Greetings! Well here I am with another most wanted chapter(or so i think, after what i read in the reviewa. should I expect a hit-man outside my door?). This one is a lot longer that the last chappie, so I hope that appeases evryone who read the first chappie.
Now about the the whole you-not-getting-your-pic thing. I would write a little letter and add the pic, but my e-mail(i have two, one for sending pics, and one for just e-mails)thing would just not send it and give me some bullshit sbout nb pop up crap that i don't care about. So...... for everyone who asked for a pic od the creature and did leave me your e-mail, i am truly sorry. if and when i get it fixed I'll send it to you guys on the double.(I also have this really cool pic of Li when he's a wolf, and I want you guys to be able to see it!).
And I'm really excited because in this chapter, I reveal the past on the Olup card! yay! I think it's a very good explenation about my OC card thin(?).
Enough! my conversation now bores me. here's your chapter two.
"speech"
'thought'
(interjected author's notes)
Disclamer: I don't own cardcaptors or anything in this fic, exept the Olup card.
Chapter two- Tranformation
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Keroberos was flying as fast as he could go. 'I've got to hurry, the Olup card has already started to take effect.' he thought hurridly. Keroberos looked down at Li. His thoughts were correct. Li was already covered in a light grey coat of fur, that would anly thicken as time went by.His humain canines had grown in lengh, as his ears started to point. Li's hands now started to resemble that of an animals rather than a human's.
The panick was clearly evident in Keroberos' eyes. If he did not hurry and find a place secure enough for Li, Keroberos wouldn't like what he would be forced to do.
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"Where did you get that 'card'?"Yue saked. Sakura didn't like the way he had said 'card'. There was distain in his voice, and disgust and........fear? Could Sakura be right? Was Yue afraid of the card?
"I found it about a week ago." Skaura lied. She looked at down at the Olup card. In truth, someone had given it to her. She didn't know who. A dark stranger, Sakura hadn'e seen his face. But whatever this card was, Sakura was regretting ever accepting it.
"Where!!!" Mélin yelled out suddenly. Sakura was really starting to wory now.
"In the basement." Sakura lied again. Why did she keep lying like this? Sakura had to ask. That question that was burning inside her, fighting to be let out.........
"What did I do to Li?" Sakura asked. "What curse did I release?"
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Keroberos droped another three feet. It was getting harder and harder to carry Li. He had already doubled in size. He was almost the size of Keroberos himself now. It was starting to look hopeless. 'Yes! There's a safe enouigh place for him.'Just then, flew into the zoo. Surely one of the empty cells would hold him. Keroberos flew down quickly as Li grunted in pain once again.'This must hurt him so much.' Keroberos thought with a welt of pity.
He landed quickly. As soon as his lion paws touched the ground,he emediatly threw Li into an empty cell.He didn't want to hurt him, but time was of the esence!
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"In ancient times, when Clow Reed(sorry if that isn't spelled right)was still alive, there were powerful force as you well know." Yue's wise voice spoke.As he continued to xpain what was happenning.
"Yes. You told me that!" Sakura said anxiously.
"You also know that Clow Reed captured these forces and turned them into cards. Well, he didn't just nerely turned them into cards, he gave them each there own personality, their own life." Yue expained hurridly. they didn't have time for this. They had to make sure Li was in a secure area, thath he hadn't already killed (cover you ears kidies*_*) Keroberos, and they still had to break the curse!
"You mean they were alive?" Madison asked in wonder. Curiousity and amazement clearly evident in her soft vouce.
"Yes, in a way.They could feel emotions and pain. They could think for themselves. But they could onle be summoned by Clow Reed, and only he could communicate with them." Yue was getting tired of this. 'Where is Keroberos?' he rushly thought.
"There was one card, the 'Olup' card, that was different." Sakura and Madison couldn't help but feel the hatred, fear and sadness in Yue's voice when he spoke of the card's name.
"This card loved to cause destruction. It didn't care or think about the consequences theat came after. Mayham was it's passion. It destroyed contless cities, tortured poeples and their loved ones, and annihilated most of the original cards. And Clow Reed did nothing.
He was a fool for ever thinking that this card could ever hold any good in it's wretched heart.
