A/N: Hey guys. OMG. I haven't updated this fic in FOREVER!!! Well naturally
I've been super busy, homework n' all, but I can't blame it all on that.
yes. it was procrastination that did me in, and so, after forgetting about
this fic for about half the year, I was suddenly reminded of my fic when I
was cleaning out my email box, and I saw all my reviews ^_^. I hope ppl
will still read this even tho it's been a while. Hell, I've practically
forgotten what's happened in the story, and I had to reread it. lets just
hope I'll still have the craziness in these future chapters like before,
and hopefully, you guys will still like it. most importantly, tho I'm not
to enthused to do this, I don't want to end it really lamely or anything...
but u readers can be the judge of that ^_^ anyway, like I said before, I've
basically lost most of my hyper obsessiveness of fruits basket, but I still
enjoy reading the new chapters, and of course I'll buy the manga when
tokyopop releases it... ok. enough chatter, lets get on w/ the story! PS
now that I've actually read the manga, I feel kinda like my story is mostly
based on the anime, and its written very choppy... o well. anyway, on with
the story!
Last comment: I've noticed that several people have begun to do stories based on a character's birthday. that was another thing that made me quit. I HATE COPYCATS! I mean, before my fic, NO ONE had anything like this, but now. *sigh* I guess it can't really be helped, can it?
Tohru sighed. Spending half the day with Kagura had defiantly worn her out. 'I guess being the pig of the jyuunishi has given her more strength than normal people,' she thought. 'And I still haven't gotten Kyo-kun anything yet.'
"T-o-o-r-h-u.!" Shigure's voice sang out. "Can you come over here for a minute?"
"Hai!" Tohru replied quickly. She got up from the floor and hurried over to Shigure.
"Tohru! Ah, I'm glad you're here," he began. "I was trying to bake Kyo- kichi a cake and."
"If you do manage to bake the cake, do you really expect him to eat it?" a quiet voice filtered into the kitchen, and Hatori Souma walked in. "Especially when you let him know that it was you who baked it. He might think it was poisoned or something."
"Ah, Hari-kun! Why are you so cruel to me?" Shigure sobbed dramatically. "I only wanted to express to Kyo-kichi the joy of turning into a young man, the hardships he will endure. I wanted to describe to him the pleasure of his manhood, and the tingly feeling of the first time he realizes he's in love, and wants to make that woman-"
"All this from a cake? Are you serious? That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard, and I've heard a lot of stupid things from you," a young bratty voice penetrated into the air, and Kisa and Hiro walked in. Kisa immediately whispered "Hiro-kun! Don't be so mean to Shigure-ojisan (?)"
"Ah. Did I forget to mention that I had brought along Hiro and Kisa with me?" Hatori said, looking around for a lighter. "Kisa had heard from Kagura that Tohru was trying to find Kyo a present, and so she said she wanted to come and help. Of course, Hiro decided he must come too."
Hiro scowled, "I HAD to come, in case that pervert was going to do something suspicious to Kisa." He shot a glare towards Shigure and continued "Plus, I didn't want to leave Kisa alone with her-" he looked over at Tohru "in case some of her stupidness was to infect Kisa."
"Eh..??" Tohru stammered when she saw Hiro pointing at her.
"See, what'd I tell you?" He scoffed.
"Hiro-kun! Don't be so mean to Tohru-niisan." Kisa pleaded.
"Ah, Hiro-kun! There's no need for you to cover up your motives with these silly lies. We all know for a fact that it was your love for Kisa that made you come with her today!" He strolled over to where Kisa was standing and grasped her hands "Ah, Kisa-chan! You're so cute now, look at you! No wonder Hiro-kun's deeply in lov-"
Before he had time to finish, Hiro had placed a very well aimed kick at Shigure, aiming in that area where it was certain to hurt.
"Ouch." Shigure whimpered. "I need a doctor. Hari, help me!" He groaned, "And why don't I ever get to finish my sentences?!"
Hatori made no reply, instead he continued on his search for a lighter.
"GURE, my love! What's happened to you?" a flamboyant figure entered the room, his white/silver hair floating on its own behind him. "You're hurt?! Who did this to you? For I shall track him down, and make sure he pays for what he did to my beloved Shigure!"
