Jack's Love: I had this angry mob chase me after that last chapter. I surprised you all
didn't I? You guys all want the same thing don't you.......well.......you'll have to just find
out how it ends for yourself!!!!!!!
MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so mean and I enjoy
cliffhangers!!! That is when I know how it ends....tee hee. :)
Jack Sparrow: *Whispers in ear* How does it end?
Jack's Love: *Scoots close and yells* YOU'LL HAVE TO FIND OUT!!!!!
Sagie: I know how it ends!!!!
Jack's Love: *Looks at her in a confused expression* No you don't.
Sagie: I like to believe I do....
Jack's Love: I'm not gonna waste my breath on insults.
Chapter 16: Helping Friends.
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Tawana's brown eyes widened. She put her hands on the glass window and pressed
hard. A nurse wheeled in an electrical shocker. (I think that's what they're called). The
nurse turned up the voltage on the machine and handed the pads to the doctor. Tawana
watched in hope.
The doctor checked Jayne's pulse once more to see if she was breathing. She wasn't.
He put the two devices on her chest. "Clear!" he shouted. Then the shock came and
Jayne's body lifted slightly. The doctor looked at the heart monitor. Still flat.
He put the things on Jayne again. "Clear!" he shouted. Jayne's body lifted again. The
heart monitor started to beat again. The doctor and the nurses all gave a sigh of relief.
As the nurses cleaned up, the doctor came out to meet Tawana.
Tawana turned to him and the doctor approached. He was quite handsome. "You're
friend will be fine ma'am. My name is Dr. Carlton," he said.
Tawana gazed at him, then realized she hadn't answered and she was staring. "T-
thank Dr. Carlton. My name is Tawana Rozene," she responded in a stutter.
"Can I go see her?" she asked pointing at the window to Jayne.
"Of course. If you need anything at all, just ask the woman at the counter to beep me,"
Dr. Carlton said. He walked in the room to talk to the nurse. "Keep constant eye on this
young lady. She might go into cardiac arrest," he ordered. Then as he passed Tawana
to leave, he gave her an enticing smile.
Tawana smiled. When he was sure he was gone she jumped up and down. "Yes!"
She calmed after a moment a realized flirting isn't the thing to do while your friend is in
critical condition.
She sat down on a chair next to the hospital bed and took Jayne's hand. "Jay? Jelly?"
Tawana asked. Using nicknames always made Jayne feel better when she was sick.
Jayne opened her eyes slowly. She didn't look that bad. No bruises on the front part
of her body, but the nurses said her back would be sore. Tawana picked up the clip
board which listed all her injuries it said she had a stress fracture on her right ankle.
Other than that it was all 'irregular blood flow might cause cardiac arrest.' Things like
that.
"Where's Jack? Is he okay? Where is he?" Jayne asked jolting up then laying back
down groaning because of her back.
"Calm down, Jayne. He's fine. He made it to the other side.....I think," Tawana said
rubbing Jayne's hand to comfort her. "Be careful. Don't move to much," Tawana warned.
"Please Tawana, I need you to not try to go tell Jack. Don't worry about it. The
'universe' doesn't want us to be together I guess," Jayne said. Tawana could see
Jayne's eyes tearing up.
Jayne rolled over to hide her sadness. Tawana's own eyes started to tear. She stood
up and walked outside the room and leaned against the wall. She popped open her eyes
and ran towards the counter.
"Beep Dr. Carlton now!" Tawana shouted.
The lady wasn't even startled by her. "What's the emergency?" the lady asked plainly.
"I just need him now!" Tawana shouted.
The lady looked up at Tawana through her bug-eyed glasses. "We don't do that here,"
she responded.
Furious, Tawana ran around the counter and grabbed the lady by her collar and stood
her up. "You call him now or I'll take your lungs out with a spoon!" she threatened. She
threw her back down on the office chair.
The woman called the beeper number and no more than thirty seconds later, Dr.
Carlton came running down the hall of the hospital.
Tawana ran around the counter to the doctor. "Dr. Carlton!" she shouted.
"What's wrong Tawana?" the doctor asked sympathetically. He stepped closer to her.
"I know this might come out quick and unbelievable, but you have to listen. I need
your help because Jayne fell in love with a guy from the past and she was gonna go with
him but the portal closed and only let Jack go through and now she's here and I need
help to get back to Jack and warn hi so he can help her," she rambled off. Finally, she
took a breath.
"Okay, Tawana, calm down. So, Jayne fell in love with a guy from the past and she
tried to go back in the past with him but the portal wouldn't let her?" he asked, clearing
things up.
"Yes, exactly. I was wondering if you could help me tell Jack?" Tawana pleaded.
The doctor looked around to see if anyone was watching. "Okay, I'll go with you, but
you gotta explain more in the car," he agreed.