But that changed one day, Clow Reed's lover had just given birth to their first child. A beautiful baby girl. Clow Reed and his wife loved her with all their hearts. We all did."
"But the Olup card had become madly in love with Clow Reed, and therefore, had become insanely jealous. It murdered Clow Reed's wife and their baby, and tried to seduce him." Tue spoke with so much hatred in his voice, that it frighten Sakura and Madison.
Sakura horrified! How could something so pure and elegant as clow magick, do such a dark and twisted thing?
"Please continu." Sakura asked. Craving for more information on what evil she had unleashed.
"Of course Clow Reed refused. After what the Olup card did, he saw what it truly was. That card was evil, in it's simplest form. Something that could never be contained or controled. It was darkness, pure and simple."
"Srouded in a blanket of mustery and malice, contorted into a hellish beast it now is. With inky black puss cecreting from it's disgusting form. It's heart and soul had become the colour of ebony. Evil." Yue's nose wrinkled in disgust at even having to picture such a grotesque creature.
Sakura could only look at him in complete shock. This was horrible! How could anything be so disgustingly evil?
"When the Olup card discovered that Clow Reed loathed it, She placed a curse on him, one that would never truly go away. Clow Reed and anuone who would share his blood, would turn into a vicous hell-hound if that card was ever resurected." Yue said, somewhat relieved. He had been waiting years to say that. Whether he know it or not.
"Oh my goodness! That's horrible." Madison gasped. "But wait a minute. How come Mélin is fine? She's Li's cousin after all?"Madison interogated. That was right. Sakura looked over at Mélin. Just to make sure she hadn't become some sort of monster.
Mélin was slumped on the on the dark grass. Shacking with her mornful sobs.
"Mélin is fine because the curse only effects those who posses clow magick." Yue stated simply. "Well what are we going to do?" Sakura asked. Afraid of what Yue was bound to answer.
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Keroberos could only wacth as Li had to go through such a horrible thing. Currently, Li was sitting in a corner of the animal cage, curled up into a ball. He was rocking back and forth, mumbling to himself. Keroberos notice that Li was shivering as though he was cold, but sweat was clearly seen dripping from his brow.It looked as though he had a fever.
"Li! don't worry! We'll break the curse!" Keroberos yelled, hoping to give Li something else to concentrate on other than the pain.
Li was staring into space, his eyes dilated as he realised that Keroberos was still there. He couldn't suppress the fear that surged through his body.
"Keroberos? what are you doing here?" he snapped. "Get away! Go bach to Sakura and the others!". But Keroberos was hesitant to leave the boy on his own. "NOW!!" Li screamed. his voice distorted and frightening. Keroberos was off in a flash.
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"There are only two ways to stop this. Either wait till sunrise, when Li will be back to normal, but if we have to, we'll forced to kill him." Yue let what he said sink in. Knowing that Sakura and Madison already knew his response.
"Well, Keroberos already took Li to a secure place, so we can just wait and figure this out in the morning." Madison said clearly. Using her logic to solve this problem.
No sooner had she said that, Keroberos was seen fluing down towards them. He landed gracefully on his sturdy paws.
"Is Li allright?!" Mélin's voice was the fist one to be heard.
"He's over at the zoo. I put him in an empty animal's cell. It should be enough to hold him." Keroberos said assuredly.
But as if he were jinxed, as soon as those words left his lion's mouth, a feral cry was heard floating over the ebony trees. Finalizing their worst fears of the moment......
~(hhmmmmm. should I end it here? and make you sink in the suspence?.......No. i'm too nice for that.)~
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"Oh God!" Li cried in agony. He never felt anything so painful in his entier life. The pain was escrutiating! He could feel evrey new hair folical piercing through his once smooth skin.
Every bone in his body twisting and bending, becoming contorted to fit it's new structer. He could actually audiby hear his bones bending and poping to succumb to a more feral form.
Li cried out loudly as his body lurched forward. A sounding ach in Li's jaw made him cry in pain. Li could feel his nose and mouth grow together to form a muzzle, while his ears became pointed and lenghtened in size. His shoulder blades seemed to rise from his back to force a new position of walking.
His arms also rearranged themselves as did his legs to be more suitable for a four legged animal, and his chest became more barrel shaped to support the change.
