Okie, dokey. Chapter four. Yayyyy. (Not much motivation, bored.) Sorry but this chapter may not be that good, my muse left me in the dark. I was alone to write this.
Review replies:
Watermelon Gal: Looky, I wrote. May not be good, but I wrote more. *sigh* I'm so pathetic.
FeatheredEdge: How can you hate Sasuke?! No offense to your opinion. He may be a cold jerk, but.... he still rocks. SasuNaru is my fave. couple so yeh, and I like InoSaku for some reason.
Other reviewers: my comp broke down a while ago so I couldn't read the reviews when I wrote this, but thanks.
Disclaimer: Yep, I don't own Naruto. Never have, never will.
Summary: On a mission Sasuke gets hurt. I mean really hurt and is in the hospital for (not a few months, changed my mind) a few weeks. So, Naruto visits him in the hospital a lot and eventually finds himself falling in love with Sasuke.
Ok, so I guess this is going a little differently then I planned, but anyhoo.
Rating: PG-13 (LIME ALERT! LIME ALERT!)
Pairings: SasuNaru (and I'm still thinking about adding in some InoSaku.)
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Chapter 4: Aishiteru
"Ummm, Naru.. I... can't expla... um.... ano.... forget it." Sasuke starts to walk away, but stopped when Naruto called out to him.
"No, really, Sasuke," Naruto was following his true emotions when he asked, "What did you REALLY want?"
Sasuke blinked a few times. He opened his mouth. Out came only one word, "You."
Naruto was taken my surprise when Sasukes' (still bandaged) hand snaked over his waist and pulled him in. Sasuke brought Naruto to his lips and kissed him so lightly. It ended too quickly for him. Narutos' eyes were wide.
//So, Sasuke likes me in the way I like him? I never would have guessed.//
A strong feeling erupted in Narutos' gut. This was all so new. It was nothing like the accidental kiss they had shared in the academy.
Sasuke looked twice as surprised. He let go off Naruto. He was so confused.
//Why did I do that?// He asked himself over and over. His wounds were strangely healing quicker. He guessed it was from the physical touch to Naruto.
*Slap* Sasuke slapped Naruto on the face. Naruto yelped and reached up to his burning cheek.
"What was that for?" He glared.
"I'm sorry." Sasuke still looked kinda frightened, but his expression changed to something closely related to lust. Naruto didn't catch it. He was getting over the shock of hearing Sasuke say 'sorry'.
"You? Sorry? For..." Naruto was cut off as Sasuke forced his mouth down upon Narutos' lips. This kiss was different than the other. It had some sort of hunger to it.
During the kiss, Sasuke was pushing Naruto back, until they hit a wall in the back of Narutos' front room. The door closed behind them.
Sasuke broke the kiss. He looked at Naruto, who was now pinned in front of him on the wall. Sasuke craned his neck a bit and latched onto Narutos' throat.
Naruto groaned. This sensational feeling was billowing through Narutos' body. His face now flushed, his breathing; quicker. He moaned. His throat was very sensitive and he knew it.
Sasuke pinned Narutos' hands above his head with one arm, and with the other, began to unzip Narutos' annoying orange coat.
"Nnnn.... Sasuke?" Naruto said while he had the chance, "Why are you doing this?"
Sasuke paused and looked into those deep pools of blue, "Because, dobe, I love you, and I have always loved you." With that, he managed to get Narutos' coat off.
Naruto struggled against Sasukes' hold on his wrists, "Sasuke, I don't want this yet. I'm still too young. (A/N: They're both about 15.) Sasuke.. ah-AHH! Sasuke!" Sasuke had bitten Narutos' neck. Blood dripped slowly down. It didn't reach the black shirt Naruto still had on because Sasuke had licked it all up.
Sasuke let go of Narutos' wrists. "This way, dobe." Naruto ignored the insult and followed Sasuke. Naruto saw that Sasuke was leading him to the bed. Naruto tried to stop himself from going in there, but Sasuke yanked Narutos' collar. He fell back onto the bed.
