*Some people think it's pathetic to write my own reviews so I have stopped
doing that. To I am myself: when I type the story it isn't in a paragraph
but when I load it onto fanfic the story just appears like that. I can't
help it. I don't like it either. If you know how to fix the problem
please do tell me. Ok well here's the story. Oh ya and I don't own any of
these characters except Kaley her mom and Nikki*
Their eyes locked, and they just stood there staring at each other until they heard another smack. Kaley turned around to see Bob rubbing the side of his face, and Cherry yelling, "you knew he was cheating on Marcia!" Kaley then turned back around to see the blue-eyed devil had disappeared. Kaley whispered to Cherry that she was going to leave and hurriedly left the Dingo. She could still hear them all fighting as she got into her car and drove off.
Kaley needed to think and there was only one place she could do that. She drove over to the park in greaser territory. They didn't really care if she was on their turf since she wasn't a soc. Kaley parked her car on the street and walked over to the fountain in the middle of the park. For some reason she found it peaceful there even though there were so many loud noises like parents fighting or music blaring. This place brought peace to her world. Just looking into the fountain helped her relax. She needed to sort out the night's events and what she needed to do about them. So she made of list of the things that had a happened. 1. My sister was very nice, and I need to do something for her. 2. Randy is a creep and cheated on Marcia. I never will go out with him again. 3. I need to tell Cherry to find out all the facts about a guy before she sets me up again. 4. I still hate Bob. 5. The thing that had been on her mind the whole night. The blue eyed devil. She didn't know what to do about him, but judging on what she learned about him she would see him again. Her thoughts were then disturbed by metal on metal. She glanced off to where the sound had come from. There stood a person running a knife along a car. Kaley had no idea why he was using his knife. She thought it was pretty stupid of him. Didn't he know that would screw up the blade she thought to herself? Oh god Kaley then realized that was her car. Kaley's thoughts shifted to what her parents would do. They would totally freak. She ran over to her car not knowing what she was going to do. The streetlight hit the guys face. The guy had a huge scar running down his face. She had seen him before, but didn't remember his name. He heard her, and turned around. The guy looked drunk. No wonder he was using his knife Kaley thought. It looked like he would run at her with the knife any second. He had a crazed look in his eye. Kaley didn't know what to do. She couldn't call for anyone since the guy was obviously a greaser. She was frozen not able to move. The guy who she just remembered his name or at least thought she remembered it was Tim Shepherd. He started walking toward her. She still stood there just like a dear with a car coming strait at it. When Tim fell to the ground. He had tripped on something. She looked around to see what when her eyes met with a pair of ice cold blue ones. The blue eyed devil. He knelt down and picked up Tim's knife, which he had dropped when he fell. B.E.D. (blue eyed devil) got up and stood there. It seemed to Kaley that Tim was unconscious, but still kept her eye on him. She heard Tim groan and jumped. Kaley looked down at him. Tim was starting to get up. She looked back to see what the B.E.D. was doing but found that he was gone. She ran past Tim and hopped into her car she drove off feeling confused, scared, but somehow safe.
Their eyes locked, and they just stood there staring at each other until they heard another smack. Kaley turned around to see Bob rubbing the side of his face, and Cherry yelling, "you knew he was cheating on Marcia!" Kaley then turned back around to see the blue-eyed devil had disappeared. Kaley whispered to Cherry that she was going to leave and hurriedly left the Dingo. She could still hear them all fighting as she got into her car and drove off.
Kaley needed to think and there was only one place she could do that. She drove over to the park in greaser territory. They didn't really care if she was on their turf since she wasn't a soc. Kaley parked her car on the street and walked over to the fountain in the middle of the park. For some reason she found it peaceful there even though there were so many loud noises like parents fighting or music blaring. This place brought peace to her world. Just looking into the fountain helped her relax. She needed to sort out the night's events and what she needed to do about them. So she made of list of the things that had a happened. 1. My sister was very nice, and I need to do something for her. 2. Randy is a creep and cheated on Marcia. I never will go out with him again. 3. I need to tell Cherry to find out all the facts about a guy before she sets me up again. 4. I still hate Bob. 5. The thing that had been on her mind the whole night. The blue eyed devil. She didn't know what to do about him, but judging on what she learned about him she would see him again. Her thoughts were then disturbed by metal on metal. She glanced off to where the sound had come from. There stood a person running a knife along a car. Kaley had no idea why he was using his knife. She thought it was pretty stupid of him. Didn't he know that would screw up the blade she thought to herself? Oh god Kaley then realized that was her car. Kaley's thoughts shifted to what her parents would do. They would totally freak. She ran over to her car not knowing what she was going to do. The streetlight hit the guys face. The guy had a huge scar running down his face. She had seen him before, but didn't remember his name. He heard her, and turned around. The guy looked drunk. No wonder he was using his knife Kaley thought. It looked like he would run at her with the knife any second. He had a crazed look in his eye. Kaley didn't know what to do. She couldn't call for anyone since the guy was obviously a greaser. She was frozen not able to move. The guy who she just remembered his name or at least thought she remembered it was Tim Shepherd. He started walking toward her. She still stood there just like a dear with a car coming strait at it. When Tim fell to the ground. He had tripped on something. She looked around to see what when her eyes met with a pair of ice cold blue ones. The blue eyed devil. He knelt down and picked up Tim's knife, which he had dropped when he fell. B.E.D. (blue eyed devil) got up and stood there. It seemed to Kaley that Tim was unconscious, but still kept her eye on him. She heard Tim groan and jumped. Kaley looked down at him. Tim was starting to get up. She looked back to see what the B.E.D. was doing but found that he was gone. She ran past Tim and hopped into her car she drove off feeling confused, scared, but somehow safe.