Jack's Love: Thank you all for reviewing my chapter!!! I knew a lot of you
were waiting for that moment. I have some comments and suggestions to some
people.
Wolf Gothicka: You should read some of Inutori's stories. She writes Inu Yasha...among other things.
Krillball6: You're a sweetie for defending me!
Pippin: You should post some stories. You sound like you'd be a funny writer.
Pirates: You are VERY IMPATIENT!!!!!!!! I mean that in a loving way though because i love people who appreciate my work. ^_^
Dimonah Tralon: Where'd you get your pen name? (I'm not being a nob, it's a serious question :) ) Anyway, that about does it. When I suggest another author, that doesn't mean you can abandon me. *sobs* That's a request not a command. *sobs*
Jack Sparrow: If ya' liked the last chapter, you'll have to pay attention to the detail in this chapter to their reaction. It's quite interesting, mate. (Sounded like Johnny Depp there for a minute).
Sagie: She was helpless and couldn't figure out how to upload her fifth chapter because she forgot for some reason!! *points at Jack's Love*
Jack's Love: *Rolls her eyes and holds up three fingers* Read between the lines, SAGGIE!!!!!!
Chapter 6: The Heart of a Pirate
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After the unforgettable kiss, Jayne helped Jack up off the frosted ground and into the house. Luckily, her father had gone to bed and they were able to freely walk to the room. When they entered, Jayne laid Jack down on her bed softly. Still holding her close, Jack stared in Jayne's enchanting eyes. Jayne stared back with her heart thumping faster than she thought possible.
"When and if I actually make it back to the Black Pearl," Jack paused. "Would ya' like to come and visit?" Jack felt incredibly stupid considering it was just one kiss and she was just along for the passionate ride.
Surprisingly, Jayne smiled and responded,"Maybe, Jack. It might be fun." Jack released her from his grip and she stood up. She stretched and announced,"I'll sleep on the floor. You might be sore in the morning." Jayne walked over to her closet and hung both coats up and grabbed a sleeping bag. She walked to the middle of the room and laid the bag out. She walked back over to Jack and checked on him again.
"Are you sure nothing is broken, Jack?" Jayne asked putting her hand on his muscular chest.
"I'm fine, love. Are you sure you don't want the bed because I've slept on hard ground more times than you have?" Jack asked kindly. He took her hand and held while he waited for a reply.
"I'm sure, Jack. Are you hungry still because I am?" Jayne asked looking at Jack then the door.
Jack smiled. "Hungry?" he pulled Jayne in close for a savage kiss. "Hungry for you love." He started kissing her. At first, Jayne didn't care, that is until Jack yanked her on the bed and rolled on top of her.
"Jack! Get off of me!" Jayne yelled. Actually, she was laughing. Confused, Jack rose his eyebrows.
"Are you okay, love? Or shall I continue?" Jack asked now smiling and moving in closer.
"No! I just was expecting a kiss, not a busy night!" Jayne yelled while she held Jack back from her lips. She was still partly laughing.
"Why are ya' laughin', Jayne?" Jack asked feeling his annoyance brewing.
"I was startled, I laugh when I'm scared," Jayne explained plainly, not laughing anymore. "But I did enjoy the kiss, though," she added. She got out from under Jack and headed towards the sleeping bag.
Before she layed down, she turned off her lamp and said with a soft voice,"Good night, Jack."
Jack smirked and closed his eyes. "G'night, love."
The next morning, Jack woke up first and rolled over to look at Jayne and she was rolled up in a ball and shivering. Jack noticed she had kicked all the blankets off herself. He climbed out of the bed and picked her up and laid her in the bed. Then Jack crawled in with her to warm her up even more. He pulled the comforter up and put his arm around Jayne's thin body.
About an hour later, Jayne woke up and Jack had fallen asleep with his arm still secure around her waist. Jayne didn't mind though. She rolled over and faced him. Smiling, she rubbed his soft face. Jack woke up and blinked his eyes. As soon as he saw Jayne's beautiful face he smiled.
"Thank you for keeping me warm," Jayne whispered and smiled.
"You're welome me lady," Jack responded.
Jayne got out of her bed and headed towards hers dressers to pick out her outfit for the day. She rummaged around her drawers and picked out a pair of black leather pants and a black T-shirt with a British flag on the front. She turned around to Jack who was now out of bed stretching his long body.
