Me: I know this idea has been used over and over again but I wanted to try
it.
Bakura: Or because everybody stopped reviewing her other story.
Me: Shut up! Well this is my bio. My name is Kotori Susayki I have bright green eyes, pitch-black hair, and pale skin. I'm wearing a blue mini skirt, a white spaghetti strap shirt, black boots and the millennium bracelet. I'm CEO of Susayki Corp. and Seto Kaiba's girlfriend. Now for the disclaimer.
Disclaimer: Kotori doesn't own Yu-Gi-Oh
Anzu: Tea
Bakura: Yami Bakura
Marik: Evil Marik
Malik: Good Marik
This is set when the gang is 17.
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It was another boring summer day in Domino. The gang was at the Kame game shop
doing nothing. "I am soooo bored!" whined a blue-eyed girl. "The rest of us are to Anzu,
and I for one are open to any suggestions on what to do." Said Yugi. " How 'bout we go
to Burger World?" said Joey. " We went there yesterday, and besides we just had lunch,"
pointed out Malik. " I know why don't we go on a road trip? We're certainly old enough
to." Suggested Kotori. " You know she's right." Said Kaiba " Was there ever any
doubt?" said Kotori. " Well." started Bakura "It was a rhetorical question." Interrupted
Kotori. " That's a great idea, but do we have enough cars for 14 people?" asked Duke.
" We could get one of those really big vans." Said Serenity. "Great idea!" exclaimed
Ryou. The next day after the gang had told their parents that they were going on a road
trip and gotten the van. They all piled their stuff in trunk and got into the van. This is the
order going from left to right starting from the drivers seat. First row: Seto and Kotori.
Second row: Malik, Marik, Bakura, and Ryou. Third row Duke, Yami, Yugi, and Anzu.
Fourth row: Mokuba, Serenity, Joey, and Tristen. "Joey." started Tristen. " No!" said
Joey. " But you didn't even know what I was going to ask!" said Tristen. " Yes I do, you
were going to ask me if you could trade seat with me and sit next to Serenity. And the
answer is no." said Joey. " Hey where's my knife?!" exclaimed Bakura " Oh, I threw it
out the window 10 miles back ." said Kotori. " Why you little." started Bakura. They
all heard a hissing sound and the car stopped. " I think the cars broken." Said Duke.
" Thank you captain of the obvious." Replied Joey. Everybody got out of the car to
check the damage. "Joey you're guy go see if there's anything wrong with the engine."
Said Anzu while pushing toward the hood of the car. Joey checked out the engine then
said, " It's kaput." " I'll call a tow." Kotori suddenly said, "Hello? Yes we need a tow
that's why I called. No. Yes that's the street? The engine died. How long? Are you sure
you can't get something sooner. Okay. Yes. Mmm. Goodbye." Kotori closed her cell
phone. " Kotori how long will it take for the tow truck to come?" asked Mokuba. " One
hour." Said Kotori. "So what are we going to do while we wait?" asked Ryou. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ** * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Please give me suggestion, ideas anything to make this story better. And could anybody tell me what a BETA reader is? Review!
Bakura: Or because everybody stopped reviewing her other story.
Me: Shut up! Well this is my bio. My name is Kotori Susayki I have bright green eyes, pitch-black hair, and pale skin. I'm wearing a blue mini skirt, a white spaghetti strap shirt, black boots and the millennium bracelet. I'm CEO of Susayki Corp. and Seto Kaiba's girlfriend. Now for the disclaimer.
Disclaimer: Kotori doesn't own Yu-Gi-Oh
Anzu: Tea
Bakura: Yami Bakura
Marik: Evil Marik
Malik: Good Marik
This is set when the gang is 17.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ** * * *
It was another boring summer day in Domino. The gang was at the Kame game shop
doing nothing. "I am soooo bored!" whined a blue-eyed girl. "The rest of us are to Anzu,
and I for one are open to any suggestions on what to do." Said Yugi. " How 'bout we go
to Burger World?" said Joey. " We went there yesterday, and besides we just had lunch,"
pointed out Malik. " I know why don't we go on a road trip? We're certainly old enough
to." Suggested Kotori. " You know she's right." Said Kaiba " Was there ever any
doubt?" said Kotori. " Well." started Bakura "It was a rhetorical question." Interrupted
Kotori. " That's a great idea, but do we have enough cars for 14 people?" asked Duke.
" We could get one of those really big vans." Said Serenity. "Great idea!" exclaimed
Ryou. The next day after the gang had told their parents that they were going on a road
trip and gotten the van. They all piled their stuff in trunk and got into the van. This is the
order going from left to right starting from the drivers seat. First row: Seto and Kotori.
Second row: Malik, Marik, Bakura, and Ryou. Third row Duke, Yami, Yugi, and Anzu.
Fourth row: Mokuba, Serenity, Joey, and Tristen. "Joey." started Tristen. " No!" said
Joey. " But you didn't even know what I was going to ask!" said Tristen. " Yes I do, you
were going to ask me if you could trade seat with me and sit next to Serenity. And the
answer is no." said Joey. " Hey where's my knife?!" exclaimed Bakura " Oh, I threw it
out the window 10 miles back ." said Kotori. " Why you little." started Bakura. They
all heard a hissing sound and the car stopped. " I think the cars broken." Said Duke.
" Thank you captain of the obvious." Replied Joey. Everybody got out of the car to
check the damage. "Joey you're guy go see if there's anything wrong with the engine."
Said Anzu while pushing toward the hood of the car. Joey checked out the engine then
said, " It's kaput." " I'll call a tow." Kotori suddenly said, "Hello? Yes we need a tow
that's why I called. No. Yes that's the street? The engine died. How long? Are you sure
you can't get something sooner. Okay. Yes. Mmm. Goodbye." Kotori closed her cell
phone. " Kotori how long will it take for the tow truck to come?" asked Mokuba. " One
hour." Said Kotori. "So what are we going to do while we wait?" asked Ryou. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ** * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Please give me suggestion, ideas anything to make this story better. And could anybody tell me what a BETA reader is? Review!