Chapter 16
Tory's Note: I can't believe this! We have over 50 reviews! So thank you to all that reviewed! It makes me insanely happy, which makes me hyper which is .........er......... interesting to say the least. So thank you to everyone who reviewed. (That doesn't mean stop reviewing, of course!!!)
Just some updates (because I am too lazy to put them on the Bio thingy): By the time this chapter is posted, I could have posted some other things up on the account. So when this is up, go check it out. This story is almost over, not many chapters left probably. It will get boring if we drag it out too long (and if you think it's boring reading it, think how bored we are writing it!). There might be a sequel, there might not. Ali and I think there is a good chance there will be, but it will probably not be up for a long time. Now that it is summer, we are away a LOT and most of that time I have no access to a computer. So that's not exactly good. Chapter 17 will hopefully be up soon. Check back about 2 weeks after this is posted. New stuff will almost definitely be posted, if not a new chapter or this. Anyway, onto the story. I am such a procrastinator. I procrastinate procrastinating!
Chapter 16: In Which Ali Goes Bonkers
"Fine, leave me out here to die all alone, I like that. I'll keep it in mind when I go to save your ass next time." I yelled to the back of Tory. But she just kept on walking like the wind had carried my words out to sea. "All I need now is some good sleep, and an ice cream, America Online, and, and, nothing else." I laughed at my own joke, but the moment didn't last long. I could hear foot steps around me, but it was dark by then and I couldn't see who made them.
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People in the bushes point of view:
"Hide, we have an intruder," said person # 1.
"Welcome to my submarine lair. It's long and it's hard and it's full of sea men," said person #2.
"Shut up," person # 1.
"I'm only quoting from like the best movie on earth," person # 2 as they started to get into an attitude.
"How many times do I have to tell you Equilibrium is the best movie on earth," person # 1 said, stating his case.
"Whatever," person # 2 said, doing the "whatever" movement. "You are so slow on the times. I mean like get a new "good" movie because the one you have now (thanks to cj) is just plain "whatever" you want to call it (each time there's a quote around a word, the person is doing the "quote" thing with there hands)
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I started to sit up, now wit a great interest on who was out there. What if they were those flower people we saw before? What if they saw us, and followed us here? (Oh no, looks like Ali's (it feels weird to be typing in the third person) Maybe I'll try singing to them. I thought up a song real fast in my head, and started singing.
"La, La, La, La, dum, dum, dum. Dum de dome, dom de dom. Okay, this isn't working. I'll just have to sell myself (that doesn't sound right, well not in that kind of way, lol) Hello?" Within seconds of me saying "Hello" I felt tons of hands grab me, and tie me up. They place a blindfold over my eyes so I couldn't see who they were, or where they were taking me. "Ok, be careful with the lady. Hey watch your hands." I started saying.
"Sorry," answered mystery man behind the blindfold # 1.
"Take her away," said mystery man behind the blindfold # 2. Great they were taking me somewhere, without me even seeing where I was walking. What a blast this will be!
"Ok, if you taking me away, at least tell me where I'm going. It just so happens I'm blindfolded in the middle of the night, where I can't see anything anyway, and people are taking me somewhere. What fun?" I told all the mystery men behind the blindfold. This feels like a show game.
The Game Show Ali Made Up While The People Were Taking Her Places.!!!!!!!
Game Show Host: The prize behind curtain number 5 is a piece of cloth. That's all you've won.
Person who won: Gee, thanks. I wonder what kind of fun stuff I can do with a piece of cloth.
Game Show Host: Let me give you a hint....NOTHING!!!!! Hahahaha, you're so stupid a piece of cloth is worthless.
Person who won: Oh, that's too bad. I was hoping to sell it on E-Bay and start the bidding at $1,000.
Meanwhile:
Tory, Frodo and Sam were witnessing the same thing Ali was. And they were experiencing something new.
Flashing News:
Gollum is not with anyone. Ali has been captured and thinking about game
shows. She has become very confused and is in an abnormal state.
This message flashed out at them while they were walking thought the woods before they were captured. (I'm acting very odd, while writing this. I'm getting pissed off about window sills, pushing people to their deaths out the window sills, people staring, and dissing contests in a library. So the stuff I'm writing is abnormal.)
No, actually there was not flashing sign there wasn't anything to tell them. From writing that I would have to write from Tory's perspective and I really don't think I can do that. So Tory, you can take the stage again, and tell what happened to you, Frodo and Sam while I got caught.