"I'll need you to turn around again," Jayne said blushing, once again.
Jack bowed slighting and turned around. Jayne started changing. Jack, once again, decided to be a dill hole and peek. He turned around slowly; she was putting on her shirt. Jack sighed silently. I never catch her early enough, he thought.
Jayne started to turn around so Jack swurved around even quicker. She came up behind Jack and put her hand on his shoulder to turn him around. When he faced Jayne, she gave him a hat and her brown leather jacket.
"I need to run some arronds today while my dad is working and I need you to come with. So, put these on and you'll stay on a low profile." Jayne explained looking in his charming, dark brown eyes.
"Okay," he responded. When Jayne turned around to head towards the door, Jack grabbed her wrist softly and turned her towards him once again. "If I didn't do what I did last night, ya' know with the surprisin' kiss, would you have slept on the bed?" Jack asked.
Taking the question more serious than expectated, Jayne replied kindly,"No."
Jack smiled and let her go. She went towards the door and opened it. She looked back at Jack,"Are you coming or what?"
Jack laughed and replied,"Yeah." He walked downstairs admiring the cathedral ceilings and pictures of large boats along the hall walls. When they reached the kitchen, Jayne made bacon and eggs while Jack was amazed by the television.
When breakfast was ready, Jayne alerted Jack and he ran to the table, alive with hunger. She set both plates on the table along with a glass of orange juice.
"So how is it , Jack?" Jayne asked.
Jack took a bite of the eggs and kindly announced,"Only the heart of a pirate can make eggs like that!"
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Jack's Love: Jayne and Jack are getting closer!!!!!!!! And the question I want you all to consider is: Will Jayne and Jack be able to let each other go when the time comes? R&R and answer the question pppppppppplllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jack Sparrow: I liked it as always, love!!!
Sagie: I loved this chapter!!
Jack Sparrow: Not as much as me, mate.
Sagie: Even more than you!!!! I'm her editor and I always will be!!!!! *stands up proudly*
Jack Sparrow: Okay, how 'bout she's 51% mine and 49% yours, savvy?
Sagie: $%#@ you, captain!!!!!!
Jack Sparrow: *sticks tounge out at Sagie*
Jack's Love: On that happy note, please R&R.
Wolf Gothicka: You should read some of Inutori's stories. She writes Inu Yasha...among other things.
Krillball6: You're a sweetie for defending me!
Pippin: You should post some stories. You sound like you'd be a funny writer.
Pirates: You are VERY IMPATIENT!!!!!!!! I mean that in a loving way though because i love people who appreciate my work. ^_^
Dimonah Tralon: Where'd you get your pen name? (I'm not being a nob, it's a serious question :) ) Anyway, that about does it. When I suggest another author, that doesn't mean you can abandon me. *sobs* That's a request not a command. *sobs*
Jack Sparrow: If ya' liked the last chapter, you'll have to pay attention to the detail in this chapter to their reaction. It's quite interesting, mate. (Sounded like Johnny Depp there for a minute).
Sagie: She was helpless and couldn't figure out how to upload her fifth chapter because she forgot for some reason!! *points at Jack's Love*
Jack's Love: *Rolls her eyes and holds up three fingers* Read between the lines, SAGGIE!!!!!!
Chapter 6: The Heart of a Pirate
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After the unforgettable kiss, Jayne helped Jack up off the frosted ground and into the house. Luckily, her father had gone to bed and they were able to freely walk to the room. When they entered, Jayne laid Jack down on her bed softly. Still holding her close, Jack stared in Jayne's enchanting eyes. Jayne stared back with her heart thumping faster than she thought possible.
"When and if I actually make it back to the Black Pearl," Jack paused. "Would ya' like to come and visit?" Jack felt incredibly stupid considering it was just one kiss and she was just along for the passionate ride.
Surprisingly, Jayne smiled and responded,"Maybe, Jack. It might be fun." Jack released her from his grip and she stood up. She stretched and announced,"I'll sleep on the floor. You might be sore in the morning." Jayne walked over to her closet and hung both coats up and grabbed a sleeping bag. She walked to the middle of the room and laid the bag out. She walked back over to Jack and checked on him again.
"Are you sure nothing is broken, Jack?" Jayne asked putting her hand on his muscular chest.
