Second Generation Spirit Detective
Disclaimer: I do not own Yuyu Hakusho.
Frank frou freviewers! (Thank you reviewers!) Kegam and I are adding "fr" to everything. It's a long story originating from a conversation about fruit. With that said.Wow, I'm surprised that no one has reviewed to tell me that they think I'm crazy because I almost went insane because of some dotted lines that you can't even see. But they were there, I swear! Okay, well, the "oro" thing is still is up for grabs. Maybe I'll write a Rurouni Kenshin fic and ask them. Anyway, here is the next chapter! Oh yeah, thanks to everybody who reviewed! And Toki1, I tried to make this one longer, but I seem to be long-chapter-challenged.
Chapter 18: A Newfound Weapon
"Some Good Samaritan you are," Yo grumbled, picking himself up off the ground. He looked over at Ryo who was ignoring him. He stood on tip-toe to reach her height and waved his hand in front of her face. She scowled and slapped his hand out of the way.
"Move your hand you idiot! Kitako's in trouble!" she snapped, not removing her eyes from the awful scene in front of her. Yo looked over at the fighting platform and instantly saw why Ryo had dropped him.
Another supernatural scream echoed in Kitako's ears. She couldn't hear anything over the unbearable wailing, and could see nothing except the spirits surrounding her, even though they were a translucent green. To make matters worse almost all of her Spirit Energy had been eaten away by the shrieking spirits. The ghosts pressed against her body, attempting to smother her. Half suffocating, Kitako opened her mouth and tried to take a breath. By doing so she swallowed one of the spirits. It was icy cold and slimy as it slid down her throat, the screeching gurgled in her esophagus. She doubled over when it hit her stomach. This was not good.
Ryoko stood next to her smug-looking sister. It disgusted her how her teammate could just stand there, happily enjoying the demise of a thirteen- year-old girl. Ryoko's eyes softened slightly in sympathy. She hoped that the girl would get out of Keogha's cage of energy eating demon spirits; otherwise this could get messy.
For a moment Kitako thought she was going to throw up, die, have her stomach explode, or maybe even throw up her exploding stomach and then die. She wasn't experiencing any real pain, just an agonizing feeling of nausea. Surprisingly the feeling she felt next wasn't her lunch down her front, it was an incredible boost of Spirit Energy. Involuntarily, her Spirit Sword formed in her palm, or at least what appeared to be her Spirit Sword. This thing was a crystal clear blue, its markings similar to those of the spirit she had just digested. Suddenly it all made sense. This weapon was created from the soul she had just eaten, which was loaded with her Spirit Energy, purified by her body or, y'know, something like that. Maybe this thing, which, thank god, was not yelling, could destroy the rest of them. It was worth a shot. She swung the weapon over her head, successfully destroying five of the demon spirits. They faded away into nothing above her.
Keogha's eyes widened with shock as she saw her opponent chop off the top of her defenses with some glowing blue sword. She hacked a hole through the side of it and clambered out, wielding the icy blue weapon expertly.
"WHOA!" Hina shouted animatedly into her microphone. "KITAKO SLASHES THROUGH THE CREEPY GREEN THINGS WITH A BIG BLUE SWORD! LET'S SEE KEOGHA LOUNGE ABOUT ON THE FIGHTING PLATFORM NOW!"
Keogha threw a dirty look at the referee and groped for the sword she wore on her belt. She held it shakily in front of her, trying to conceal her fear. She needed more time to summon more demon spirits, not that they'd be of much use now that Kitako had a weapon that could destroy them. She looked over and saw that Kitako had destroyed all but two of the demon spirits. Keogha cursed under her breath and stepped into a fighting stance.
Kitako spun around and speared the last spirit with her sword. It gave one last pathetic wail and faded away into nothing.
Cheers rose from the crowd.
"Alright Kitako!" Kyoko shouted from the sidelines.
Shouts of joy erupted from the Spirit Energy cage in the stands. Sulera stood up, her eyes flashing.
"IT'S NOT OVER YET! SILENCE YOURSELVES OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!"
As she spoke she angrily hovered over to a random outline and held her hand out threateningly over the unlucky individual's chest. Kitako squeaked when she saw it was her father's.
"Dad!" she yelled as Sulera's hand moved towards Kuwabara's outline. She ran forward as far as the fighting platform allowed.
Seeing her opportunity, Keogha rushed sword drawn at Kitako as quietly and swiftly as she could.
Sulera's hand collided with Kuwabara's chest and he doubled over and fell to the ground. In the same instant Keogha's sword entered Kitako's stomach. She tumbled off the fighting platform and lay bleeding on the grass.
Man, that turned out differently than I planned. Frease freview! (Please review!)