There was a ripping sound as Li's magickal robes refused to take on the starin of new muscle. A tail emergedfrom his spine and grew bushier and bushier as it also grew in lengh. Fur, shaded in a light grey, had covered his body, Hair on his face sprouted suddenly. Li could feel it prickeling his skin.
Li let out another crie. This time more that of a wolf than a human being.
"Hey! what's going on?!" a guard called out. Running over to see what was happenning. He was making one of his rounds, when he heard a animalistic cry. He figured that one of the animals had gotten sick or hurt.
But what he saw, he would have never had been ready for. There was some kind of inhuman monter in one of the cells. He could only watch it in the corner of the cage.
Li lowered his head. In shame and pain at what he had become.
Li let out another howl. This time, the guard could see the many rows of jagged teeth gleaming in the moonlight.
Li finaly raised his head. To the guard, he looked like a savage beast, and he now thought like one as well. If anyone would look into his eyes, they would only see a wild wolf with a lust to kill and bath in it's prey's blood..............
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WOW! That turned out a bit different then originaly planed, but, meh. It still worked out.
So! What did you guys think? It was good, wasn't it! There are a few people that I'd like to thank though.
SweetCherryBlossom- aw. thanks for the review. and don't worry, I'll try to be nicer to myself^_^.
windy*wings- Wow! that was a great review! i loved it. if anything, it's a great confidence booster to anyone. plz keep on reviewing. i liked it so much. oh! by the way, was the updatetion quick enugh for ya?
UnDiNe-I know! Li is the best character on the show. and 'bout the monster oic, i'll keep trying.
ARCHANGEMON- i loved your review. i especially liked the critisme you gave me. now i know what to to for the rst of the chappies.
tzuky- I knoew just enough spanich (that's whayou wrote in right?) to understand your review. Thanx!
ok! now that that's done. i really hope that everyone likes this fic. it's my 'preciouse'(did anyone see that lord of the rings two? ha ha!s).
I'm hoping to get another chapter up sometime between May 5th and May 10th(I hope I can cut it). So fear not my loyal fans(yeah, right)! I will update! I have nothing else to do!!!!!
well anyways, b seeing yas!
P.S. don't forget to review! plz?
Now about the the whole you-not-getting-your-pic thing. I would write a little letter and add the pic, but my e-mail(i have two, one for sending pics, and one for just e-mails)thing would just not send it and give me some bullshit sbout nb pop up crap that i don't care about. So...... for everyone who asked for a pic od the creature and did leave me your e-mail, i am truly sorry. if and when i get it fixed I'll send it to you guys on the double.(I also have this really cool pic of Li when he's a wolf, and I want you guys to be able to see it!).
And I'm really excited because in this chapter, I reveal the past on the Olup card! yay! I think it's a very good explenation about my OC card thin(?).
Enough! my conversation now bores me. here's your chapter two.
"speech"
'thought'
(interjected author's notes)
Disclamer: I don't own cardcaptors or anything in this fic, exept the Olup card.
Chapter two- Tranformation
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Keroberos was flying as fast as he could go. 'I've got to hurry, the Olup card has already started to take effect.' he thought hurridly. Keroberos looked down at Li. His thoughts were correct. Li was already covered in a light grey coat of fur, that would anly thicken as time went by.His humain canines had grown in lengh, as his ears started to point. Li's hands now started to resemble that of an animals rather than a human's.
The panick was clearly evident in Keroberos' eyes. If he did not hurry and find a place secure enough for Li, Keroberos wouldn't like what he would be forced to do.
--------------------------------------(back at Penguin Park)------------------------------------
"Where did you get that 'card'?"Yue saked. Sakura didn't like the way he had said 'card'. There was distain in his voice, and disgust and........fear? Could Sakura be right? Was Yue afraid of the card?
"I found it about a week ago." Skaura lied. She looked at down at the Olup card. In truth, someone had given it to her. She didn't know who. A dark stranger, Sakura hadn'e seen his face. But whatever this card was, Sakura was regretting ever accepting it.
"Where!!!" Mélin yelled out suddenly. Sakura was really starting to wory now.
"In the basement." Sakura lied again. Why did she keep lying like this? Sakura had to ask. That question that was burning inside her, fighting to be let out.........