"I'm fine, love. Are you sure you don't want the bed because I've slept on hard ground more times than you have?" Jack asked kindly. He took her hand and held while he waited for a reply.
"I'm sure, Jack. Are you hungry still because I am?" Jayne asked looking at Jack then the door.
Jack smiled. "Hungry?" he pulled Jayne in close for a savage kiss. "Hungry for you love." He started kissing her. At first, Jayne didn't care, that is until Jack yanked her on the bed and rolled on top of her.
"Jack! Get off of me!" Jayne yelled. Actually, she was laughing. Confused, Jack rose his eyebrows.
"Are you okay, love? Or shall I continue?" Jack asked now smiling and moving in closer.
"No! I just was expecting a kiss, not a busy night!" Jayne yelled while she held Jack back from her lips. She was still partly laughing.
"Why are ya' laughin', Jayne?" Jack asked feeling his annoyance brewing.
"I was startled, I laugh when I'm scared," Jayne explained plainly, not laughing anymore. "But I did enjoy the kiss, though," she added. She got out from under Jack and headed towards the sleeping bag.
Before she layed down, she turned off her lamp and said with a soft voice,"Good night, Jack."
Jack smirked and closed his eyes. "G'night, love."
The next morning, Jack woke up first and rolled over to look at Jayne and she was rolled up in a ball and shivering. Jack noticed she had kicked all the blankets off herself. He climbed out of the bed and picked her up and laid her in the bed. Then Jack crawled in with her to warm her up even more. He pulled the comforter up and put his arm around Jayne's thin body.
About an hour later, Jayne woke up and Jack had fallen asleep with his arm still secure around her waist. Jayne didn't mind though. She rolled over and faced him. Smiling, she rubbed his soft face. Jack woke up and blinked his eyes. As soon as he saw Jayne's beautiful face he smiled.
"Thank you for keeping me warm," Jayne whispered and smiled.
"You're welome me lady," Jack responded.
Jayne got out of her bed and headed towards hers dressers to pick out her outfit for the day. She rummaged around her drawers and picked out a pair of black leather pants and a black T-shirt with a British flag on the front. She turned around to Jack who was now out of bed stretching his long body.
"I'll need you to turn around again," Jayne said blushing, once again.
Jack bowed slighting and turned around. Jayne started changing. Jack, once again, decided to be a dill hole and peek. He turned around slowly; she was putting on her shirt. Jack sighed silently. I never catch her early enough, he thought.
Jayne started to turn around so Jack swurved around even quicker. She came up behind Jack and put her hand on his shoulder to turn him around. When he faced Jayne, she gave him a hat and her brown leather jacket.
"I need to run some arronds today while my dad is working and I need you to come with. So, put these on and you'll stay on a low profile." Jayne explained looking in his charming, dark brown eyes.
"Okay," he responded. When Jayne turned around to head towards the door, Jack grabbed her wrist softly and turned her towards him once again. "If I didn't do what I did last night, ya' know with the surprisin' kiss, would you have slept on the bed?" Jack asked.
Taking the question more serious than expectated, Jayne replied kindly,"No."
Jack smiled and let her go. She went towards the door and opened it. She looked back at Jack,"Are you coming or what?"
Jack laughed and replied,"Yeah." He walked downstairs admiring the cathedral ceilings and pictures of large boats along the hall walls. When they reached the kitchen, Jayne made bacon and eggs while Jack was amazed by the television.
When breakfast was ready, Jayne alerted Jack and he ran to the table, alive with hunger. She set both plates on the table along with a glass of orange juice.
"So how is it , Jack?" Jayne asked.
Jack took a bite of the eggs and kindly announced,"Only the heart of a pirate can make eggs like that!"
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Jack's Love: Jayne and Jack are getting closer!!!!!!!! And the question I want you all to consider is: Will Jayne and Jack be able to let each other go when the time comes? R&R and answer the question pppppppppplllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jack Sparrow: I liked it as always, love!!!
Sagie: I loved this chapter!!
Jack Sparrow: Not as much as me, mate.
Sagie: Even more than you!!!! I'm her editor and I always will be!!!!! *stands up proudly*
Jack Sparrow: Okay, how 'bout she's 51% mine and 49% yours, savvy?
Sagie: $%#@ you, captain!!!!!!
Jack Sparrow: *sticks tounge out at Sagie*
Jack's Love: On that happy note, please R&R.