Disclaimer: I do not own Yuyu Hakusho.
Frank frou freviewers! (Thank you reviewers!) Kegam and I are adding "fr" to everything. It's a long story originating from a conversation about fruit. With that said.Wow, I'm surprised that no one has reviewed to tell me that they think I'm crazy because I almost went insane because of some dotted lines that you can't even see. But they were there, I swear! Okay, well, the "oro" thing is still is up for grabs. Maybe I'll write a Rurouni Kenshin fic and ask them. Anyway, here is the next chapter! Oh yeah, thanks to everybody who reviewed! And Toki1, I tried to make this one longer, but I seem to be long-chapter-challenged.
Chapter 18: A Newfound Weapon
"Some Good Samaritan you are," Yo grumbled, picking himself up off the ground. He looked over at Ryo who was ignoring him. He stood on tip-toe to reach her height and waved his hand in front of her face. She scowled and slapped his hand out of the way.
"Move your hand you idiot! Kitako's in trouble!" she snapped, not removing her eyes from the awful scene in front of her. Yo looked over at the fighting platform and instantly saw why Ryo had dropped him.
Another supernatural scream echoed in Kitako's ears. She couldn't hear anything over the unbearable wailing, and could see nothing except the spirits surrounding her, even though they were a translucent green. To make matters worse almost all of her Spirit Energy had been eaten away by the shrieking spirits. The ghosts pressed against her body, attempting to smother her. Half suffocating, Kitako opened her mouth and tried to take a breath. By doing so she swallowed one of the spirits. It was icy cold and slimy as it slid down her throat, the screeching gurgled in her esophagus. She doubled over when it hit her stomach. This was not good.
Ryoko stood next to her smug-looking sister. It disgusted her how her teammate could just stand there, happily enjoying the demise of a thirteen- year-old girl. Ryoko's eyes softened slightly in sympathy. She hoped that the girl would get out of Keogha's cage of energy eating demon spirits; otherwise this could get messy.
For a moment Kitako thought she was going to throw up, die, have her stomach explode, or maybe even throw up her exploding stomach and then die. She wasn't experiencing any real pain, just an agonizing feeling of nausea. Surprisingly the feeling she felt next wasn't her lunch down her front, it was an incredible boost of Spirit Energy. Involuntarily, her Spirit Sword formed in her palm, or at least what appeared to be her Spirit Sword. This thing was a crystal clear blue, its markings similar to those of the spirit she had just digested. Suddenly it all made sense. This weapon was created from the soul she had just eaten, which was loaded with her Spirit Energy, purified by her body or, y'know, something like that. Maybe this thing, which, thank god, was not yelling, could destroy the rest of them. It was worth a shot. She swung the weapon over her head, successfully destroying five of the demon spirits. They faded away into nothing above her.
Keogha's eyes widened with shock as she saw her opponent chop off the top of her defenses with some glowing blue sword. She hacked a hole through the side of it and clambered out, wielding the icy blue weapon expertly.
"WHOA!" Hina shouted animatedly into her microphone. "KITAKO SLASHES THROUGH THE CREEPY GREEN THINGS WITH A BIG BLUE SWORD! LET'S SEE KEOGHA LOUNGE ABOUT ON THE FIGHTING PLATFORM NOW!"
Keogha threw a dirty look at the referee and groped for the sword she wore on her belt. She held it shakily in front of her, trying to conceal her fear. She needed more time to summon more demon spirits, not that they'd be of much use now that Kitako had a weapon that could destroy them. She looked over and saw that Kitako had destroyed all but two of the demon spirits. Keogha cursed under her breath and stepped into a fighting stance.
Kitako spun around and speared the last spirit with her sword. It gave one last pathetic wail and faded away into nothing.
Cheers rose from the crowd.
"Alright Kitako!" Kyoko shouted from the sidelines.
Shouts of joy erupted from the Spirit Energy cage in the stands. Sulera stood up, her eyes flashing.
"IT'S NOT OVER YET! SILENCE YOURSELVES OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!"
As she spoke she angrily hovered over to a random outline and held her hand out threateningly over the unlucky individual's chest. Kitako squeaked when she saw it was her father's.
"Dad!" she yelled as Sulera's hand moved towards Kuwabara's outline. She ran forward as far as the fighting platform allowed.
Seeing her opportunity, Keogha rushed sword drawn at Kitako as quietly and swiftly as she could.
Sulera's hand collided with Kuwabara's chest and he doubled over and fell to the ground. In the same instant Keogha's sword entered Kitako's stomach. She tumbled off the fighting platform and lay bleeding on the grass.
Man, that turned out differently than I planned. Frease freview! (Please review!)