*Hi, this is normally a one-shot but I wrote it so they're can be written more
(and possibly will, I have a few ideas in my mind). It's based on a work I had
to write for school about fear. (I just made everything up and for now, I feel
extremely stupid about the work. So I changed it a little bit and put it up.
So it's important for me that you guy's review (and read afcourse)
The storie is about a nightmare that Hildi had after something happened to Duo.
I even put Kenshin himura (rurouni kenshin for those who don't kow) in it.
It's not a crossover (it's all about Hildi and … ) Well for ferther questions
and comments contact me, pushpitake.*
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I woke up this morning, for the first time I slept good. Well kind of.
But let me first tell you about my dream;
I was standing in the airport where Duo and me met for the first time.
I was looking at Heero who was pointing a gun at Duo.
I was terrified that Heero would pull over the trigger and kill Duo.
I was trembling and it felt like eternity when suddenly Heero said 'Omae o Korusu, baka' and shoot Duo.
I saw Duo falling too the ground, bleeding.
I ran too Duo, hoping he would not be dead but I couldn't reach him.
Suddenly I was standing in front of a forest. I saw a road through the forest and
I decided to run upon that road, hoping that I would find Duo on time.
But at the end of the road I only saw a red-haired man who was looking at me.
He didn't help me although I begged him to help.
He only said to me: 'whatever you lose, you'll find again.'
I didn't know what he meant with that and threw a knife at man.
I began to yell at him that he didn't know how it felt to lose someone you truly love,
and stuff like that. How could he posibly know how I felt after...
He was really angry because I did that and he lost his temper.
He looked at me with his amber eyes and said to me: 'If you truly wishes to be with the one you love.
I'll get you there but know that there's no way out'.
I answered hoping I would finally find him back: 'yes, bring me too him, I'll be grateful.'
Before I knew I felt a cold blade cutting through my flesh.
I closed my eyes hoping the pain would stop soon.
When I opened my eyes I saw Duo standing in front of me, offering me his hand.
I took his hand and he pulled me in a warm embrace.
He said to me: 'welcome in the Hell, my love. Welcome home.'
I looked in his cobalt-blue eyes and whispered: 'shinigami'.
Our lips touched and for the first time since 'the accident' I felt again close to him.
Then I woke up.
That was my dream. What could it possibly mean? I know Duo isn't here but…
I felt really close to him in that dream although he's…
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*Okay, what do you think? Do you want to read more?
Oh, I have the feeling that's something wrong with my writing style although
I can't figure out what. Could anyone help me?*
(and possibly will, I have a few ideas in my mind). It's based on a work I had
to write for school about fear. (I just made everything up and for now, I feel
extremely stupid about the work. So I changed it a little bit and put it up.
So it's important for me that you guy's review (and read afcourse)
The storie is about a nightmare that Hildi had after something happened to Duo.
I even put Kenshin himura (rurouni kenshin for those who don't kow) in it.
It's not a crossover (it's all about Hildi and … ) Well for ferther questions
and comments contact me, pushpitake.*
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I woke up this morning, for the first time I slept good. Well kind of.
But let me first tell you about my dream;
I was standing in the airport where Duo and me met for the first time.
I was looking at Heero who was pointing a gun at Duo.
I was terrified that Heero would pull over the trigger and kill Duo.
I was trembling and it felt like eternity when suddenly Heero said 'Omae o Korusu, baka' and shoot Duo.
I saw Duo falling too the ground, bleeding.
I ran too Duo, hoping he would not be dead but I couldn't reach him.
Suddenly I was standing in front of a forest. I saw a road through the forest and
I decided to run upon that road, hoping that I would find Duo on time.
But at the end of the road I only saw a red-haired man who was looking at me.
He didn't help me although I begged him to help.
He only said to me: 'whatever you lose, you'll find again.'
I didn't know what he meant with that and threw a knife at man.
I began to yell at him that he didn't know how it felt to lose someone you truly love,
and stuff like that. How could he posibly know how I felt after...
He was really angry because I did that and he lost his temper.
He looked at me with his amber eyes and said to me: 'If you truly wishes to be with the one you love.
I'll get you there but know that there's no way out'.
I answered hoping I would finally find him back: 'yes, bring me too him, I'll be grateful.'
Before I knew I felt a cold blade cutting through my flesh.
I closed my eyes hoping the pain would stop soon.
When I opened my eyes I saw Duo standing in front of me, offering me his hand.
I took his hand and he pulled me in a warm embrace.
He said to me: 'welcome in the Hell, my love. Welcome home.'
I looked in his cobalt-blue eyes and whispered: 'shinigami'.
Our lips touched and for the first time since 'the accident' I felt again close to him.
Then I woke up.
That was my dream. What could it possibly mean? I know Duo isn't here but…
I felt really close to him in that dream although he's…
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*Okay, what do you think? Do you want to read more?
Oh, I have the feeling that's something wrong with my writing style although
I can't figure out what. Could anyone help me?*