"What did I do to Li?" Sakura asked. "What curse did I release?"
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Keroberos droped another three feet. It was getting harder and harder to carry Li. He had already doubled in size. He was almost the size of Keroberos himself now. It was starting to look hopeless. 'Yes! There's a safe enouigh place for him.'Just then, flew into the zoo. Surely one of the empty cells would hold him. Keroberos flew down quickly as Li grunted in pain once again.'This must hurt him so much.' Keroberos thought with a welt of pity.
He landed quickly. As soon as his lion paws touched the ground,he emediatly threw Li into an empty cell.He didn't want to hurt him, but time was of the esence!
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"In ancient times, when Clow Reed(sorry if that isn't spelled right)was still alive, there were powerful force as you well know." Yue's wise voice spoke.As he continued to xpain what was happenning.
"Yes. You told me that!" Sakura said anxiously.
"You also know that Clow Reed captured these forces and turned them into cards. Well, he didn't just nerely turned them into cards, he gave them each there own personality, their own life." Yue expained hurridly. they didn't have time for this. They had to make sure Li was in a secure area, thath he hadn't already killed (cover you ears kidies*_*) Keroberos, and they still had to break the curse!
"You mean they were alive?" Madison asked in wonder. Curiousity and amazement clearly evident in her soft vouce.
"Yes, in a way.They could feel emotions and pain. They could think for themselves. But they could onle be summoned by Clow Reed, and only he could communicate with them." Yue was getting tired of this. 'Where is Keroberos?' he rushly thought.
"There was one card, the 'Olup' card, that was different." Sakura and Madison couldn't help but feel the hatred, fear and sadness in Yue's voice when he spoke of the card's name.
"This card loved to cause destruction. It didn't care or think about the consequences theat came after. Mayham was it's passion. It destroyed contless cities, tortured poeples and their loved ones, and annihilated most of the original cards. And Clow Reed did nothing.
He was a fool for ever thinking that this card could ever hold any good in it's wretched heart.
But that changed one day, Clow Reed's lover had just given birth to their first child. A beautiful baby girl. Clow Reed and his wife loved her with all their hearts. We all did."
"But the Olup card had become madly in love with Clow Reed, and therefore, had become insanely jealous. It murdered Clow Reed's wife and their baby, and tried to seduce him." Tue spoke with so much hatred in his voice, that it frighten Sakura and Madison.
Sakura horrified! How could something so pure and elegant as clow magick, do such a dark and twisted thing?
"Please continu." Sakura asked. Craving for more information on what evil she had unleashed.
"Of course Clow Reed refused. After what the Olup card did, he saw what it truly was. That card was evil, in it's simplest form. Something that could never be contained or controled. It was darkness, pure and simple."
"Srouded in a blanket of mustery and malice, contorted into a hellish beast it now is. With inky black puss cecreting from it's disgusting form. It's heart and soul had become the colour of ebony. Evil." Yue's nose wrinkled in disgust at even having to picture such a grotesque creature.
Sakura could only look at him in complete shock. This was horrible! How could anything be so disgustingly evil?
"When the Olup card discovered that Clow Reed loathed it, She placed a curse on him, one that would never truly go away. Clow Reed and anuone who would share his blood, would turn into a vicous hell-hound if that card was ever resurected." Yue said, somewhat relieved. He had been waiting years to say that. Whether he know it or not.
"Oh my goodness! That's horrible." Madison gasped. "But wait a minute. How come Mélin is fine? She's Li's cousin after all?"Madison interogated. That was right. Sakura looked over at Mélin. Just to make sure she hadn't become some sort of monster.
Mélin was slumped on the on the dark grass. Shacking with her mornful sobs.
"Mélin is fine because the curse only effects those who posses clow magick." Yue stated simply. "Well what are we going to do?" Sakura asked. Afraid of what Yue was bound to answer.
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Keroberos could only wacth as Li had to go through such a horrible thing. Currently, Li was sitting in a corner of the animal cage, curled up into a ball. He was rocking back and forth, mumbling to himself. Keroberos notice that Li was shivering as though he was cold, but sweat was clearly seen dripping from his brow.It looked as though he had a fever.
