my birthday is coming up in a few days and it would be nice if you woke up soon. It would be the greatest birthday present ever." she lays her head on his arm and begins to caress his bicep. Then Jack got an idea, it probably wouldn't work, but she'd try anyway. She got up and leaned over and kissed Riddick on the lips. She waited a moment and nothing happened. "Only in fairytales." Then she noticed that his heart rate went up after she did it. Could he have really felt that? She thought to herself. She stayed there a little bit longer than left. Dinner would be served and they all had to be there.