Jack's Love: I'M SORRY FOR THE DELAY!!! Okay, I found some pretty stupid
mistakes in my third chapter. I guess I should've sent it to my editor,
Sagie. Sorry Sagie. Anyway, some of you think this story is going to become
cute and interesting. Well, you're all right! At least that's the words I
would use. Oh, and if the story is set up funny, I'm sorry but my computer
is so up-to-date in technology that it can't even do the simplest things.
*clears throat* I'm sure you all want to move on...
Jack Sparrow: Her finger's doing fine thanks to my expert bandaging, mates.
Jack's Love: Yes, that is correct, but still hurts like hell.
Sagie(editor): Boo freakin' hoo!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jack's Love: Moving on with a throbbing thumb......
Chapter 4: ....Just Friends.... **************************************************************************
Now regreting forgiving the handsome pirate captain, Jayne was catching Jack gazing at her every once in a while. As she sat there doing her math homework, Jack suddenly asked,"How old are ya' Jayne?"
Jayne looked up from her text book and rose an eyebrow,"I'm 17 years- old, Jack. Why are you asking?"
Jack took his gaze off her blue eyes and looked around the room innocently,"Oh, just wonderin' love, but if ya' really would like to know my opinion...ya' seem a lot older than ya' really are." He smiled sweetly to gesture his kind comment. He sat in a computer chair which he'd spin around in every once in long while.
Jayne smiled back returning the gesture,"Thank you, Jack," she paused. "How old are captain?" She sat up cross-legged.
"Well, love, I decided long ago that I'd keep my age a secret. If ya' must know though, I'm older than you," Jack responded.
Jayne starting laughing at his obvious statement. They paused and stared in each others eyes for a moment until they were both startled by and sudden voice. "Jayne, honey, you home yet, it's dinner time?" they heard footsteps down the hall.
"Jack get in my closet, now!" Jayne whispered pointing toward her closet. Jack jumped off the chair and ran towards the closet. He opened it and a pile of clothes poured out.
"How?" Jack whispered pointing at the pile of dirty clothes, partly mocking her. The footsteps were getting closer to Jayne's door.
"Just get out of sight, hurry!" she whispered harshly. She looked around the room for a place to hide Jack.
Jack noticed some space under the teenager's bed. He looked at Jayne and whispered,"You're bed." He dived under from the closet. As soon as the door opened Jack had successfully hid under the bed. Jayne ran in front of the bed just in case her father saw him squirming around.
Jayne's father stood at the doorway. "Hey, hon', dinner's ready. Steak and potatoes. Your favorite," her dad waited for a reply.
She smiled and replied,"I'll be down in a minute. I'm gonna get my pajamas on okay?" She stood their, her muscles tense.
"Okay, hurry up though or your plate'll get cold," he stated and he left closing the door behind him. Jayne sighed heavily, realived that the pirate captain wasn't found. She knelt down by her bed to help Jack. He started to peak out and she grabbed both his hands.
After Jack was out, he stood up and stretched. He put his hand on Jayne's shoulder,"Thank ya' for takin' care of me, love. Not many would put up with ol' Jack."
She laughed and put her hand on his,"It's the least I could do, Jack." She walked over to her dressers and rummaged through until she found pajamas she wanted. It was a long gown, past her ankles, it was spagghetti stapped but only was designed to hang on her right shoulder.(and...no she's not trying to seduce Jack). Jayne turned around to Jack. "Could you turn around so I can change, please?" she asked blushing and not looking in his eyes.
Dazed that she wouldn't be paranoid to undress in front of him, Jack responded,"Oh...of course, love." He turned around, his heart thumping and debating whether or not to look at her while she's in the process.
"Thank you," she replied turning around. Her heart starting beating extremely fast due to this embarrassing situation.
Jack decided to take a chance and turn his head far enough to see her out of the corner of his eye. He saw her bare back and saw her slip on her gown. She started to turn around and he quickly swurved his head back. Phew, he thought, almost sweating.
Jayne came up behind him,"It's okay, you can look." She walked over to her mirror and grabbed her brush and started combing away tangles.
"Jayne...that gown is beautiful," Jack said trying to impress the young maiden. (I like that word!)
Jayne smiled and blush. Her heart sped up. "After I'm done with dinner I'll bring up some food, okay Jack?" she asked.
"Okay," Jack responded, bowing in respect.
Jayne set down her brush and headed downstairs for dinner. Jack watched her leave, astonished that a women could look that beautiful in a simple black gown. Then he realized what he was thinking....
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Jack Sparrow: Well, I liked it, love. Jack's Love: Thank you, Jack and you'll find out later what he was thinking....I like doing cliff hangers. Please R&R and like I always says.....DON'T FLAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sagie: I thought it was a good chapter too but tell them what your going to do! Tell 'em, tell 'em!!
