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Disclaimer: don't own Kodocha
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When they arrived, Tsuyoshi and Aya came up to meet them eagerly.
"Hey Akito! Hey Sana! Come on, this is a really cool party! Naozumi is here!" Akito looked mad. Naozumi came to a regular party? Wonder why? Akito turned to look at Sana, only to see her running up to the party.
"Sana! Wait up!" As he ran up, Sana hit him on the head with her hammer again.
"That's just because you are slow!" They stepped in, and Sana threw her arms up, with a huge smile.
"This is going to be so much fun!!!" Sana immediately stepped in, and started to dance. Akito glanced at her, and shook his head. He would never do that. Akito looked around, and spotted Naozumi. He was dancing with 5 girls, smiling slightly. Suddenly Sana spotted him. She ran over throwing her arms around Naozumi.
"You're here!" She laughed, and spun around.
"How do I look?" She asked Naozumi.
"Wonderful" he said grabbing one of her hands. He pulled her off to a table with drinks on it. He grabbed a glass of water and handed it to her.
"Thanks!"
"Sana, will you step outside with me? I need to talk to you, privately." Sana looked at him, her smile sliding off of her face. She nodded, and they walked outside.
"Sana, you know I've always loved you. And, well, if you say no, I promise I won't bother you about it again. You are very important to me. You are probably important to Akito also, although he doesn't show it very well, and, Sana, I never want to let you go. Will you marry me?" He held out a ring. It had a diamond on it, and it glittered, beautifully.
Sana's eyes flew open. She stared at Naozumi, her mouth wide open. She should have known this was coming. She thought about it for a minute. Naozumi could provide for her better. He would be used to fame. She didn't even know if Akito loved her anymore. He did kiss her once in a while, and he would get a slightly tender look on his face. Maybe it was better to marry Naozumi. Akito hadn't proposed yet anyway.
"Sana? Yes or No?" Sana looked at him carefully. His blue eyes were looking at her very intensely.
"Can I get back to you on it?" Naozumi sighed.
"Yes, I'll wait until the end of the world for you," he said with a soft smile. Sana nodded, uncomfortably, and walked back into the house. Naozumi stayed outside, thinking. He had expected Sana to say no, that she loved Akito. But if she hadn't decided yet, well, that meant he still had a chance. He would do anything to make Sana marry him.
Naozumi's thoughts were cut off, as he saw Akito appear from the bushes.
"Jerk! Sana said she didn't love you a long time ago. Why do you have to push it?" Akito said, his fists up.
"Listen, I don't want to fight Hayama" Akito's face turned beet red, from anger.
"You are the slimiest, most repulsive person I have ever met" he said with a snarl. He jumped on Naozumi, trying to hit him, until he was dead.
"No! Akito! Stop!" Sana ran out and hit Akito hard on his head with her hammer. Why was he so violent? Maybe Naozumi really was the better person for her.
"Don't marry him Sana! He is a slimy toad!"
"At least he isn't violent! At least he doesn't try to kill every person he meets!"
Akito looked at her, and lowered his head.
"I'm sorry."
"You should be." Sana picked up Naozumi.
"Are you alright?" He nodded. He turned and gave Akito a smug smile. Akito ran off into the night, wiping the tears from his eyes. He couldn't believe he was actually crying. Would Sana ever forgive him? And why did she care so much about Naozumi anyways. It wasn't like he had done anything for her. Now I'm mad, Akito thought to himself. I'm going to propose to Sana tomorrow.
The next day, Sana walked to the corner store. Should she marry Naozumi? She couldn't put off her answer forever. Suddenly, she saw a familiar figure. It was Akito. She felt sorry she had yelled at him last night. Naozumi might have made him mad.
"Akito! Listen, I'm sorry about last night. I shouldn't have yelled."
"It's alright. I shouldn't have gotten that mad." Akito looked at Sana's face carefully.
"Sana, will you marry me?"
Sana looked at him with surprise. First Naozumi, now Akito! Who should she choose? Akito was looking embarrassed.
"I know I'm not as romantic or anything as Naozumi, but Sana, I.." He hid his face in his hands.
"Yes?"
"Sana, I. love."
"Sushi?"
"No! I love you! There it's out. Now Sana, you know how hard that was for me. Will you please marry me?" He pulled a ring out of his pocket. It was plain, no diamonds, but Sana thought it was sweet. She looked into her eyes.
"I .don't know" Akito nodded.
"I guess you are marrying Naozumi then."
"I said I don't know."
"Okay then, I guess I'll see you tomorrow."
"Okay, see you." When Sana was home, she locked herself in her room. Who should she pick? She really loved Akito, but Naozumi would be a better pick, or at least that's what other people thought. She buried her face in her pillow. This was it. Whoever she picked, she would be stuck with for life.
The next day Sana tried to act like everything was normal. She had decided who she would marry! She couldn't look at either of their faces. Well, the boy she picked would be happy.
.......... At the wedding
Sana looked at her flowing white dress. She was so happy! She knew her husband wouldn't fail her. He would always be there for her. She smiled as she thought of his face. Suddenly there was a pounding at the door. Sana knew who it was immediately.
"Come in Fuka." She said.
"Sana, girl, I heard who you are going to marry! Are you sure he's the right choice, I mean, I thought you loved."
"He's the right choice Fuka. Don't you think I've thought hard about this?"
"Yes, but you love Akito!"
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Did you like it? This is going to be a short story. I'll probably finish in the next chapter.
I know my story is kinda weird. but I don't know what other people think.BECAUSE NOBODY IS REVIEWING! Even if its bad, and boring, which it kind of is, please review!!
