Ok.this is my first fan-fiction!! I am so nervous!! And I still can't see
if chapter one has been accepted yet!!! Aaah!! Please review!! I need to
know if my writing is any good...(probably not but I'm trying my best here)
ok well.please review.this chapter will be more interesting than the
last...promise (more Jack Sparrow ^_^) btw.I own NOTHING that is
recognizable from the movie Pirates of the Caribbean
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Lynn awoke to the most beautiful sunrise she had ever seen. She quickly got dressed and got to work. She scrubbed like a maniac; determined to make the whole ship shine like it never had before. She used fresh clean water and the best soap she could find. She scrubbed harder than she ever had in her life. She wanted to become a worthy member of the crew.and secretly ..she wished for Jack to be proud of her and see her as more than a deck scrubber.
As she was kneeling on the floor scrubbing; she felt someone behind her, it was Jack. She turned around and said "Hello Captain." Jack walked around; inspecting the floor, seeing that there was nothing to criticize about Lynn's cleaning skills. Lynn was getting rather nervous as he walked around her. She was nervous just having him in the same room as her.
Jack felt so awkward. Which is not a familiar feeling to him, after all he is Captain Jack Sparrow, but he couldn't help feeling a bit strange around this girl. She looked at him differently- with a sort of innocence and admiration in her eyes. he liked it.he liked it a lot.
"Well lass, it seems yer doin' quite a job on me ship. Now let's see how good yer cookin' is" he laughed. Lynn smiled; he thought she was doing a good job. Her heart was light. Then she thought - come on Lynn! He's a pirate! And not just any pirate-Jack sparrow! Your captain! You cannot have a crush on your captain- that's just wrong! Get him out of your mind and just do what you're told! You stupid girl! Little did she know.Jack was thinking something quite similar.
The girl is a lady! She's a beautiful young lady and you're not worth a farthing! Why do you even talk to her.she's just the deck scrubber.come one man! Get the girl out of yer mind and just steer the ship, savvy?
Lynn made the finest meal the crew had ever tasted. Everyone was impressed and praised her marvelous cooking. It was certainly a drastic change from Gibbs' old gruel.
Jack was in his cabin, drinking rum as usual, when he heard a knock on the door. It was Lynn with a tray of the food she had made that night. He hadn't eaten dinner that night; he was thinking about something or rather.someone.a certain deck scrubber.
"Hello captain, I didn't see you at dinner this evening, so I thought I'd bring you your supper," Lynn said sweetly. Jack thought it was very nice of her to think about him. No one had ever cared if he starved to death or not and here she was, this beautiful young lady, standing there.caring about him. He was not used so much kindness.
'Thank ye Ly-err. Miss Branson" " You may call me Lynn if you like captain." " Oh, alright then Lynn- you can call me Jack if ye like, "he said. Lynn thought her name sounded like heaven when he said it.
She placed the tray on the table and when she looked up she noticed he was staring at her. She looked straight into his eyes and they stared at each other for about a minute or so and were starting to get rather close.but Lynn came back to her senses and left the room. Jack was so confused. He didn't know what had just happened. All he knew at this point was that he was feeling things he never had before. When he looked at her he felt like there was electricity inside of him, waking him up inside.
Lynn's mind was racing. She knew she was falling for someone that would never return her feelings. She couldn't slip up and have moments like that in front of him. She needed to control herself. Little did she know, Jack Sparrow wasn't one to give up on a girl so easily.
~*~*~*~*~*A Few Weeks Later*~*~*~*~*~
Lynn had been working hard for the past few weeks. And every night she took the captain's dinner and every night they would stare at each other-almost kiss- then she would leave, but tonight went a bit differently.
She brought in his supper. And this time, instead of just staring at her, he asked her to join him. Lynn sat with Jack and they talked for hours and hours. They both laughed and had the best conversation of their lives, drinking rum and sharing their deepest fears and secrets.
" Now don't laugh.but I am terrified of the dark sometimes.I feel like someone is coming after me!!' said Lynn (drunk) nervously. Jack burst out laughing. "Yer afraid of ...the DARK *laughs uncontrollably* " Jack couldn't help but laugh. " Ha Ha, very funny "Captain I'm afraid of spiders!!" said Lynn laughing. "Hey now! Alright, I'll strike a bargain with you, I wont tell anyone about your fear of the dark if you never mention my fear of spiders, savvy?" " Alright then. I promise Jack" "Good" said Jack They had started staring at each other again hypnotized. Jack leaned in and wrapped his arms around her waist. He kissed her. Lynn had her arms round his neck. She played with the little trinkets he had woven into his hair. They continued kissing enjoying each other's company more than anything else in the world.
