OK people first I would like to say that when I typed my story it wasn't
like that it was in
little paragraphs and not this big huge block! The sight messed that up I hate it when
story's are like that so I am going to try to fix that. Sorry people
And I would really be a lot happier if people would not write page long things on how I
should type it up better. I am not very good at stuff like that and the reason I didn't
finish my other story's is because too many people did that and I got bored with having to
read them all and deal with it. I am going to have my friend go through them from now
on and revise it and fix it because she is good at that type of thing. But if you could
please stop writing reviews like that It would really be helpful.
And people please realize that this is a FANFICTION!
INUgrrrl_24 Yeah I know it is but I wanted to get it up fast it will slow down soon.
kawaii monkey hanyou Thanks for the review and I am trying to fix the paragraph problem.
InuObsessed I think that they are the best pairing as well, and thanks for your support!
Inufan Thanks
sesshomaru-luver Thanks and I will be making more chapters but I don't know how many will be in this story
yet. And thanks for the tip! I am going to go look at your story's as well.
And too ChristyKay and Trang Nquyen thanks for trying to help me but I would rather you
don't go by it step bye step and point out all my mistakes, I am not a professional writer and
don't want to get into that type of thing all I want to do is write inuyasha and other anime
fanfiction's they don't have to be perfect its not like there for a grade or anything. And it does
not have to be in character, and I know that they are both a little out of character
I will try to get the next chapter up soon! And if anybody has any ideas of how it should go
please tell me, I can really use them right now!
little paragraphs and not this big huge block! The sight messed that up I hate it when
story's are like that so I am going to try to fix that. Sorry people
And I would really be a lot happier if people would not write page long things on how I
should type it up better. I am not very good at stuff like that and the reason I didn't
finish my other story's is because too many people did that and I got bored with having to
read them all and deal with it. I am going to have my friend go through them from now
on and revise it and fix it because she is good at that type of thing. But if you could
please stop writing reviews like that It would really be helpful.
And people please realize that this is a FANFICTION!
INUgrrrl_24 Yeah I know it is but I wanted to get it up fast it will slow down soon.
kawaii monkey hanyou Thanks for the review and I am trying to fix the paragraph problem.
InuObsessed I think that they are the best pairing as well, and thanks for your support!
Inufan Thanks
sesshomaru-luver Thanks and I will be making more chapters but I don't know how many will be in this story
yet. And thanks for the tip! I am going to go look at your story's as well.
And too ChristyKay and Trang Nquyen thanks for trying to help me but I would rather you
don't go by it step bye step and point out all my mistakes, I am not a professional writer and
don't want to get into that type of thing all I want to do is write inuyasha and other anime
fanfiction's they don't have to be perfect its not like there for a grade or anything. And it does
not have to be in character, and I know that they are both a little out of character
I will try to get the next chapter up soon! And if anybody has any ideas of how it should go
please tell me, I can really use them right now!