"Thank you so much!" she screamed. She jumped in joy and kissed him. Realizing
what she was doing, Tawana let go of him and her face turned hot. She blushed hugely.
"Oh...I'm so sorry, I just do-," she rambled.
The handsome doctor put his finger on her mouth to quiet her. "It's okay, no need to
apologize," he whispered. He took off his white doctor-jacket and grabbed his leather
jacket.
"We need to go by Jayne's house first. I need her notes," Tawana said to the Carlton.
On the way to Jayne's house, she explained everything to Carlton as he looked out
the window. He listened in silence and believed every word of it.
After finishing the story, Tawana ended, "I just think telling Jack that the girl he loves
is hurt, that's all."
Carlton turned his head to her. "I think you're doing the right thing Tawana. You can
call me Chad, that's my first name," he added.
When they arrived at Jayne's house, Scott, her father, opened the door.
"Tawana, what are you doing here? I thought you were with Jayne?" Scott
questioned.
"Uh...she is with me....at my house....she wanted me to grab some notes of hers," she
lied with a fake smile. Chad smiled with her.
"Okay," Scott said. He stood aside letting the young adults in. They ran upstairs and
grabbed her notes.
"Bye Mr. Smith!" Tawana yelled as her and Chad ran out the door. They ran all the
way to the car and hopped in. Tawana sped to the portal's point.
When they arrived, Tawana ran out to the same patch of purple flowers. Chad
followed. "Here is where the portal thing opens, it should open right about-." Before she
could finish, a bolt of lightning hit the flowers and sent Tawana and Chad flying back
fifteen feet.
Chad sat up. "Wow! I should hang out with you more often!" Chad yelled, helping
Tawana up.
Tawana ran towards the portal. Chad grabbed her by the arm. "Wait! I'll go. That way,
if I don't make it back, you can still tell Jayne we tried," Chad explained.
She handed Chad a picture of Jayne and looked at the noble doctor. "You'll need this
for proof that you're a friend of mine...and why are you helping me Chad?" Tawana
asked.
Chad gave her a warm smile. "Do you believe in love at first sight?" he asked. But
before she could answer, he jumped through the portal.
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Jack's Love: I had to give Tawana a guy.....I'm sorry. I made him a doctor......if that
makes you feel better. Anyway, please R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jack Sparrow: Why wasn't I in the chapter?
Sagie: Because you're Jack.......R&R!!!!
didn't I? You guys all want the same thing don't you.......well.......you'll have to just find
out how it ends for yourself!!!!!!!
MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so mean and I enjoy
cliffhangers!!! That is when I know how it ends....tee hee. :)
Jack Sparrow: *Whispers in ear* How does it end?
Jack's Love: *Scoots close and yells* YOU'LL HAVE TO FIND OUT!!!!!
Sagie: I know how it ends!!!!
Jack's Love: *Looks at her in a confused expression* No you don't.
Sagie: I like to believe I do....
Jack's Love: I'm not gonna waste my breath on insults.
Chapter 16: Helping Friends.
***********************************************************************************************
Tawana's brown eyes widened. She put her hands on the glass window and pressed
hard. A nurse wheeled in an electrical shocker. (I think that's what they're called). The
nurse turned up the voltage on the machine and handed the pads to the doctor. Tawana
watched in hope.
The doctor checked Jayne's pulse once more to see if she was breathing. She wasn't.
He put the two devices on her chest. "Clear!" he shouted. Then the shock came and
Jayne's body lifted slightly. The doctor looked at the heart monitor. Still flat.
He put the things on Jayne again. "Clear!" he shouted. Jayne's body lifted again. The
heart monitor started to beat again. The doctor and the nurses all gave a sigh of relief.
As the nurses cleaned up, the doctor came out to meet Tawana.
Tawana turned to him and the doctor approached. He was quite handsome. "You're
friend will be fine ma'am. My name is Dr. Carlton," he said.
Tawana gazed at him, then realized she hadn't answered and she was staring. "T-
thank Dr. Carlton. My name is Tawana Rozene," she responded in a stutter.
"Can I go see her?" she asked pointing at the window to Jayne.
"Of course. If you need anything at all, just ask the woman at the counter to beep me,"
Dr. Carlton said. He walked in the room to talk to the nurse. "Keep constant eye on this
young lady. She might go into cardiac arrest," he ordered. Then as he passed Tawana
to leave, he gave her an enticing smile.
Tawana smiled. When he was sure he was gone she jumped up and down. "Yes!"
She calmed after a moment a realized flirting isn't the thing to do while your friend is in
critical condition.
She sat down on a chair next to the hospital bed and took Jayne's hand. "Jay? Jelly?"
Tawana asked. Using nicknames always made Jayne feel better when she was sick.