Lynn awoke to the most beautiful sunrise she had ever seen. She quickly got dressed and got to work. She scrubbed like a maniac; determined to make the whole ship shine like it never had before. She used fresh clean water and the best soap she could find. She scrubbed harder than she ever had in her life. She wanted to become a worthy member of the crew.and secretly ..she wished for Jack to be proud of her and see her as more than a deck scrubber.
As she was kneeling on the floor scrubbing; she felt someone behind her, it was Jack. She turned around and said "Hello Captain." Jack walked around; inspecting the floor, seeing that there was nothing to criticize about Lynn's cleaning skills. Lynn was getting rather nervous as he walked around her. She was nervous just having him in the same room as her.
Jack felt so awkward. Which is not a familiar feeling to him, after all he is Captain Jack Sparrow, but he couldn't help feeling a bit strange around this girl. She looked at him differently- with a sort of innocence and admiration in her eyes. he liked it.he liked it a lot.
"Well lass, it seems yer doin' quite a job on me ship. Now let's see how good yer cookin' is" he laughed. Lynn smiled; he thought she was doing a good job. Her heart was light. Then she thought - come on Lynn! He's a pirate! And not just any pirate-Jack sparrow! Your captain! You cannot have a crush on your captain- that's just wrong! Get him out of your mind and just do what you're told! You stupid girl! Little did she know.Jack was thinking something quite similar.
The girl is a lady! She's a beautiful young lady and you're not worth a farthing! Why do you even talk to her.she's just the deck scrubber.come one man! Get the girl out of yer mind and just steer the ship, savvy?
Lynn made the finest meal the crew had ever tasted. Everyone was impressed and praised her marvelous cooking. It was certainly a drastic change from Gibbs' old gruel.
Jack was in his cabin, drinking rum as usual, when he heard a knock on the door. It was Lynn with a tray of the food she had made that night. He hadn't eaten dinner that night; he was thinking about something or rather.someone.a certain deck scrubber.
"Hello captain, I didn't see you at dinner this evening, so I thought I'd bring you your supper," Lynn said sweetly. Jack thought it was very nice of her to think about him. No one had ever cared if he starved to death or not and here she was, this beautiful young lady, standing there.caring about him. He was not used so much kindness.
'Thank ye Ly-err. Miss Branson" " You may call me Lynn if you like captain." " Oh, alright then Lynn- you can call me Jack if ye like, "he said. Lynn thought her name sounded like heaven when he said it.
She placed the tray on the table and when she looked up she noticed he was staring at her. She looked straight into his eyes and they stared at each other for about a minute or so and were starting to get rather close.but Lynn came back to her senses and left the room. Jack was so confused. He didn't know what had just happened. All he knew at this point was that he was feeling things he never had before. When he looked at her he felt like there was electricity inside of him, waking him up inside.
Lynn's mind was racing. She knew she was falling for someone that would never return her feelings. She couldn't slip up and have moments like that in front of him. She needed to control herself. Little did she know, Jack Sparrow wasn't one to give up on a girl so easily.
~*~*~*~*~*A Few Weeks Later*~*~*~*~*~
Lynn had been working hard for the past few weeks. And every night she took the captain's dinner and every night they would stare at each other-almost kiss- then she would leave, but tonight went a bit differently.
She brought in his supper. And this time, instead of just staring at her, he asked her to join him. Lynn sat with Jack and they talked for hours and hours. They both laughed and had the best conversation of their lives, drinking rum and sharing their deepest fears and secrets.
" Now don't laugh.but I am terrified of the dark sometimes.I feel like someone is coming after me!!' said Lynn (drunk) nervously. Jack burst out laughing. "Yer afraid of ...the DARK *laughs uncontrollably* " Jack couldn't help but laugh. " Ha Ha, very funny "Captain I'm afraid of spiders!!" said Lynn laughing. "Hey now! Alright, I'll strike a bargain with you, I wont tell anyone about your fear of the dark if you never mention my fear of spiders, savvy?" " Alright then. I promise Jack" "Good" said Jack They had started staring at each other again hypnotized. Jack leaned in and wrapped his arms around her waist. He kissed her. Lynn had her arms round his neck. She played with the little trinkets he had woven into his hair. They continued kissing enjoying each other's company more than anything else in the world.