Jim's Folly
This is my brother's interpretation of the story. The first few lines are my own…he knows the storyline concerning the admiral, Simon and Andrew. A few minutes ago he learned of Mark. The last line I wrote involved Raven paying "acute attention." From then on, the story is taken by my adorable thirteen year old brother.
Chapter Thirty
Raven stood, antsy, at the boat dock while she waited for the next arrival.
Jim had decided to not come and let her rendezvous with her brother be a family moment. He'd have a chance to meet Mark eventually.
Raven bit her lip, twiddled her thumbs and paced impatiently as people came off the ship.
She studied each one, even the ones that clearly weren't humans.
It was when a tall, dark and handsome man stepped off the ship that she paid acute attention.
He was thin, tall hansome and resembled a local fisherman. He sported a black hoodie and a navy blue touque. His face contorted with pain at the sight of the African elephant. Then Mark said:
"Dude," he said flashing his sister a 'full body scan' "you've got monster thighs!"
"……………………………................................................" Raven stared glumly into his eyes. The moonlight wasn't present so the sun illuminated his blue-hazel eyes. He had dark skin like a tan that could only mean one thing.
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Sargent Michael Moreton stood fixed over the dead professor's body that lay displayed on the floor for the students to see. His body was dark and decayed.
"Well, it looks like this guy's monster thigh's couldn't savbe him from the bullet that shot right through his hammer bone and into then his brain.
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Andrew sat crossed-legged on the floor licking a bowl of slop! He pointed to his dead maggot friend on the floor. Raven stood over him with a vacuumm cleaner. Her eye's sprinkled with the light coming from the ceiling of the kitchen.
"Chu." Is all that was said.'
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Mark stared with his hazel-blue eyes into raven. He hovered a good 12"-1 foot over her.
"Let's go home." Raven whispered into the fresh cold air that bit at their nosies and tosies!
Now being in the car, emotions flew!
"Where have you been all these years?" Raven asked in tune to the music that played on the radio. Mark opened the glove box (being in the passenger seat) and said:
"Dude, it's still here, M.T" He said as he pulled out an old tuna sandwich, broke the seal and bit into it.
"Wow, it sure did keep all these 6 years eh?" Mark asked.
"Yeah…sure. Do that, Punk mongo!" Raven answered staring ahead of her.
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*Later*
Raven said to Simon, stop being mean and lets get back together happily!
'Okay! Thanks. Bye!" Said Mark!
THE END!