omg!! I was so excited when I saw all the reviews!! Thank u everyone!! I
feel so much better now!! Yeah, i admit the whole san Juan thing was really
random but I wanted to leave it sort of like.cliffhanger-ish or
something.ok im just weird that way... lol, and I reviewed my own story
because I had absolutely no idea how anything worked the first day so I was
like.AAHH!!!...im really dumb sometimes.common sense was down the toilet
that day.. Lol and i couldn't take that off so, there it is lol. Im such a
freak.but that's ok lol Elentari II : you're right, I could be a whole lot
better, but I'm really just starting with the whole "short story " thing.
I'm more used to writing poetry and it usually comes out better than this.
Maybe not the best, but I can do some things. I hope u don't think I'm too
awful. I really don't think this story is very good myself. But I'm trying
to make it a little better. I'm sorry if my writing has disappointed you.
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Steven San Juan was a sneaky devil. He was just lucky that Lynn got quite a bump on the head when she fell. If she weren't unconscious, he definitely would have been dead. He tied her up and took her to an island. She didn't wake up for a long time and he was beginning to worry he'd killed her. He didn't, but when she woke up, all hell broke loose.
" GET ME OUT OF THESE ROPES YOU HORRIBLE LITTLE EARTHWORM!!!" Lynn was screaming, kicking, and wriggling like a maniac. She had a wild look in her eye.
"Now, Now my love, you must act like a lady, " said San Juan mockingly.
" I AM NOT YOUR LOVE, YOU SPINELESS--" San Juan had gagged her. She screamed anyway.
"Now, my love, ladies shouldn't scream that way." He traced the outline of her face and gradually moved his hand lower. She wanted to kill him if it was the last thing she did. She promised herself she would see him dead for this.
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Jack was worried sick. He had no idea where Lynn may have fallen. When he looked for her she was lost in the storm. He knew she was alive somewhere. He felt it. He would find her if it was the last thing he did.
"Cap'n?" Gibbs was at his side; always a true friend that was there when you needed him. " Cap'n are ye alrigh'? " "Gibbs, what would you say, if I told you I wanted to go looking for Lynn?" said Jack. " I'd say ye were daft Cap'n, but I'd help ye look" said Gibbs truthfully. " Alright then. Tell the crew we will be searching every island that we come across. I noticed that the little boat San Juan was keeping tied to the Pearl is missing. The rope that was holding that boat was cut by a knife, Gibbs--I know it. " Gibbs knew it too, but he just did as he was told. The way San Juan had slashed the ropes made it obvious someone had cut them. The ends were neatly cut, not jagged as if ripped off by the force of a storm; not that it was likely that a storm could rip rope anyway. But the real truth was- Jack saw San Juan clutching Lynn and he didn't like it. He knew he had something to do with this.
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Lynn felt so vile. She had been raped and beaten by a man she thought was probably insane. He was holding her; fast asleep now, and she was crying. But as she cried, she noticed his sword not too far away. If she wriggled in the right way, she could roll over to it and maybe untie herself. But what if he woke up? What would he do to her? Would he kill her? Why were they on this stupid island? Where was this island anyway? Lynn immediately wished she had been awake during the journey. But now wasn't the time for regret. Now was the time to check just how soundly asleep San Juan was. She wriggled a little. He didn't even move. She wriggled a little more- still no movement. She was finally out of his grasp. "O.K." she thought, "step one is over, now I have to roll over to the sword." The rolling portion of her escape plan turned out to be the most difficult. She rolled over the sword so many times she lost count after six. She had to be quiet and quick without making a sound. She finally got to the sword. She grasped it between her hands and cut herself and the ropes at the same time. But she didn't care-she was free, almost free anyway.
She commandeered the little boat and went off, leaving Steven San Juan to die on that island. He knew she had escaped. He knew everything. He laughed hysterically, rolling around in the sand. He was a scary sight indeed. Lynn managed to find her way to Tortuga. She knew Jack would go there eventually and she would go back with him. She waited three days in Tortuga. She sold the boat and that bought her food and a place to stay. She waited at the port each day, looking for any sign of the Black Pearl. When she saw it, she felt her heart rise almost to her throat. She wanted to go swimming to it just to reach it faster. Jack spotted her immediately.
"Lynn??!! " She ran up to him and hugged him as soon as she saw him, holding him as tightly as she dared. Jack hugged her back. " Lynn, I thought you were. I thought" he couldn't bring himself to say it. " Shh, don't worry Jack, I'm here now." She placed her finger over his mouth, then, kissed him lightly. He was thoroughly confused over her drastic change in attitude but didn't want to argue. He did, however, notice a fresh, long scar that ran from her right hand down to her forearm.
