AN: This chapter isn't what I was gonna put up it's just a little interlude, it might be a little confusing at first but it will make sense with what happens later in the fic. I have a mini plot going for now, it'll last for a few chapters then I'm gonna give another one.
Disclaimer: I actually own everything in this chapter. There isn't a single X-Men charter in it.
Interlude 1
Dear diary,
My baby was born yesterday, they told me it was a little girl. I have a daughter. I knew it would be a girl, I hoped and prayed for a daughter. Now my boys have a little sister. The only problem is, I haven't seen her yet. The doctors took her away as soon as she was born. They said there was some problem, that she needed special attention but they wouldn't tell me why.
I go home tomorrow, they said that I'm perfectly healthy and there is no need for me to stay. I don't want to go home though, not now, not without seeing my baby girl. Surely they would at least let me visit the ward she's been put in, don't they let other parents do that? Why don't they want me to take her home? Is she going to die? If she is don't I have the right to know? I am her mother after all.
There is another woman in my room, she had her baby a few hours before I did and she hasn't seen it either. She's older than me and she doesn't have any other children. I'm worried about her, she hasn't stopped crying since she came back from the delivery room, she keeps asking about her baby, where is he? When will she get to see him?
I must go now, the doctors are coming back, maybe I will finally get to see my little girl now,
Elizabeth.
Ok, what do you think? I'm gonna put one of Elizabeth's (short) diary entries between each chapter unless people don't like it. I might have some input from the other woman, I haven't decided yet. Anyway, let me know if you like this idea.
Samantha: First reviewer hon, thanks. I do try to be original, I hate copying other peoples ideas.
ladychopsticks: Of course I love my li'l reviewer, no puppy dog eyes are necessary. I'm actually a little scared not to do this now, you have me frightened into writing. I have plenty of ideas for this so I'm gonna try not to give up on it, for you, me and the other reviewers.
Caliente: Hiya hon, nice to see you here, I likes familiar reviewers, makes me feel like people like my work. Hmmmm, having Rogue help Scott and Jean get together, I hadn't thought of doing that, good idea though. And yep, Rogue's definitely a sultry little thang in this fic, I've given her the comics attitude AND some of Remy's, it's fun to write her like that, everyone should try it at least once.
Lulu: I'm writing, I'm writing. I love having them switched , it's so much fun.
Purple Haired Freak: Is your hair really purple? Well no Remy in this part, actually no Rogue either, they will be in the next chapter though, I promise.
DKFairy: I din't say what colour Remy's eyes were? Well they're brown, now. Here's an update, probably not what you were expecting bit that's coming too.
Chapter 2 will probably be up tomorrow, Friday at the latest so don't give up on this fic if you didn't like this part,
Mercury Dream
Disclaimer: I actually own everything in this chapter. There isn't a single X-Men charter in it.
Interlude 1
Dear diary,
My baby was born yesterday, they told me it was a little girl. I have a daughter. I knew it would be a girl, I hoped and prayed for a daughter. Now my boys have a little sister. The only problem is, I haven't seen her yet. The doctors took her away as soon as she was born. They said there was some problem, that she needed special attention but they wouldn't tell me why.
I go home tomorrow, they said that I'm perfectly healthy and there is no need for me to stay. I don't want to go home though, not now, not without seeing my baby girl. Surely they would at least let me visit the ward she's been put in, don't they let other parents do that? Why don't they want me to take her home? Is she going to die? If she is don't I have the right to know? I am her mother after all.
There is another woman in my room, she had her baby a few hours before I did and she hasn't seen it either. She's older than me and she doesn't have any other children. I'm worried about her, she hasn't stopped crying since she came back from the delivery room, she keeps asking about her baby, where is he? When will she get to see him?
I must go now, the doctors are coming back, maybe I will finally get to see my little girl now,
Elizabeth.
Ok, what do you think? I'm gonna put one of Elizabeth's (short) diary entries between each chapter unless people don't like it. I might have some input from the other woman, I haven't decided yet. Anyway, let me know if you like this idea.
Samantha: First reviewer hon, thanks. I do try to be original, I hate copying other peoples ideas.
ladychopsticks: Of course I love my li'l reviewer, no puppy dog eyes are necessary. I'm actually a little scared not to do this now, you have me frightened into writing. I have plenty of ideas for this so I'm gonna try not to give up on it, for you, me and the other reviewers.
Caliente: Hiya hon, nice to see you here, I likes familiar reviewers, makes me feel like people like my work. Hmmmm, having Rogue help Scott and Jean get together, I hadn't thought of doing that, good idea though. And yep, Rogue's definitely a sultry little thang in this fic, I've given her the comics attitude AND some of Remy's, it's fun to write her like that, everyone should try it at least once.
Lulu: I'm writing, I'm writing. I love having them switched , it's so much fun.
Purple Haired Freak: Is your hair really purple? Well no Remy in this part, actually no Rogue either, they will be in the next chapter though, I promise.
DKFairy: I din't say what colour Remy's eyes were? Well they're brown, now. Here's an update, probably not what you were expecting bit that's coming too.
Chapter 2 will probably be up tomorrow, Friday at the latest so don't give up on this fic if you didn't like this part,
Mercury Dream