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Responce to reviews:
Shibby-One: Heehee, who don't hate cliffies? But ya gotta admit, they leave yaz in suspence sometimes ^^
Crimson-Eyed-Angel99: Me's not as busy this week, here's day update! A full week early to make up for the last chappy.
WolfKeeper989: Thankies for the complement. Hope yaz like this chappy.
starfire: ... This soon enough fo ya? Heehee ^^;;
Red Roses2: Whoope, silly typos ^^;; *Glares at Rain of Love then looks at Red Roses2 with 0.0 eyes* Yami?! dead?! Waa! *Cries* *Sniff* Here's da update.
ZetaBee: Can't say me's like YAOI, but now I can tollerate it without going mental. Here's ur update ^^
CrazyAboutYugi: *Looks around* Wonder were Yugi went, ah well, here's de update ^^
Sorceress Vanessa: Glad ya liked the chappy ^^ SV leave me fics fics alone, go cause havoc in your own ^^;; *Pets Koumori Dragon* My little angel =^^=
Koumori Dragon: *Growls at Seto, who backs away from the demon-like glare.*
Ashla: *Huggles Yami* Mine mine mine! Heehee, fine take the mallet, Yami's gonna help me find my own weapon, come of Yami! *Drags Yami off.*
Yami: Would somebody be so kind as to HELP ME?!?!
Disclaimer: I don't own Yu-Gi-Oh!
"This is talking"
'These are thoughts'
Yami jumped slightly as Yugi looked up and looked over at him. "What? What is it?" But Yugi made no response, he just stared straight ahead, eyes wide, but lifeless. "Yugi?" Yami said in a confused tone as Yugi began to walk away slowly, still in a state of hypnotism.
Yami ran after him, but found that when he put his hand on Yugi's shoulder, he just kept walking, overpowering him. This wasn't just Yugi, magic was taking control of him. "Jirito..." Yami growled, trying to stop Yugi, but to no avail. The wind began to swirl, not powerfully, but getting faster, and stronger.
Yugi was now out of the park, and standing in front of Kaiba Corporation, the tallest building in the city. Yami ran in front of Yugi and grabbed his shoulder, shaking him. "Yugi, snap out of it!" He yelled, and felt a sting of sadness in his heart as Yugi's eyes remained lifeless. Suddenly, the wind began to swirl like a small tornado, around Yugi, and knocking Yami away, but Yugi remained unaffected.
A dark shadow seemed to appear behind Yugi, forming the shape of a human before colour began to spread across it. Soon, the slightly transparent form of Jirito stood there, grinning over at Yami, who was pushing himself off the floor and onto his hands and knees. He placed a hand on Yugi's shoulder roughly and Yugi gasped, eyes returning to normal for mere seconds, only to show pain, before his eyes rolled back he hung limply, only being held up by Jirito.
Yami stood up, glaring at Jirito, but before he could speak, Jirito raised his hand and released a red ball of magic. When it struck Yami, it didn't hurt at first, but he found he couldn't move. He tried to move, but to no avail. He suddenly realised he was being lifted off the floor, and was now about fifteen feet off the floor, and still going higher. He no longer felt like he was frozen in one position, but he was now completely limp.
"I can't have you getting in my way..." Jirito, one arm raised with his palm facing Yami, the other around the now motionless form of Yugi as he began to drift off the floor himself below Yami. He swung his arm back, Yami being thrown through the air in the same direction, stopping only inches from the wall on the other side of the road, then tossed forward. Yami was sent flying forward towards Kaiba Corp., straight through one off the windows on one of the higher floors. "Now, it's your turn..." Jirito whispered, glaring down at Yugi.
Temporarily stunned from the attack, he made no attempt to move as dizziness swept over his mind. What happened for the next few minutes was all a blur to his half-conscious mind. He knew he had been moved, and was know lying down somewhere, but he couldn't register where. He could hear some voices, but they were inaudible.
Soon, the voices became clearer and his mind began to work properly again. He opened his eyes, but struggling to do so, and tried to clear his vision. He was lying on a couch, head on the armrest and a blanket over him. He turned his head to the side and spotted Seto and Mokuba standing not to far away with their backs to him, looking at the smashed window. He must have crashed into Kaiba's office. "Wow, I was up higher then I thought..."