"Li! don't worry! We'll break the curse!" Keroberos yelled, hoping to give Li something else to concentrate on other than the pain.
Li was staring into space, his eyes dilated as he realised that Keroberos was still there. He couldn't suppress the fear that surged through his body.
"Keroberos? what are you doing here?" he snapped. "Get away! Go bach to Sakura and the others!". But Keroberos was hesitant to leave the boy on his own. "NOW!!" Li screamed. his voice distorted and frightening. Keroberos was off in a flash.
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"There are only two ways to stop this. Either wait till sunrise, when Li will be back to normal, but if we have to, we'll forced to kill him." Yue let what he said sink in. Knowing that Sakura and Madison already knew his response.
"Well, Keroberos already took Li to a secure place, so we can just wait and figure this out in the morning." Madison said clearly. Using her logic to solve this problem.
No sooner had she said that, Keroberos was seen fluing down towards them. He landed gracefully on his sturdy paws.
"Is Li allright?!" Mélin's voice was the fist one to be heard.
"He's over at the zoo. I put him in an empty animal's cell. It should be enough to hold him." Keroberos said assuredly.
But as if he were jinxed, as soon as those words left his lion's mouth, a feral cry was heard floating over the ebony trees. Finalizing their worst fears of the moment......
~(hhmmmmm. should I end it here? and make you sink in the suspence?.......No. i'm too nice for that.)~
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"Oh God!" Li cried in agony. He never felt anything so painful in his entier life. The pain was escrutiating! He could feel evrey new hair folical piercing through his once smooth skin.
Every bone in his body twisting and bending, becoming contorted to fit it's new structer. He could actually audiby hear his bones bending and poping to succumb to a more feral form.
Li cried out loudly as his body lurched forward. A sounding ach in Li's jaw made him cry in pain. Li could feel his nose and mouth grow together to form a muzzle, while his ears became pointed and lenghtened in size. His shoulder blades seemed to rise from his back to force a new position of walking.
His arms also rearranged themselves as did his legs to be more suitable for a four legged animal, and his chest became more barrel shaped to support the change.
There was a ripping sound as Li's magickal robes refused to take on the starin of new muscle. A tail emergedfrom his spine and grew bushier and bushier as it also grew in lengh. Fur, shaded in a light grey, had covered his body, Hair on his face sprouted suddenly. Li could feel it prickeling his skin.
Li let out another crie. This time more that of a wolf than a human being.
"Hey! what's going on?!" a guard called out. Running over to see what was happenning. He was making one of his rounds, when he heard a animalistic cry. He figured that one of the animals had gotten sick or hurt.
But what he saw, he would have never had been ready for. There was some kind of inhuman monter in one of the cells. He could only watch it in the corner of the cage.
Li lowered his head. In shame and pain at what he had become.
Li let out another howl. This time, the guard could see the many rows of jagged teeth gleaming in the moonlight.
Li finaly raised his head. To the guard, he looked like a savage beast, and he now thought like one as well. If anyone would look into his eyes, they would only see a wild wolf with a lust to kill and bath in it's prey's blood..............
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WOW! That turned out a bit different then originaly planed, but, meh. It still worked out.
So! What did you guys think? It was good, wasn't it! There are a few people that I'd like to thank though.
SweetCherryBlossom- aw. thanks for the review. and don't worry, I'll try to be nicer to myself^_^.
windy*wings- Wow! that was a great review! i loved it. if anything, it's a great confidence booster to anyone. plz keep on reviewing. i liked it so much. oh! by the way, was the updatetion quick enugh for ya?
UnDiNe-I know! Li is the best character on the show. and 'bout the monster oic, i'll keep trying.
ARCHANGEMON- i loved your review. i especially liked the critisme you gave me. now i know what to to for the rst of the chappies.
tzuky- I knoew just enough spanich (that's whayou wrote in right?) to understand your review. Thanx!
ok! now that that's done. i really hope that everyone likes this fic. it's my 'preciouse'(did anyone see that lord of the rings two? ha ha!s).
I'm hoping to get another chapter up sometime between May 5th and May 10th(I hope I can cut it). So fear not my loyal fans(yeah, right)! I will update! I have nothing else to do!!!!!
well anyways, b seeing yas!
P.S. don't forget to review! plz?