Bloopy!
Disclaimer: don't own Kodocha
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When they arrived, Tsuyoshi and Aya came up to meet them eagerly.
"Hey Akito! Hey Sana! Come on, this is a really cool party! Naozumi is here!" Akito looked mad. Naozumi came to a regular party? Wonder why? Akito turned to look at Sana, only to see her running up to the party.
"Sana! Wait up!" As he ran up, Sana hit him on the head with her hammer again.
"That's just because you are slow!" They stepped in, and Sana threw her arms up, with a huge smile.
"This is going to be so much fun!!!" Sana immediately stepped in, and started to dance. Akito glanced at her, and shook his head. He would never do that. Akito looked around, and spotted Naozumi. He was dancing with 5 girls, smiling slightly. Suddenly Sana spotted him. She ran over throwing her arms around Naozumi.
"You're here!" She laughed, and spun around.
"How do I look?" She asked Naozumi.
"Wonderful" he said grabbing one of her hands. He pulled her off to a table with drinks on it. He grabbed a glass of water and handed it to her.
"Thanks!"
"Sana, will you step outside with me? I need to talk to you, privately." Sana looked at him, her smile sliding off of her face. She nodded, and they walked outside.
"Sana, you know I've always loved you. And, well, if you say no, I promise I won't bother you about it again. You are very important to me. You are probably important to Akito also, although he doesn't show it very well, and, Sana, I never want to let you go. Will you marry me?" He held out a ring. It had a diamond on it, and it glittered, beautifully.
Sana's eyes flew open. She stared at Naozumi, her mouth wide open. She should have known this was coming. She thought about it for a minute. Naozumi could provide for her better. He would be used to fame. She didn't even know if Akito loved her anymore. He did kiss her once in a while, and he would get a slightly tender look on his face. Maybe it was better to marry Naozumi. Akito hadn't proposed yet anyway.
"Sana? Yes or No?" Sana looked at him carefully. His blue eyes were looking at her very intensely.
"Can I get back to you on it?" Naozumi sighed.
"Yes, I'll wait until the end of the world for you," he said with a soft smile. Sana nodded, uncomfortably, and walked back into the house. Naozumi stayed outside, thinking. He had expected Sana to say no, that she loved Akito. But if she hadn't decided yet, well, that meant he still had a chance. He would do anything to make Sana marry him.
Naozumi's thoughts were cut off, as he saw Akito appear from the bushes.
"Jerk! Sana said she didn't love you a long time ago. Why do you have to push it?" Akito said, his fists up.
"Listen, I don't want to fight Hayama" Akito's face turned beet red, from anger.
"You are the slimiest, most repulsive person I have ever met" he said with a snarl. He jumped on Naozumi, trying to hit him, until he was dead.
"No! Akito! Stop!" Sana ran out and hit Akito hard on his head with her hammer. Why was he so violent? Maybe Naozumi really was the better person for her.
"Don't marry him Sana! He is a slimy toad!"
"At least he isn't violent! At least he doesn't try to kill every person he meets!"
Akito looked at her, and lowered his head.
"I'm sorry."
"You should be." Sana picked up Naozumi.
"Are you alright?" He nodded. He turned and gave Akito a smug smile. Akito ran off into the night, wiping the tears from his eyes. He couldn't believe he was actually crying. Would Sana ever forgive him? And why did she care so much about Naozumi anyways. It wasn't like he had done anything for her. Now I'm mad, Akito thought to himself. I'm going to propose to Sana tomorrow.
The next day, Sana walked to the corner store. Should she marry Naozumi? She couldn't put off her answer forever. Suddenly, she saw a familiar figure. It was Akito. She felt sorry she had yelled at him last night. Naozumi might have made him mad.
"Akito! Listen, I'm sorry about last night. I shouldn't have yelled."
"It's alright. I shouldn't have gotten that mad." Akito looked at Sana's face carefully.
"Sana, will you marry me?"
Sana looked at him with surprise. First Naozumi, now Akito! Who should she choose? Akito was looking embarrassed.
"I know I'm not as romantic or anything as Naozumi, but Sana, I.." He hid his face in his hands.
"Yes?"
"Sana, I. love."
"Sushi?"
"No! I love you! There it's out. Now Sana, you know how hard that was for me. Will you please marry me?" He pulled a ring out of his pocket. It was plain, no diamonds, but Sana thought it was sweet. She looked into her eyes.
"I .don't know" Akito nodded.
"I guess you are marrying Naozumi then."
"I said I don't know."
"Okay then, I guess I'll see you tomorrow."
"Okay, see you." When Sana was home, she locked herself in her room. Who should she pick? She really loved Akito, but Naozumi would be a better pick, or at least that's what other people thought. She buried her face in her pillow. This was it. Whoever she picked, she would be stuck with for life.
The next day Sana tried to act like everything was normal. She had decided who she would marry! She couldn't look at either of their faces. Well, the boy she picked would be happy.
.......... At the wedding
Sana looked at her flowing white dress. She was so happy! She knew her husband wouldn't fail her. He would always be there for her. She smiled as she thought of his face. Suddenly there was a pounding at the door. Sana knew who it was immediately.
"Come in Fuka." She said.
"Sana, girl, I heard who you are going to marry! Are you sure he's the right choice, I mean, I thought you loved."
"He's the right choice Fuka. Don't you think I've thought hard about this?"
"Yes, but you love Akito!"
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Did you like it? This is going to be a short story. I'll probably finish in the next chapter.
I know my story is kinda weird. but I don't know what other people think.BECAUSE NOBODY IS REVIEWING! Even if its bad, and boring, which it kind of is, please review!!