Looking up, he saw Sasuke on top of him. Sasuke made short work of his and Narutos' shirt. He began to lick and nip all over Narutos' torso. Naruto, not totally helpless, did nothing to stop him, except verbally.
"Ahh, Sasu... Sasuke, stop! Yamete! Ahh! Sasuke, please! I don't –ahh!– want this! Please, Sasuke." Naruto was crying again. Sasuke had reached Narutos' pant-line. He stopped and looked up to see Naruto with his head back, tears streaming down his face.
"Stop, Sasuke!" He kept whimpering.
Sasuke came back to Narutos' face. Another kiss here, a kinder one than before.
"Arigato Sasuke." Naruto smiled.
"Yes, well, I thought we are still too young, so I guess I'll have to wait." Sasuke grinned, sort of like Kakashi.
"Don't do that."
"Do what?"
"Act like Kakashi. You're scaring me. *sigh* I never knew you liked me in that way." Naruto said.
"Of course not," Sasuke said blandly, "I don't show my feelings that well. You know that."
"Yes, I know." Naruto kissed Sasuke lightly on the nose, "So, does this mean we are together or something."
"Hai." Sasuke grinned and greedily kissed Naruto again. "You're mine, koi." He squeezed Naruto tightly. Naruto squeaked, but gave in.
It was only early afternoon, but they fell asleep anyway; in each others arms.
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The next day, Sasuke returned to the hospital, only to be nagged at be many, many doctors and nurses. With him was Naruto, who was now inseparable from Sasuke.
The doctors were surprised at Sasukes' nearly healed wounds. He would leave the hospital in no time.
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TBC....
Yes, I am gonna write another chappie. Don't kill me, please. No flames, either. That was my first lime, I couldn't and wouldn't go any further. Gomen nasai! Hey, lookit! Noooo cliff-hanger. Well, kinda. Yes, there will be InoSaku next chappie. More fluff to come.
God, I'm tired. I am sooooo sorry that this chapter is nothing as good as the others.
Review, need ideas, majorly, or no new chapter, seriously.
Review replies:
Watermelon Gal: Looky, I wrote. May not be good, but I wrote more. *sigh* I'm so pathetic.
FeatheredEdge: How can you hate Sasuke?! No offense to your opinion. He may be a cold jerk, but.... he still rocks. SasuNaru is my fave. couple so yeh, and I like InoSaku for some reason.
Other reviewers: my comp broke down a while ago so I couldn't read the reviews when I wrote this, but thanks.
Disclaimer: Yep, I don't own Naruto. Never have, never will.
Summary: On a mission Sasuke gets hurt. I mean really hurt and is in the hospital for (not a few months, changed my mind) a few weeks. So, Naruto visits him in the hospital a lot and eventually finds himself falling in love with Sasuke.
Ok, so I guess this is going a little differently then I planned, but anyhoo.
Rating: PG-13 (LIME ALERT! LIME ALERT!)
Pairings: SasuNaru (and I'm still thinking about adding in some InoSaku.)
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.
.
.
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Chapter 4: Aishiteru
"Ummm, Naru.. I... can't expla... um.... ano.... forget it." Sasuke starts to walk away, but stopped when Naruto called out to him.
"No, really, Sasuke," Naruto was following his true emotions when he asked, "What did you REALLY want?"
Sasuke blinked a few times. He opened his mouth. Out came only one word, "You."
Naruto was taken my surprise when Sasukes' (still bandaged) hand snaked over his waist and pulled him in. Sasuke brought Naruto to his lips and kissed him so lightly. It ended too quickly for him. Narutos' eyes were wide.
//So, Sasuke likes me in the way I like him? I never would have guessed.//
A strong feeling erupted in Narutos' gut. This was all so new. It was nothing like the accidental kiss they had shared in the academy.
Sasuke looked twice as surprised. He let go off Naruto. He was so confused.
//Why did I do that?// He asked himself over and over. His wounds were strangely healing quicker. He guessed it was from the physical touch to Naruto.
