Hi! This is my first fanfic, so don't read it too, like, harshly! Please
review!!!!
Disclaimer: unfortunately, I do not own Kodocha. *runs off crying* Anyway.here's the story!
"Sana, you look beautiful!" Sana looked at herself with a small smile. She had to admit, she did look beautiful. Her hair was gently pulled back into a bun. A few wisps of hair were left free, gently tickling her face. She was wearing a white dress, with a silver design of a flower winding its way around her body. It outlined her figure perfectly. She was wearing white shoes that lifted her feet slightly off the ground, silver eye shadow, with a touch of pink lipstick. She smiled at her mother.
"Thank you mama." She looked outside, but Akito Hayama, her date for the evening, wasn't there yet.
"He's late." Sana looked at the clock on the wall with a frown.
"Why don't I take you?" Rei asked?
"No Rei. You aren't going, remember?" Rei sighed.
"Why won't you let me go?"
"This is going to be my night, not yours Rei." Rei looked at Sana. His client had grown up. She was really beautiful now. She had lost the cuteness, although she still blurted out whatever came into her mind. He watched as Sana sat down. She lifted her skirt gently, and lowered herself down slowly.
" I should have known he'd be late." She leaned back slightly and closed her eyes. She remembered everything she had gone through with Akito. She remembered, how he had saved her life.
Flashback .........
Sana was walking along the street, when a man held a gun to her head.
"I am going to kill you Sana. I have dreamt of this." All of a sudden, the man fell to the ground. Sana looked around at him, and saw Akito kicking him viciously.
"Okay, Okay I'm leaving!" said the man, clutching his side. He limped away as fast as he could. Sana looked at Akito.
"Are you okay?" His strong arms held her tight, and Sana felt as if nothing bad could ever happen to her.
Present ..........
The doorbell rang harshly, startling Sana. She stood up, being careful not to step on her long dress. She hurried over to the door, pulling out her hammer on the way. She opened up the door. As soon as Akito stepped into the house, he was clutching his head.
"Whatdja do that for?"
"You're late!"
"It's not my fault! There was traffic!"
"Bye mom!" she said merrily, pulling Akito out of the house. She pulled him to a stop in front of his car.
"I'll forgive you if you give me a kiss" Sana said with a devious smile. Akito looked at Sana and shook his head. She grabbed her hammer and hit him.
"Ow! Okay okay! Just don't hit me anymore!" They looked into each other's eyes. Akito took hold of Sana's shoulders, and let his lips brush hers. She gave another smile.
"Thanks!" She looked at him expectantly.
"What now?"
"Be a gentleman! Open the door for me!" Akito sighed, but obediently opened the door. Sana stepped in, but she had stepped on the end of her dress, and it ripped as she sat down in the car.
"Oh no! My dress ripped!" She looked at Akito's surprised face, and a tear escaped from her eye.
"I'm sorry. I just wanted it to be a perfect evening." She looked at her dress forlornly, than realized she hadn't ripped it. She looked at the ground, and saw the end of Akito's pants (which had been too big) had been ripped. She put her hand over her mouth.
"I didn't know you cared so much about my pants" Sana snorted, and Akito smiled.
"It's okay. I don't care. Now we are really late, so I'm going to get going." Sana looked at her boyfriend. She was so lucky to have him. When they were younger, before Akito had saved her life, Akito had moved to LA. Sana had been afraid he would never come back.
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Did you like it? Please review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Disclaimer: unfortunately, I do not own Kodocha. *runs off crying* Anyway.here's the story!
"Sana, you look beautiful!" Sana looked at herself with a small smile. She had to admit, she did look beautiful. Her hair was gently pulled back into a bun. A few wisps of hair were left free, gently tickling her face. She was wearing a white dress, with a silver design of a flower winding its way around her body. It outlined her figure perfectly. She was wearing white shoes that lifted her feet slightly off the ground, silver eye shadow, with a touch of pink lipstick. She smiled at her mother.
"Thank you mama." She looked outside, but Akito Hayama, her date for the evening, wasn't there yet.
"He's late." Sana looked at the clock on the wall with a frown.
"Why don't I take you?" Rei asked?
"No Rei. You aren't going, remember?" Rei sighed.
"Why won't you let me go?"
"This is going to be my night, not yours Rei." Rei looked at Sana. His client had grown up. She was really beautiful now. She had lost the cuteness, although she still blurted out whatever came into her mind. He watched as Sana sat down. She lifted her skirt gently, and lowered herself down slowly.
" I should have known he'd be late." She leaned back slightly and closed her eyes. She remembered everything she had gone through with Akito. She remembered, how he had saved her life.
Flashback .........
Sana was walking along the street, when a man held a gun to her head.
"I am going to kill you Sana. I have dreamt of this." All of a sudden, the man fell to the ground. Sana looked around at him, and saw Akito kicking him viciously.
"Okay, Okay I'm leaving!" said the man, clutching his side. He limped away as fast as he could. Sana looked at Akito.
"Are you okay?" His strong arms held her tight, and Sana felt as if nothing bad could ever happen to her.
Present ..........
The doorbell rang harshly, startling Sana. She stood up, being careful not to step on her long dress. She hurried over to the door, pulling out her hammer on the way. She opened up the door. As soon as Akito stepped into the house, he was clutching his head.
"Whatdja do that for?"
"You're late!"
"It's not my fault! There was traffic!"
"Bye mom!" she said merrily, pulling Akito out of the house. She pulled him to a stop in front of his car.
"I'll forgive you if you give me a kiss" Sana said with a devious smile. Akito looked at Sana and shook his head. She grabbed her hammer and hit him.
"Ow! Okay okay! Just don't hit me anymore!" They looked into each other's eyes. Akito took hold of Sana's shoulders, and let his lips brush hers. She gave another smile.
"Thanks!" She looked at him expectantly.
"What now?"
"Be a gentleman! Open the door for me!" Akito sighed, but obediently opened the door. Sana stepped in, but she had stepped on the end of her dress, and it ripped as she sat down in the car.
"Oh no! My dress ripped!" She looked at Akito's surprised face, and a tear escaped from her eye.
"I'm sorry. I just wanted it to be a perfect evening." She looked at her dress forlornly, than realized she hadn't ripped it. She looked at the ground, and saw the end of Akito's pants (which had been too big) had been ripped. She put her hand over her mouth.
"I didn't know you cared so much about my pants" Sana snorted, and Akito smiled.
"It's okay. I don't care. Now we are really late, so I'm going to get going." Sana looked at her boyfriend. She was so lucky to have him. When they were younger, before Akito had saved her life, Akito had moved to LA. Sana had been afraid he would never come back.
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Did you like it? Please review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!