"What's this, luv?" asked Jack. " I'll tell you about that later, I think the rest of the crew would like to know why we are standing in their way so close to each other." Lynn blushed. The crew was standing there the whole time staring at them, waiting for them to move first of all, and shocked that Lynn had come back and that she was holding on to the captain that way. They knew better than to ask questions right in front of the captain, but they did greet her while they rushed to find all the rum and whores they could in Tortuga. Jack took her to his cabin and set her down on the bed. He noticed that her dress was ripped in a few places and that her cheeks had tearstains on them. He didn't know what had happened to her.
Lynn wanted to stay with Jack forever. She realized she had been stupid before. She knew she loved him, no matter what. He was a pirate, so what. She didn't care. She loved him for how kind and gentle he was when he was with her. For his cleverness and his adventurous nature. He may be a little rough around the edges but he is a good man. She loved him and she would never be stupid again.
"Lynn? What happened to you? How did you get that scar, luv?" Tears welled up in her eyes. It was difficult to relive the pain San Juan made her go through, but she told Jack everything. " That filthy, slimy, mangy ass!! I'm telling you now luv, that man won't live to see another day. Do u remember where that island is, luv? I'll kill him myself." " It's a day from Tortuga going east. But I don't want to talk about him Jack, I ant to talk to you about something else." "Go ahead luv, I'm listening." "Alright, I owe you an apology and an explanation for my rudeness before. I'm sorry I was so mean to you, I was foolish and I promise I'll never be so horrible to you again. As for my explanation, well, the truth is. I am hopelessly in love with you Jack Sparrow, and I was afraid that you thought of me as another whore and I managed to almost fool myself into thinking I didn't really love you, but being away from you for five days, in the company of a madman made me realize that I did. If you don't feel the same way it's alright, but at least I've spoken my mind to you." She was a nervous wreck and she knew he couldn't possibly feel the same.could he? "well, luv, I see that took quite a bit of courage from ye, but- truth is I do feel the same, I-I err. I...I lovsdd" he trailed off. The last words were inaudible. "I'm sorry, I couldn't hear those last few words, could you repeat them please?" Lynn knew what he was trying to say to her. She was the happiest woman in the world but she wanted to hear him say it. " I loveloele" he mumbled again. " Jack, I can't hear you, speak clearly sweetie." " I love you, alright! I love you!" he grew a little impatient but was really quite proud to say it. As soon as he uttered those words, his lips became quite occupied. Lynn wanted to tease him a bit, so she pulled away and said, " I'm going to draw myself a bath, would you mind undoing my dress please?" He already knew her little game; he undid the dress and she drew her bath. A little while later, Jack walked in stark naked and Lynn thought he had gone mad. He slipped into the tub with her.
"ye missed a spot." he said jokingly. " Jack Sparrow, you are positively mad." Lynn laughed. They each had a beautiful, passionate night. And for the first time in his life, Jack Sparrow woke up with someone he truly loved by his side. He never wanted to let her go. As for Lynn, she was deeply in love with Sparrow and she wanted to be there with him forever.
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ok, cute ending!! * sigh * .hope it lasts...mwahahahahha hope everybody liked that one!! ^_^
Steven San Juan was a sneaky devil. He was just lucky that Lynn got quite a bump on the head when she fell. If she weren't unconscious, he definitely would have been dead. He tied her up and took her to an island. She didn't wake up for a long time and he was beginning to worry he'd killed her. He didn't, but when she woke up, all hell broke loose.
" GET ME OUT OF THESE ROPES YOU HORRIBLE LITTLE EARTHWORM!!!" Lynn was screaming, kicking, and wriggling like a maniac. She had a wild look in her eye.
"Now, Now my love, you must act like a lady, " said San Juan mockingly.
" I AM NOT YOUR LOVE, YOU SPINELESS--" San Juan had gagged her. She screamed anyway.
"Now, my love, ladies shouldn't scream that way." He traced the outline of her face and gradually moved his hand lower. She wanted to kill him if it was the last thing she did. She promised herself she would see him dead for this.
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Jack was worried sick. He had no idea where Lynn may have fallen. When he looked for her she was lost in the storm. He knew she was alive somewhere. He felt it. He would find her if it was the last thing he did.
"Cap'n?" Gibbs was at his side; always a true friend that was there when you needed him. " Cap'n are ye alrigh'? " "Gibbs, what would you say, if I told you I wanted to go looking for Lynn?" said Jack. " I'd say ye were daft Cap'n, but I'd help ye look" said Gibbs truthfully. " Alright then. Tell the crew we will be searching every island that we come across. I noticed that the little boat San Juan was keeping tied to the Pearl is missing. The rope that was holding that boat was cut by a knife, Gibbs--I know it. " Gibbs knew it too, but he just did as he was told. The way San Juan had slashed the ropes made it obvious someone had cut them. The ends were neatly cut, not jagged as if ripped off by the force of a storm; not that it was likely that a storm could rip rope anyway. But the real truth was- Jack saw San Juan clutching Lynn and he didn't like it. He knew he had something to do with this.