*Slap* Sasuke slapped Naruto on the face. Naruto yelped and reached up to his burning cheek.
"What was that for?" He glared.
"I'm sorry." Sasuke still looked kinda frightened, but his expression changed to something closely related to lust. Naruto didn't catch it. He was getting over the shock of hearing Sasuke say 'sorry'.
"You? Sorry? For..." Naruto was cut off as Sasuke forced his mouth down upon Narutos' lips. This kiss was different than the other. It had some sort of hunger to it.
During the kiss, Sasuke was pushing Naruto back, until they hit a wall in the back of Narutos' front room. The door closed behind them.
Sasuke broke the kiss. He looked at Naruto, who was now pinned in front of him on the wall. Sasuke craned his neck a bit and latched onto Narutos' throat.
Naruto groaned. This sensational feeling was billowing through Narutos' body. His face now flushed, his breathing; quicker. He moaned. His throat was very sensitive and he knew it.
Sasuke pinned Narutos' hands above his head with one arm, and with the other, began to unzip Narutos' annoying orange coat.
"Nnnn.... Sasuke?" Naruto said while he had the chance, "Why are you doing this?"
Sasuke paused and looked into those deep pools of blue, "Because, dobe, I love you, and I have always loved you." With that, he managed to get Narutos' coat off.
Naruto struggled against Sasukes' hold on his wrists, "Sasuke, I don't want this yet. I'm still too young. (A/N: They're both about 15.) Sasuke.. ah-AHH! Sasuke!" Sasuke had bitten Narutos' neck. Blood dripped slowly down. It didn't reach the black shirt Naruto still had on because Sasuke had licked it all up.
Sasuke let go of Narutos' wrists. "This way, dobe." Naruto ignored the insult and followed Sasuke. Naruto saw that Sasuke was leading him to the bed. Naruto tried to stop himself from going in there, but Sasuke yanked Narutos' collar. He fell back onto the bed.
Looking up, he saw Sasuke on top of him. Sasuke made short work of his and Narutos' shirt. He began to lick and nip all over Narutos' torso. Naruto, not totally helpless, did nothing to stop him, except verbally.
"Ahh, Sasu... Sasuke, stop! Yamete! Ahh! Sasuke, please! I don't –ahh!– want this! Please, Sasuke." Naruto was crying again. Sasuke had reached Narutos' pant-line. He stopped and looked up to see Naruto with his head back, tears streaming down his face.
"Stop, Sasuke!" He kept whimpering.
Sasuke came back to Narutos' face. Another kiss here, a kinder one than before.
"Arigato Sasuke." Naruto smiled.
"Yes, well, I thought we are still too young, so I guess I'll have to wait." Sasuke grinned, sort of like Kakashi.
"Don't do that."
"Do what?"
"Act like Kakashi. You're scaring me. *sigh* I never knew you liked me in that way." Naruto said.
"Of course not," Sasuke said blandly, "I don't show my feelings that well. You know that."
"Yes, I know." Naruto kissed Sasuke lightly on the nose, "So, does this mean we are together or something."
"Hai." Sasuke grinned and greedily kissed Naruto again. "You're mine, koi." He squeezed Naruto tightly. Naruto squeaked, but gave in.
It was only early afternoon, but they fell asleep anyway; in each others arms.
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The next day, Sasuke returned to the hospital, only to be nagged at be many, many doctors and nurses. With him was Naruto, who was now inseparable from Sasuke.
The doctors were surprised at Sasukes' nearly healed wounds. He would leave the hospital in no time.
.
.
.
.
.
TBC....
Yes, I am gonna write another chappie. Don't kill me, please. No flames, either. That was my first lime, I couldn't and wouldn't go any further. Gomen nasai! Hey, lookit! Noooo cliff-hanger. Well, kinda. Yes, there will be InoSaku next chappie. More fluff to come.
God, I'm tired. I am sooooo sorry that this chapter is nothing as good as the others.
Review, need ideas, majorly, or no new chapter, seriously.