Tory's Note: I can't believe this! We have over 50 reviews! So thank you to all that reviewed! It makes me insanely happy, which makes me hyper which is .........er......... interesting to say the least. So thank you to everyone who reviewed. (That doesn't mean stop reviewing, of course!!!)
Just some updates (because I am too lazy to put them on the Bio thingy): By the time this chapter is posted, I could have posted some other things up on the account. So when this is up, go check it out. This story is almost over, not many chapters left probably. It will get boring if we drag it out too long (and if you think it's boring reading it, think how bored we are writing it!). There might be a sequel, there might not. Ali and I think there is a good chance there will be, but it will probably not be up for a long time. Now that it is summer, we are away a LOT and most of that time I have no access to a computer. So that's not exactly good. Chapter 17 will hopefully be up soon. Check back about 2 weeks after this is posted. New stuff will almost definitely be posted, if not a new chapter or this. Anyway, onto the story. I am such a procrastinator. I procrastinate procrastinating!
Chapter 16: In Which Ali Goes Bonkers
"Fine, leave me out here to die all alone, I like that. I'll keep it in mind when I go to save your ass next time." I yelled to the back of Tory. But she just kept on walking like the wind had carried my words out to sea. "All I need now is some good sleep, and an ice cream, America Online, and, and, nothing else." I laughed at my own joke, but the moment didn't last long. I could hear foot steps around me, but it was dark by then and I couldn't see who made them.
_________________________________________________________________
People in the bushes point of view:
"Hide, we have an intruder," said person # 1.
"Welcome to my submarine lair. It's long and it's hard and it's full of sea men," said person #2.
"Shut up," person # 1.
"I'm only quoting from like the best movie on earth," person # 2 as they started to get into an attitude.
"How many times do I have to tell you Equilibrium is the best movie on earth," person # 1 said, stating his case.
"Whatever," person # 2 said, doing the "whatever" movement. "You are so slow on the times. I mean like get a new "good" movie because the one you have now (thanks to cj) is just plain "whatever" you want to call it (each time there's a quote around a word, the person is doing the "quote" thing with there hands)
_________________________________________________________________
I started to sit up, now wit a great interest on who was out there. What if they were those flower people we saw before? What if they saw us, and followed us here? (Oh no, looks like Ali's (it feels weird to be typing in the third person) Maybe I'll try singing to them. I thought up a song real fast in my head, and started singing.
"La, La, La, La, dum, dum, dum. Dum de dome, dom de dom. Okay, this isn't working. I'll just have to sell myself (that doesn't sound right, well not in that kind of way, lol) Hello?" Within seconds of me saying "Hello" I felt tons of hands grab me, and tie me up. They place a blindfold over my eyes so I couldn't see who they were, or where they were taking me. "Ok, be careful with the lady. Hey watch your hands." I started saying.
"Sorry," answered mystery man behind the blindfold # 1.
"Take her away," said mystery man behind the blindfold # 2. Great they were taking me somewhere, without me even seeing where I was walking. What a blast this will be!
"Ok, if you taking me away, at least tell me where I'm going. It just so happens I'm blindfolded in the middle of the night, where I can't see anything anyway, and people are taking me somewhere. What fun?" I told all the mystery men behind the blindfold. This feels like a show game.
The Game Show Ali Made Up While The People Were Taking Her Places.!!!!!!!
Game Show Host: The prize behind curtain number 5 is a piece of cloth. That's all you've won.
Person who won: Gee, thanks. I wonder what kind of fun stuff I can do with a piece of cloth.
Game Show Host: Let me give you a hint....NOTHING!!!!! Hahahaha, you're so stupid a piece of cloth is worthless.
Person who won: Oh, that's too bad. I was hoping to sell it on E-Bay and start the bidding at $1,000.
Meanwhile:
Tory, Frodo and Sam were witnessing the same thing Ali was. And they were experiencing something new.
Flashing News:
Gollum is not with anyone. Ali has been captured and thinking about game
shows. She has become very confused and is in an abnormal state.
This message flashed out at them while they were walking thought the woods before they were captured. (I'm acting very odd, while writing this. I'm getting pissed off about window sills, pushing people to their deaths out the window sills, people staring, and dissing contests in a library. So the stuff I'm writing is abnormal.)
No, actually there was not flashing sign there wasn't anything to tell them. From writing that I would have to write from Tory's perspective and I really don't think I can do that. So Tory, you can take the stage again, and tell what happened to you, Frodo and Sam while I got caught.