Afterwards...
uh...this is my very first real fanfic...so tell me what you think...i dont own rurouni kenshin or anything, but i love the show...its awesome..
the first chapter is kinda "weird...like stupid weird..." sorta...its kinda boring...it'll get better later, i hope.
THANK YOU FOR READING...(this is in advance in case you get bored halfway and leave my story..=*( ..anyway enjoy!)
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A nice beautiful day...
"MISS KAORU! STOP HITTING ME ON THE HEAD I DIDNT DO IT!" Kenshin yells.
Kaoru still hitting Kenshin on the head with her wooden sword (or shinai or bokuden) "YOU ATE MY RICE CAKES!"
*Note: i didnt know what to put in the beginning so i decided on a little bit of "comedy"
Sanosuke walks into the room with a rice cake in his hand "Hey missy, these are pretty good, where did you get these? the Akabeko?"
Kaoru says "OH! sorry Kenshin, SANOOOOOOOOOOO!" She stops hitting kenshin and runs toward sanosuke and starts whacking him instead.
Sano says "Hey! I JUST ASKED WHERE...OW....YOU GOT.....AHHH....THESE!"
Kaoru says"I MADE THEM, FOR YOUR INFORMATION IT TOOK 3 HOURS MAKING THEM LIKE THIS!"
Sano (whispers) "Then i guess you know how to make them now..."
Kenshin (turning serious) says "Someone's here...Kaoru stay still..." Kenshin walks to the door and opens it.
A mysterious figure is standing in front of the Kamiya Kasheen (NOTE:need spelling...)
??? says "WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING WALKING ALL SUSPICOUS!"
Kenshin says "so i guess you're high off coffee or something...Saitou..." then he walks out of the dojo and comes straight-face-to-face with saitou
Saitou says "So battousai...what have you been doing after that incident with Enishi?"
Kenshin says "pretty much relaxing...but i can still use my hiten mitsurugi...though i shouldnt..." (NOTE: people who do not know why should read some of the manga trans...i know one site, www.maigo-chan.org)
Sano yelling at Saitou "SAITOU YOU STILL OWE ME THAT MATCH!"
Saitou "Uh sure rooster head, but not today....chou, get out here"
Chou the former jupangatana man comes out from behind a tree "Oh whatever boss...i think ill take a little break...look around kyoto to see if anyone still does their real job...ill be back here in about 3 to 8 months...so have fun without me" Chou grins and walks away...(possibly forever?!)
Saitou *(becoming serious)* "so..have you heard battousai?"
Kenshin "Heard about what?"
Saitou "AH! you dont know? oy..."
Kenshin "Oro?"
Sano "Okay Saitou, start talking...."
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this kinda veered away from my original idea but its ok...it was pretty short.i was gonna explain about battousai and stuff but its alright...you should/might know already...well review and tell me how the first chapter is...try to be nice...cuz i know i suck...so thanks for reading!!
uh...this is my very first real fanfic...so tell me what you think...i dont own rurouni kenshin or anything, but i love the show...its awesome..
the first chapter is kinda "weird...like stupid weird..." sorta...its kinda boring...it'll get better later, i hope.
THANK YOU FOR READING...(this is in advance in case you get bored halfway and leave my story..=*( ..anyway enjoy!)
____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________
A nice beautiful day...
"MISS KAORU! STOP HITTING ME ON THE HEAD I DIDNT DO IT!" Kenshin yells.
Kaoru still hitting Kenshin on the head with her wooden sword (or shinai or bokuden) "YOU ATE MY RICE CAKES!"
*Note: i didnt know what to put in the beginning so i decided on a little bit of "comedy"
Sanosuke walks into the room with a rice cake in his hand "Hey missy, these are pretty good, where did you get these? the Akabeko?"
Kaoru says "OH! sorry Kenshin, SANOOOOOOOOOOO!" She stops hitting kenshin and runs toward sanosuke and starts whacking him instead.
Sano says "Hey! I JUST ASKED WHERE...OW....YOU GOT.....AHHH....THESE!"
Kaoru says"I MADE THEM, FOR YOUR INFORMATION IT TOOK 3 HOURS MAKING THEM LIKE THIS!"
Sano (whispers) "Then i guess you know how to make them now..."
Kenshin (turning serious) says "Someone's here...Kaoru stay still..." Kenshin walks to the door and opens it.
A mysterious figure is standing in front of the Kamiya Kasheen (NOTE:need spelling...)
??? says "WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING WALKING ALL SUSPICOUS!"
Kenshin says "so i guess you're high off coffee or something...Saitou..." then he walks out of the dojo and comes straight-face-to-face with saitou
Saitou says "So battousai...what have you been doing after that incident with Enishi?"
Kenshin says "pretty much relaxing...but i can still use my hiten mitsurugi...though i shouldnt..." (NOTE: people who do not know why should read some of the manga trans...i know one site, www.maigo-chan.org)
Sano yelling at Saitou "SAITOU YOU STILL OWE ME THAT MATCH!"
Saitou "Uh sure rooster head, but not today....chou, get out here"
Chou the former jupangatana man comes out from behind a tree "Oh whatever boss...i think ill take a little break...look around kyoto to see if anyone still does their real job...ill be back here in about 3 to 8 months...so have fun without me" Chou grins and walks away...(possibly forever?!)
Saitou *(becoming serious)* "so..have you heard battousai?"
Kenshin "Heard about what?"
Saitou "AH! you dont know? oy..."
Kenshin "Oro?"
Sano "Okay Saitou, start talking...."
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this kinda veered away from my original idea but its ok...it was pretty short.i was gonna explain about battousai and stuff but its alright...you should/might know already...well review and tell me how the first chapter is...try to be nice...cuz i know i suck...so thanks for reading!!