"Oh, Aya! You are a true lover!" Shigure was suddenly eased of all pain as he stood up and clasped hands together with the newcomer. "I knew that if I could find no other ally, I could always depend on you!"
The mood suddenly became darker. "So Gure." Ayame said sweetly, almost heartbrokenly, "How come you haven't called me in so long? I was waiting for you ever-so-patiently in my bedroom of love."
"You old men, stop acting so creepy! Old perverts like you shouldn't be flailing yourselves around like some weirdos! Kisa! Cover your eyes!" Hiro commanded as he clapped his hands over Kisa's eyes.
Ayame paid no attention to Hiro, and had gotten hold of Shigure's chin. He tilted his face upwards and they were staring into each other's eyes.
"Ah-hahahahahahahahahahaha!" Ayame laughed, being his usual self again. He turned towards Hiro. "Now, now Hiro-kun! Take notes, for soon you'll enter the age of manhood as well, and you need to treat Kisa-chan with the some respect, no matter what physical stage of the relationship you're in!"
Hiro, who turned beat red, muttered "What a nutter." (Can you picture Hiro saying 'nutter'? lol)
He flashed a big smile towards Tohru, and exclaimed "Ah, Tohru-chan! What do we have here? Are you perhaps baking something special for Kyo-kichi? Hmmmmm." He suddenly crouched down and stared at Tohru at eye-level. Suddenly, a sly smile crept onto his face. "Are you baking Kyo-kichi a cake.OF LOVE?!?! I knew it! Teenage hormones were sure to kick in, even in this house! Oh, it'll be a grand day indeed, for our little flower and Kyo- kichi will declare their love for each other, and then they'll get married, and have little Kyo-kichi's. " He cut off abruptly as another thought entered his head, "NO!! If that were to happen, what about my poor Yuki- kun? He won't have any lovin'!!!"
Ayame gasped for a breath, teetering with excitement.
"Calm down, Ayame." Hatori had found his lighter. "Tohru wasn't baking the cake, it was Shigure."
"Shigure?" Ayame blinked, and turned to Shigure, "Gure. Is this true? ARE YOU CHEATING ON ME WITH KYO-KICHI?"
"Eh, heh heh. of course not Aya." Shigure suddenly changed into his seductive mode. "No one could ever replace you, or your techniques."
"Oh, hoho. you worried me there for a minute there Gure." He swept over to where Shigure was standing. "But I'll over look this, just this once."
"Cut it out you two. you're setting a bad example of Hiro and Kisa." Hatori lighted his cigarette. "Anyway, I have to get back to the main house. Akito wants me there again." He paused, "Ayame, come with me. If you stay here, you'll just bother everyone. And Hiro," he turned and faced Hiro, "I'm allowing you and Kisa to remain here. But you're responsible for Kisa, so you better take care of her."
"C-o-o-m-i-n-g Hari!" He sashayed towards the door, "Oh, and Gure, we'll continue this next time! *heart*"
Tohru just stood here, the shock not gone from her face.
"Tohru? Tohru-chan? Are you alright?" Shigure flapped his hands in front of her face furiously. "Oh well, I guess there's nothing we can do when she's in shock-mode. I guess I'll just have to buy the cake for Kyo now." he turned and faced Hiro and Kisa. "Hey you two! Do you want to go into the city with me and pick out a cake for Kyo-chan?"
"What? That's so lam-" Hiro began.
"Really?" Kisa squealed. "Can I pick one with strawberries on it? I know Tohru-oneechan likes strawberries!"
"Sure, sure whatever you want," Shigure replied cheerfully. He noted once again how Kisa could alter Hiro's choices and moods so easily. 'No matter how big of a brat Hiro is, I guess there's someone who's bound to love him.'
"Hey. Before we go, shouldn't we wake up this idiot here?" Hiro pointed over at Tohru, who was still in her trance.
Kisa walked over to Tohru and tugged at her sleeve. "Oneechan, c'mon! Let's go pick out Kyo-oniichan's cake!"