Jack's Love: Okay, okay. I might do a fanfiction on the television show Angel. It's my favorite show in the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tell me if I should or not and if I do I won't abandon this story so don't worry. R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jack Sparrow: Her finger's doing fine thanks to my expert bandaging, mates.
Jack's Love: Yes, that is correct, but still hurts like hell.
Sagie(editor): Boo freakin' hoo!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jack's Love: Moving on with a throbbing thumb......
Chapter 4: ....Just Friends.... **************************************************************************
Now regreting forgiving the handsome pirate captain, Jayne was catching Jack gazing at her every once in a while. As she sat there doing her math homework, Jack suddenly asked,"How old are ya' Jayne?"
Jayne looked up from her text book and rose an eyebrow,"I'm 17 years- old, Jack. Why are you asking?"
Jack took his gaze off her blue eyes and looked around the room innocently,"Oh, just wonderin' love, but if ya' really would like to know my opinion...ya' seem a lot older than ya' really are." He smiled sweetly to gesture his kind comment. He sat in a computer chair which he'd spin around in every once in long while.
Jayne smiled back returning the gesture,"Thank you, Jack," she paused. "How old are captain?" She sat up cross-legged.
"Well, love, I decided long ago that I'd keep my age a secret. If ya' must know though, I'm older than you," Jack responded.
Jayne starting laughing at his obvious statement. They paused and stared in each others eyes for a moment until they were both startled by and sudden voice. "Jayne, honey, you home yet, it's dinner time?" they heard footsteps down the hall.
"Jack get in my closet, now!" Jayne whispered pointing toward her closet. Jack jumped off the chair and ran towards the closet. He opened it and a pile of clothes poured out.
"How?" Jack whispered pointing at the pile of dirty clothes, partly mocking her. The footsteps were getting closer to Jayne's door.
"Just get out of sight, hurry!" she whispered harshly. She looked around the room for a place to hide Jack.
Jack noticed some space under the teenager's bed. He looked at Jayne and whispered,"You're bed." He dived under from the closet. As soon as the door opened Jack had successfully hid under the bed. Jayne ran in front of the bed just in case her father saw him squirming around.
Jayne's father stood at the doorway. "Hey, hon', dinner's ready. Steak and potatoes. Your favorite," her dad waited for a reply.
She smiled and replied,"I'll be down in a minute. I'm gonna get my pajamas on okay?" She stood their, her muscles tense.
"Okay, hurry up though or your plate'll get cold," he stated and he left closing the door behind him. Jayne sighed heavily, realived that the pirate captain wasn't found. She knelt down by her bed to help Jack. He started to peak out and she grabbed both his hands.
After Jack was out, he stood up and stretched. He put his hand on Jayne's shoulder,"Thank ya' for takin' care of me, love. Not many would put up with ol' Jack."
She laughed and put her hand on his,"It's the least I could do, Jack." She walked over to her dressers and rummaged through until she found pajamas she wanted. It was a long gown, past her ankles, it was spagghetti stapped but only was designed to hang on her right shoulder.(and...no she's not trying to seduce Jack). Jayne turned around to Jack. "Could you turn around so I can change, please?" she asked blushing and not looking in his eyes.
Dazed that she wouldn't be paranoid to undress in front of him, Jack responded,"Oh...of course, love." He turned around, his heart thumping and debating whether or not to look at her while she's in the process.
"Thank you," she replied turning around. Her heart starting beating extremely fast due to this embarrassing situation.
Jack decided to take a chance and turn his head far enough to see her out of the corner of his eye. He saw her bare back and saw her slip on her gown. She started to turn around and he quickly swurved his head back. Phew, he thought, almost sweating.
Jayne came up behind him,"It's okay, you can look." She walked over to her mirror and grabbed her brush and started combing away tangles.
"Jayne...that gown is beautiful," Jack said trying to impress the young maiden. (I like that word!)
Jayne smiled and blush. Her heart sped up. "After I'm done with dinner I'll bring up some food, okay Jack?" she asked.
"Okay," Jack responded, bowing in respect.
Jayne set down her brush and headed downstairs for dinner. Jack watched her leave, astonished that a women could look that beautiful in a simple black gown. Then he realized what he was thinking....
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Jack Sparrow: Well, I liked it, love. Jack's Love: Thank you, Jack and you'll find out later what he was thinking....I like doing cliff hangers. Please R&R and like I always says.....DON'T FLAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sagie: I thought it was a good chapter too but tell them what your going to do! Tell 'em, tell 'em!!
Jack's Love: Okay, okay. I might do a fanfiction on the television show Angel. It's my favorite show in the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tell me if I should or not and if I do I won't abandon this story so don't worry. R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!