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Lynn felt so vile. She had been raped and beaten by a man she thought was probably insane. He was holding her; fast asleep now, and she was crying. But as she cried, she noticed his sword not too far away. If she wriggled in the right way, she could roll over to it and maybe untie herself. But what if he woke up? What would he do to her? Would he kill her? Why were they on this stupid island? Where was this island anyway? Lynn immediately wished she had been awake during the journey. But now wasn't the time for regret. Now was the time to check just how soundly asleep San Juan was. She wriggled a little. He didn't even move. She wriggled a little more- still no movement. She was finally out of his grasp. "O.K." she thought, "step one is over, now I have to roll over to the sword." The rolling portion of her escape plan turned out to be the most difficult. She rolled over the sword so many times she lost count after six. She had to be quiet and quick without making a sound. She finally got to the sword. She grasped it between her hands and cut herself and the ropes at the same time. But she didn't care-she was free, almost free anyway.
She commandeered the little boat and went off, leaving Steven San Juan to die on that island. He knew she had escaped. He knew everything. He laughed hysterically, rolling around in the sand. He was a scary sight indeed. Lynn managed to find her way to Tortuga. She knew Jack would go there eventually and she would go back with him. She waited three days in Tortuga. She sold the boat and that bought her food and a place to stay. She waited at the port each day, looking for any sign of the Black Pearl. When she saw it, she felt her heart rise almost to her throat. She wanted to go swimming to it just to reach it faster. Jack spotted her immediately.
"Lynn??!! " She ran up to him and hugged him as soon as she saw him, holding him as tightly as she dared. Jack hugged her back. " Lynn, I thought you were. I thought" he couldn't bring himself to say it. " Shh, don't worry Jack, I'm here now." She placed her finger over his mouth, then, kissed him lightly. He was thoroughly confused over her drastic change in attitude but didn't want to argue. He did, however, notice a fresh, long scar that ran from her right hand down to her forearm.
"What's this, luv?" asked Jack. " I'll tell you about that later, I think the rest of the crew would like to know why we are standing in their way so close to each other." Lynn blushed. The crew was standing there the whole time staring at them, waiting for them to move first of all, and shocked that Lynn had come back and that she was holding on to the captain that way. They knew better than to ask questions right in front of the captain, but they did greet her while they rushed to find all the rum and whores they could in Tortuga. Jack took her to his cabin and set her down on the bed. He noticed that her dress was ripped in a few places and that her cheeks had tearstains on them. He didn't know what had happened to her.
Lynn wanted to stay with Jack forever. She realized she had been stupid before. She knew she loved him, no matter what. He was a pirate, so what. She didn't care. She loved him for how kind and gentle he was when he was with her. For his cleverness and his adventurous nature. He may be a little rough around the edges but he is a good man. She loved him and she would never be stupid again.
"Lynn? What happened to you? How did you get that scar, luv?" Tears welled up in her eyes. It was difficult to relive the pain San Juan made her go through, but she told Jack everything. " That filthy, slimy, mangy ass!! I'm telling you now luv, that man won't live to see another day. Do u remember where that island is, luv? I'll kill him myself." " It's a day from Tortuga going east. But I don't want to talk about him Jack, I ant to talk to you about something else." "Go ahead luv, I'm listening." "Alright, I owe you an apology and an explanation for my rudeness before. I'm sorry I was so mean to you, I was foolish and I promise I'll never be so horrible to you again. As for my explanation, well, the truth is. I am hopelessly in love with you Jack Sparrow, and I was afraid that you thought of me as another whore and I managed to almost fool myself into thinking I didn't really love you, but being away from you for five days, in the company of a madman made me realize that I did. If you don't feel the same way it's alright, but at least I've spoken my mind to you." She was a nervous wreck and she knew he couldn't possibly feel the same.could he? "well, luv, I see that took quite a bit of courage from ye, but- truth is I do feel the same, I-I err. I...I lovsdd" he trailed off. The last words were inaudible. "I'm sorry, I couldn't hear those last few words, could you repeat them please?" Lynn knew what he was trying to say to her. She was the happiest woman in the world but she wanted to hear him say it. " I loveloele" he mumbled again. " Jack, I can't hear you, speak clearly sweetie." " I love you, alright! I love you!" he grew a little impatient but was really quite proud to say it. As soon as he uttered those words, his lips became quite occupied. Lynn wanted to tease him a bit, so she pulled away and said, " I'm going to draw myself a bath, would you mind undoing my dress please?" He already knew her little game; he undid the dress and she drew her bath. A little while later, Jack walked in stark naked and Lynn thought he had gone mad. He slipped into the tub with her.
"ye missed a spot." he said jokingly. " Jack Sparrow, you are positively mad." Lynn laughed. They each had a beautiful, passionate night. And for the first time in his life, Jack Sparrow woke up with someone he truly loved by his side. He never wanted to let her go. As for Lynn, she was deeply in love with Sparrow and she wanted to be there with him forever.
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ok, cute ending!! * sigh * .hope it lasts...mwahahahahha hope everybody liked that one!! ^_^