Ok, review responce:
Sakura30: Well, guess we'll have to deal with frence, wish mine'd leave ¬_¬;; Ah well, here's da next chappy.
Angel-Gaurdian: Death of the evil parent? Ooo, just you wait an see *grins*
Mittens no Hikari: AHH! Yugi puppy eyes! Ok, here's yer update!
heath 999: Heehee, thankies! Here's da update.
Red Roses2: Grr, don't say that Rain of Love! *Glomps Yugi* Poor Yugi! Well, tis update, and thankies for da review!
Imp is Insane: Me story cheered ya up? Goodie! Glad peeps like it that much ^^
ZetaBee: MUHAHA! Cliffies rule! Sorry ZB, but whacha gonna do?
Sorceress Vanessa: Thankies SV. Glad ya liked da chappy, and I hope yaz like this too. I'm threatened to use water ballons on that teach... Ah well, Only...4 more....years.... :'(
Disclaimer: I don't own Yu-Gi-Oh!
"This is talking"
'These are thoughts'
Yami fell to his knees and drew in deep breaths, passers by giving him odd looks. He had been running for so long, yet he didn't know how long. Taking in a deep breath, he pushed himself weakly to his feet, stumbling and leaning his shoulder against a lamp post for support. He lifted his hand in frount of him, then beside him, pushing himself away from the wall and forward, running at an unusually slow pace from his exaustion.
Yugi had been taken around five o' clock, and it was now dusk. Still he kept on going. If he lost the faint magic signal, it would be almost impossible to find it again. So he continued on, the signal getting weaker as he ran along the road in the countryside. His vision was blurred and he collapsed once again from exaustion to his knees, trying to push himself up again, but his arms gave way under him. "Yugi..." He mumbled before slipping into darkness.
Jirito looked back lazily at his son then back at the road ahead of him. "My home, about a mile outside Crimson City." he replied lazily.
Yugi's eyes went wide and his mouth fell open in shock. Crimson City?! That was miles away from Domino, and it didn't have a very good reputation. It had one of the highest crime levels around. Most of the people there have had a criminal record of some kind or another, and all those people were very nasty. Not to say they were all bad, there are a few good people, but not many. Even though they were outside the city, he still felt unsafe.
Then again, he didn't feel safe with his father either.
Finnally the car stopped. Yugi looked out but couldn't see much out the window. As he tried to see through the foged up window, the door opened and he yelled a bit from fright, jumping and pushing himself as far away from Jirito as he could. When he reached the other side of the car and his back hit the door, somethin slammed up against the window, fangs bared, barking loudly. Once again, he jumped away from fear, but this time Jirito caught his arm roughly and pulled him out of the car so he fell on the floor. A dobermen leapt around the side off the car and began barking madly at him. Yugi put his arm ovre his face to try and block whatever attack the dog swung at him, but he heard Jirito yelling at it before it fell silent.
Yugi looked up at him in confusion and he pointed at the dog, who had found a stuffed animal and was tearing and ripping it's head off. "This is Killer, and that's what he'll do to you if you try to leave." He warned, dragging Yugi to his feet and pulling him forward. The house didn't lok at all welcome, it was dark and cold, and surronded by a barbed wire fence. Yugi felt like he was in a prison, and he knew that's just what he might be treated like, a prisoner.
Closing his eyes, he once again tried to sence Yugi, but there was no signal. Getting worried now, he looked around. From what he could see, there weren't any crossroads or anything of the sort. Maybe he could find the signal again before he came to one. But then...they could be anywere by now. With that thought weighing on his mind, he walked in the dirrection he knew Yugi was, tring to save a bit of his strength.
Suddenly, he sneezed loudly and put his hand on his forehead. "Great...fever..." He mumbled, and shut his eyes, trying to clear his head. Stubbornly, he opened his eyes and continued on, but slowly as he began to feel dizzy.
What bugged him the most was, what did his father want with him? Why was he here?
To Be Continued
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