Kisa snatched Tohru's hand, and took Hiro's hand and led them to the door. "Come on, Shigure-ojisan! Let's go!"
And with a smile, Shigure called out "Be right there!"
How was that? I will try to wrap up this fic ASAP, but not making it really boring or anything. please review. I would like at least 5 or so reviews, and thanx loads for those who are still reading this fic!
Another thing: I don't really know if I got the names right when each character is calling another character. I also don't know much Japanese, so the honorifics might be wrong. please tell me if it is! And should I continue.?
Love all, ChibiSweetpea*~
Last comment: I've noticed that several people have begun to do stories based on a character's birthday. that was another thing that made me quit. I HATE COPYCATS! I mean, before my fic, NO ONE had anything like this, but now. *sigh* I guess it can't really be helped, can it?
Tohru sighed. Spending half the day with Kagura had defiantly worn her out. 'I guess being the pig of the jyuunishi has given her more strength than normal people,' she thought. 'And I still haven't gotten Kyo-kun anything yet.'
"T-o-o-r-h-u.!" Shigure's voice sang out. "Can you come over here for a minute?"
"Hai!" Tohru replied quickly. She got up from the floor and hurried over to Shigure.
"Tohru! Ah, I'm glad you're here," he began. "I was trying to bake Kyo- kichi a cake and."
"If you do manage to bake the cake, do you really expect him to eat it?" a quiet voice filtered into the kitchen, and Hatori Souma walked in. "Especially when you let him know that it was you who baked it. He might think it was poisoned or something."
"Ah, Hari-kun! Why are you so cruel to me?" Shigure sobbed dramatically. "I only wanted to express to Kyo-kichi the joy of turning into a young man, the hardships he will endure. I wanted to describe to him the pleasure of his manhood, and the tingly feeling of the first time he realizes he's in love, and wants to make that woman-"
"All this from a cake? Are you serious? That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard, and I've heard a lot of stupid things from you," a young bratty voice penetrated into the air, and Kisa and Hiro walked in. Kisa immediately whispered "Hiro-kun! Don't be so mean to Shigure-ojisan (?)"
"Ah. Did I forget to mention that I had brought along Hiro and Kisa with me?" Hatori said, looking around for a lighter. "Kisa had heard from Kagura that Tohru was trying to find Kyo a present, and so she said she wanted to come and help. Of course, Hiro decided he must come too."
Hiro scowled, "I HAD to come, in case that pervert was going to do something suspicious to Kisa." He shot a glare towards Shigure and continued "Plus, I didn't want to leave Kisa alone with her-" he looked over at Tohru "in case some of her stupidness was to infect Kisa."
"Eh..??" Tohru stammered when she saw Hiro pointing at her.
"See, what'd I tell you?" He scoffed.
"Hiro-kun! Don't be so mean to Tohru-niisan." Kisa pleaded.
"Ah, Hiro-kun! There's no need for you to cover up your motives with these silly lies. We all know for a fact that it was your love for Kisa that made you come with her today!" He strolled over to where Kisa was standing and grasped her hands "Ah, Kisa-chan! You're so cute now, look at you! No wonder Hiro-kun's deeply in lov-"
Before he had time to finish, Hiro had placed a very well aimed kick at Shigure, aiming in that area where it was certain to hurt.
"Ouch." Shigure whimpered. "I need a doctor. Hari, help me!" He groaned, "And why don't I ever get to finish my sentences?!"
Hatori made no reply, instead he continued on his search for a lighter.
"GURE, my love! What's happened to you?" a flamboyant figure entered the room, his white/silver hair floating on its own behind him. "You're hurt?! Who did this to you? For I shall track him down, and make sure he pays for what he did to my beloved Shigure!"
"Oh, Aya! You are a true lover!" Shigure was suddenly eased of all pain as he stood up and clasped hands together with the newcomer. "I knew that if I could find no other ally, I could always depend on you!"
The mood suddenly became darker. "So Gure." Ayame said sweetly, almost heartbrokenly, "How come you haven't called me in so long? I was waiting for you ever-so-patiently in my bedroom of love."
