Ok this chapter is like mushy or at least I think so and I can't beleive I wrote it but it seemed appropriate so uh enjoy?
Spark:She does not own SSBM, she does, however own Arielle Andrea and Krystle!
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"Hmmmm?"Marth snapped upright, Peach layed in her bed. Marth had fallen asleep in the lounge chair next to the bed and was awakened by her groaning. Everyone else had left 3 days ago when Peach had first lost conciousness.
Peach's eyes suddenly shot open she blinked and cleared her vision. She mumbled something still in a dazed state and tried to sit up. Marth kneeled next to the bed and gently pushed her back down.
"You should rest"he said gently.
"What happened?" she whispered.
"It's OK" he said "Ganondorf's dead. She smiled slightly.
"Guess we won't be bothered by him anymore"
"Right"he quietly responded, as she fell back into a deep content sleep.
A week went by, and Peach was actually back to normal besides a few little gashes and cuts. Marth and Peach stood in front of the front door with the sun shining on them from the sky light.
"Well"began Marth nervously.
"Yeah"said Peach a lump forming in her throat "I...I guess this...is goodbye"
"Yeah I guess"said Marth sadly.
"Oh Marth, I thank you so much"she said tears leaking from her eyes "I'm going to miss you, but Altea needs you"She finished trying to regain her composure.
"I'm gonna miss you too"he said with as little emotion in his voice as possible. Suddenly their lips met, and they lingered there for a moment or two before Peach pulled back and both blushed deeply.
"I...I need to go Altea really does need me"said Marth sheepishly opening the door.
"Goodbye...Marth" she whispered tears filling her eyes...and the door closed.
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Well that's it...
Spark:you mean this is DONE!! MY TOURTURE IS OVER!!
CG13:of course your tourture is not over but yes sadly this is REALLY the end...T_T well I would apprecate it if you guys would rate me K
Spelling:over/10
Grammer:over /10
Plot:over /10
Diolog:over /10
and
Over All Quality:over/20
yeah thankx for all your support and if you have any ideas for a sequel uh E-mail me I'm all ears K. THANK-Q all for the encouragement, and a special thankx to RavenGhost because you've been there for me scince the begining(by the way Peach and Marth had stunt doubles for that kissing scene ^-~)! yeah well this is Crockgirl13 sighning off.
Spark:She does not own SSBM, she does, however own Arielle Andrea and Krystle!
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"Hmmmm?"Marth snapped upright, Peach layed in her bed. Marth had fallen asleep in the lounge chair next to the bed and was awakened by her groaning. Everyone else had left 3 days ago when Peach had first lost conciousness.
Peach's eyes suddenly shot open she blinked and cleared her vision. She mumbled something still in a dazed state and tried to sit up. Marth kneeled next to the bed and gently pushed her back down.
"You should rest"he said gently.
"What happened?" she whispered.
"It's OK" he said "Ganondorf's dead. She smiled slightly.
"Guess we won't be bothered by him anymore"
"Right"he quietly responded, as she fell back into a deep content sleep.
A week went by, and Peach was actually back to normal besides a few little gashes and cuts. Marth and Peach stood in front of the front door with the sun shining on them from the sky light.
"Well"began Marth nervously.
"Yeah"said Peach a lump forming in her throat "I...I guess this...is goodbye"
"Yeah I guess"said Marth sadly.
"Oh Marth, I thank you so much"she said tears leaking from her eyes "I'm going to miss you, but Altea needs you"She finished trying to regain her composure.
"I'm gonna miss you too"he said with as little emotion in his voice as possible. Suddenly their lips met, and they lingered there for a moment or two before Peach pulled back and both blushed deeply.
"I...I need to go Altea really does need me"said Marth sheepishly opening the door.
"Goodbye...Marth" she whispered tears filling her eyes...and the door closed.
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Well that's it...
Spark:you mean this is DONE!! MY TOURTURE IS OVER!!
CG13:of course your tourture is not over but yes sadly this is REALLY the end...T_T well I would apprecate it if you guys would rate me K
Spelling:over/10
Grammer:over /10
Plot:over /10
Diolog:over /10
and
Over All Quality:over/20
yeah thankx for all your support and if you have any ideas for a sequel uh E-mail me I'm all ears K. THANK-Q all for the encouragement, and a special thankx to RavenGhost because you've been there for me scince the begining(by the way Peach and Marth had stunt doubles for that kissing scene ^-~)! yeah well this is Crockgirl13 sighning off.