Well, this was seemingly done quite well at first, but after careful examination, I found it wasn't that great. I didn't like this book to start with, so it was a chore to write, and it shows. I didn't adapt the original very well, and it is all over the place, so forgive me.

Book six, the Capture, is really good. This one had some of Sam's Arrogance show, but overall didn't work very well. Oh well, I have learned from my mistakes. So review, tell me what you would like to see fixed.

Runa