"You old men, stop acting so creepy! Old perverts like you shouldn't be flailing yourselves around like some weirdos! Kisa! Cover your eyes!" Hiro commanded as he clapped his hands over Kisa's eyes.
Ayame paid no attention to Hiro, and had gotten hold of Shigure's chin. He tilted his face upwards and they were staring into each other's eyes.
"Ah-hahahahahahahahahahaha!" Ayame laughed, being his usual self again. He turned towards Hiro. "Now, now Hiro-kun! Take notes, for soon you'll enter the age of manhood as well, and you need to treat Kisa-chan with the some respect, no matter what physical stage of the relationship you're in!"
Hiro, who turned beat red, muttered "What a nutter." (Can you picture Hiro saying 'nutter'? lol)
He flashed a big smile towards Tohru, and exclaimed "Ah, Tohru-chan! What do we have here? Are you perhaps baking something special for Kyo-kichi? Hmmmmm." He suddenly crouched down and stared at Tohru at eye-level. Suddenly, a sly smile crept onto his face. "Are you baking Kyo-kichi a cake.OF LOVE?!?! I knew it! Teenage hormones were sure to kick in, even in this house! Oh, it'll be a grand day indeed, for our little flower and Kyo- kichi will declare their love for each other, and then they'll get married, and have little Kyo-kichi's. " He cut off abruptly as another thought entered his head, "NO!! If that were to happen, what about my poor Yuki- kun? He won't have any lovin'!!!"
Ayame gasped for a breath, teetering with excitement.
"Calm down, Ayame." Hatori had found his lighter. "Tohru wasn't baking the cake, it was Shigure."
"Shigure?" Ayame blinked, and turned to Shigure, "Gure. Is this true? ARE YOU CHEATING ON ME WITH KYO-KICHI?"
"Eh, heh heh. of course not Aya." Shigure suddenly changed into his seductive mode. "No one could ever replace you, or your techniques."
"Oh, hoho. you worried me there for a minute there Gure." He swept over to where Shigure was standing. "But I'll over look this, just this once."
"Cut it out you two. you're setting a bad example of Hiro and Kisa." Hatori lighted his cigarette. "Anyway, I have to get back to the main house. Akito wants me there again." He paused, "Ayame, come with me. If you stay here, you'll just bother everyone. And Hiro," he turned and faced Hiro, "I'm allowing you and Kisa to remain here. But you're responsible for Kisa, so you better take care of her."
"C-o-o-m-i-n-g Hari!" He sashayed towards the door, "Oh, and Gure, we'll continue this next time! *heart*"
Tohru just stood here, the shock not gone from her face.
"Tohru? Tohru-chan? Are you alright?" Shigure flapped his hands in front of her face furiously. "Oh well, I guess there's nothing we can do when she's in shock-mode. I guess I'll just have to buy the cake for Kyo now." he turned and faced Hiro and Kisa. "Hey you two! Do you want to go into the city with me and pick out a cake for Kyo-chan?"
"What? That's so lam-" Hiro began.
"Really?" Kisa squealed. "Can I pick one with strawberries on it? I know Tohru-oneechan likes strawberries!"
"Sure, sure whatever you want," Shigure replied cheerfully. He noted once again how Kisa could alter Hiro's choices and moods so easily. 'No matter how big of a brat Hiro is, I guess there's someone who's bound to love him.'
"Hey. Before we go, shouldn't we wake up this idiot here?" Hiro pointed over at Tohru, who was still in her trance.
Kisa walked over to Tohru and tugged at her sleeve. "Oneechan, c'mon! Let's go pick out Kyo-oniichan's cake!"
Kisa snatched Tohru's hand, and took Hiro's hand and led them to the door. "Come on, Shigure-ojisan! Let's go!"
And with a smile, Shigure called out "Be right there!"
How was that? I will try to wrap up this fic ASAP, but not making it really boring or anything. please review. I would like at least 5 or so reviews, and thanx loads for those who are still reading this fic!
Another thing: I don't really know if I got the names right when each character is calling another character. I also don't know much Japanese, so the honorifics might be wrong. please tell me if it is! And should I continue.?
Love all, ChibiSweetpea*~