Jayne opened her eyes slowly. She didn't look that bad. No bruises on the front part
of her body, but the nurses said her back would be sore. Tawana picked up the clip
board which listed all her injuries it said she had a stress fracture on her right ankle.
Other than that it was all 'irregular blood flow might cause cardiac arrest.' Things like
that.
"Where's Jack? Is he okay? Where is he?" Jayne asked jolting up then laying back
down groaning because of her back.
"Calm down, Jayne. He's fine. He made it to the other side.....I think," Tawana said
rubbing Jayne's hand to comfort her. "Be careful. Don't move to much," Tawana warned.
"Please Tawana, I need you to not try to go tell Jack. Don't worry about it. The
'universe' doesn't want us to be together I guess," Jayne said. Tawana could see
Jayne's eyes tearing up.
Jayne rolled over to hide her sadness. Tawana's own eyes started to tear. She stood
up and walked outside the room and leaned against the wall. She popped open her eyes
and ran towards the counter.
"Beep Dr. Carlton now!" Tawana shouted.
The lady wasn't even startled by her. "What's the emergency?" the lady asked plainly.
"I just need him now!" Tawana shouted.
The lady looked up at Tawana through her bug-eyed glasses. "We don't do that here,"
she responded.
Furious, Tawana ran around the counter and grabbed the lady by her collar and stood
her up. "You call him now or I'll take your lungs out with a spoon!" she threatened. She
threw her back down on the office chair.
The woman called the beeper number and no more than thirty seconds later, Dr.
Carlton came running down the hall of the hospital.
Tawana ran around the counter to the doctor. "Dr. Carlton!" she shouted.
"What's wrong Tawana?" the doctor asked sympathetically. He stepped closer to her.
"I know this might come out quick and unbelievable, but you have to listen. I need
your help because Jayne fell in love with a guy from the past and she was gonna go with
him but the portal closed and only let Jack go through and now she's here and I need
help to get back to Jack and warn hi so he can help her," she rambled off. Finally, she
took a breath.
"Okay, Tawana, calm down. So, Jayne fell in love with a guy from the past and she
tried to go back in the past with him but the portal wouldn't let her?" he asked, clearing
things up.
"Yes, exactly. I was wondering if you could help me tell Jack?" Tawana pleaded.
The doctor looked around to see if anyone was watching. "Okay, I'll go with you, but
you gotta explain more in the car," he agreed.
"Thank you so much!" she screamed. She jumped in joy and kissed him. Realizing
what she was doing, Tawana let go of him and her face turned hot. She blushed hugely.
"Oh...I'm so sorry, I just do-," she rambled.
The handsome doctor put his finger on her mouth to quiet her. "It's okay, no need to
apologize," he whispered. He took off his white doctor-jacket and grabbed his leather
jacket.
"We need to go by Jayne's house first. I need her notes," Tawana said to the Carlton.
On the way to Jayne's house, she explained everything to Carlton as he looked out
the window. He listened in silence and believed every word of it.
After finishing the story, Tawana ended, "I just think telling Jack that the girl he loves
is hurt, that's all."
Carlton turned his head to her. "I think you're doing the right thing Tawana. You can
call me Chad, that's my first name," he added.
When they arrived at Jayne's house, Scott, her father, opened the door.
"Tawana, what are you doing here? I thought you were with Jayne?" Scott
questioned.
"Uh...she is with me....at my house....she wanted me to grab some notes of hers," she
lied with a fake smile. Chad smiled with her.
"Okay," Scott said. He stood aside letting the young adults in. They ran upstairs and
grabbed her notes.
"Bye Mr. Smith!" Tawana yelled as her and Chad ran out the door. They ran all the
way to the car and hopped in. Tawana sped to the portal's point.
When they arrived, Tawana ran out to the same patch of purple flowers. Chad
followed. "Here is where the portal thing opens, it should open right about-." Before she
could finish, a bolt of lightning hit the flowers and sent Tawana and Chad flying back
fifteen feet.
Chad sat up. "Wow! I should hang out with you more often!" Chad yelled, helping
Tawana up.
Tawana ran towards the portal. Chad grabbed her by the arm. "Wait! I'll go. That way,
if I don't make it back, you can still tell Jayne we tried," Chad explained.
She handed Chad a picture of Jayne and looked at the noble doctor. "You'll need this
for proof that you're a friend of mine...and why are you helping me Chad?" Tawana
asked.
Chad gave her a warm smile. "Do you believe in love at first sight?" he asked. But
before she could answer, he jumped through the portal.
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Jack's Love: I had to give Tawana a guy.....I'm sorry. I made him a doctor......if that
makes you feel better. Anyway, please R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jack Sparrow: Why wasn't I in the chapter?
Sagie: Because you're Jack.......R&R!!!!