"How did he manage to get this high up?"
"I don't know, but he's going to pay for it. He smashed my nights work and my window!" Seto yelled indicating to the remains of a computer on the floor and then at the window.
"That's it, you need sleep." Mokuba said shaking his head. His brother always got into weird and uncharacteristic moods when he was tired. Sort of acted like an eight year old sometimes.
"No I don't." Seto mumbled, folding his arms and looking away.
"Are you pouting again?"
"I am not pouting!"
Yami smiled as he looked at the two brothers, but he suddenly remembered what was happening before he was sent flying into Seto's office. "Yugi!"
Seto and Mokuba jumped as Yami's outburst, turning around to face him. Yami quickly got to his feet, but stumbled from dizziness. He leaned his shoulder against the wall to steady himself, taking deep breaths as Mokuba asked him what was wrong. "Yugi...danger..." Was all he could say as he began to feel faint. Shaking his head to remain conscious, he began to walk towards the door, hand against the wall.
"Wait a minute, do you even know were Yugi is?" Seto asked, now seemingly back to himself.
Yami stopped and closed his eyes, concentrating as hard as he could on the Millennium Puzzle. But he suddenly got a strong wave of magic from it. It wasn't far away. Confused, he tried to since the source. He opened his eyes. "The roof." He whispered looking up at the ceiling. "He's going to through him off the building!" Yami yelled as he began to run off towards the stairs, all pain forgotten, but dizziness slowing him progress.
"There's no reason to worry, your life will be over soon." He said with a laugh that made Yugi shiver, but he continued to try and pull Jirito's hand away from his mouth while kicking at him, though he knew it was useless. He moved Jirito's hand from his mouth and took in a deep breath, "Help!" he called, tears falling and his voice shaky, he called again, but his voice was barely audible as he shivered in fear.
"Call and cry all you want, there's no one to save you now..." Jirito whispered in Yugi's ear as he walked to the edge of the building and looked down. The street wasn't very busy, but that suited Jirito just fine. He moved his hand and grabbed Yugi by the collar of his shirt, holding him out at arms length away from the building. Yugi tried to grab Jirito's wrist for a little more support, but found his hand went right through him. He looked down at the ground below him and his breaths became shorter as the realisation of the situation really began to hit him. Panicking, he made a vain attempt to reach back towards the building.
Jirito grinned and glanced downwards then back at Yugi. "Say goodbye." He said, his eyes glowing and causing Yugi to feel weak as his energy was drained, and with that, he began to become more transparent, until he was completely gone, and Yugi fell.
Desperately, Yugi reached out and was able to catch the side of the wall with one hand, hitting his head off the wall as he did so. He hung there, slightly dazed, before he shook his head and reached up his other hand for the wall. It was hard to keep a hold on the wall. He could feel his grip loosening and his eyes drooping as his energy left him. He struggled to keep a hold of the wall, heart pounding in terror, but once one hand lost its grip, he knew he was done for. Closing his eyes, he whispered to someone unknown, even to him. "Please... help me..."
His grip was loosened, he felt gravity begin to pull on him, and he prepared to breathe his final breath. But suddenly, he felt a warm hand grab his left wrist, the arm that had just lost grip. He hung their, barely enough strength to keep himself conscious, the person who was trying to save him didn't seem to be attempting to pull him up. He was confused, no one else was here but Jirito, was there? He heard his name being called. It was Yami calling him. Suddenly, someone grabbed his hand and began to pull him up, the hand around his wrist disappearing quickly, as if it had faded. Looking up, he saw a blurred figure of Yami, trying to pull Yugi up, but not succeeding. Yugi froze as he saw Yami begin to fall down also, but was relieved to see Seto and Mokuba had caught him before he did.
The next thing he knew, he was sitting on the roof of Kaiba Corp., Yami had his arm around him, trying to comfort him as he realised he was still crying. Seto and Mokuba were looking at him, confused, but also looked sort of relieved. What had just happened? Rightfully, he should have died just there. Yami must have caught him just as he was about to fall, but that's not what it felt like...
He began to realise just how exhausted he was, and looked weakly up at Yami. Smiling, he whispered, "Thank you..." Before falling forward into unconsciousness.
To Be Continued
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The next one most likely be half as long, but hey, yaz never know.
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